Ellette Giselle

@mineralizedwritings

Oh my goodness!

He’s so cool In almost a…. hmmm….. not quite creepy….. maybe, in a shivery way. lol.

He’s very cool and very eye catching. Quite the interesting picture! I like it!

@rae

I know that was rash of Baron, but he’s a soloest so he doesn’t understand teamwork

See, this is what Leon was thinking when he was worried about Baron joining their team.

@liberty

I’m so glad you like it.

Yes, Marta was alright. lol.

@hybridlore

Oh that looks so good!

I’m glad you found something you can use.

@raxforge

No problem. I just thought it was funny. You should see the grammar mistakes in my stuff.

@freed_and_redeemed

Oh that’s so sad.

Poor Hans.

Poor boys all of them.

@raxforge

There’s still a grammar mistake! 😆

It’s “Lord Quakers!” Rax walked towards the gloomy

@hybridlore

Power’s the oldest.

@hybridlore

@linus-smallprint

How did I know y’all were going to say this.

What did I tell you, Hybridlore? I said, I’m trying to work on the next section, but Linus is going to make me redo it and add some fillers.

grrrr.

Okay. Hmmm.

I’ll cut that scene you both agree on.

I’ll try to fill in some Joseph and Amelia stuff.

How much…

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@linus-smallprint

Just met the second crow, but I’m pausing to call something.

I think it’s his mother.

Maybe.

Also, I think you’re missing something?

He remembered the day General Pownce had given it to him. On that day, the lyen general had

Maybe “had said”

Oh shoot.

Linus!!!! WHY! I am furious with you right now. Just…[Read more]

@grcr

Nice.

@hybridlore

You sure did.It wasn’t a hard one tho.

Hmmm. I see what you mean.

I might switch that.

We’ll see what @linus-smallprint says.

Thanks so much for the feedback!

@koshka

Okay then!

Looking forward to reading it!

@koshka

did my post go through?

kp was acting up really bad the day i sent it.

@freed_and_redeemed

SNOWBALL   8X!!!!!!!!!!!!!

@rae

Times four!!!!

Are you joking!!?

lol

@liberty

                  Josef swung his suitcase and whistled cheerily as he made his way up the drive toward his home. The two months of training had passed, and now he would have ten days with his family before he began his work. Josef had told Rosemarie he was coming home that week, but he had…

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NEXT SECTION!

Time continued to pass, and the days grew warmer and longer. Joseph thrived as he spent his days working hard in the fields and the evening studying with his brothers in Christ, or fellowshipping with the Caddick family. It was during this time t…

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@esther-c

You’re welcome. I’m glad you like it!

@power

That is so cool!

@rae

Oh my goodness. Adorable!!!

@hybridlore

you’re very welcome!!

I can’t wait to see which ones you choose!