Elfwing

@freed_and_redeemed not me somehow forgetting Riker is German lollllll

how is that even possible to forget

@stephie lol

poor character

and that was probably not helpful at all, so.

@stephie

TBH, Whaley, Ellette and Koshka are all basically saying riffs on the same thing from what I can tell. It’s ok to have a girl fighting if she needs to (or if she thinks she needs to, which could be an important character arc), but don’t make her into what’s basically a guy with long hair and wide hips. (I mean, like the judge Deborah in…[Read more]

@stephie oooh I love the poems!

@stephie yessss

@theducktator Executed for treason? Yikes. I’d hate to be the pecans.

@raxforge

“….the long lost cousin from Australia who was in jail for arson and wants to burn down the White House.”

Hey! That’s me!

oh so I guess you’re Sniper and Huntress’s child, then. (RAE’s told you about them right?)

@elishavet-pidyon ooooh I like…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle LOLLLLLLL

they would so do that though

@linus-smallprint What I meant by “breaks immersion” is that I didn’t really want to pay attention to the spells. They have no use to me. They’re deeply evil in Alan’s world and useless in mine, so what reason do I have for needing them in my memory?

Also the part about the writer changing them didn’t make sense to me. Why not just not write…[Read more]

I’m kinda in between Whaley and Ellette on this. They both have good points I agree with.

It’s your call, Linus. Your story is the one on the line.

@whalekeeper I get that and to some extent agree. It’s just the inclusion of a detailed description of the spells kinda broke immersion for me a little. It didn’t seem THAT necessary.

@ellette-giselle

Oh why! Must it be a hand or foot? And why talons! Can’t you just restrict the movement! This is horrible. If he and Martha do get married, how is he supposed to hug her without slicing her back?!?!?

*feels slightly offended for the 90% of my characters that have talons*

I’M KIDDING I’M KIDDING

I mean, I have a c…[Read more]

@linus-smallprint Hmm, this was interesting.

How do Alan’s friends feel about this?

Does he realize how guilty he’ll be when he wakes up? I mean, he just dedicated his life to God and swore off magic a few chapters ago.

I’m not sure how I feel about the spells being as descriptive as they are. I had no problem with it, personally, although it…[Read more]

Does anyone here like warrior cats??

cause I have an expansive list of virtually every warrior cat name I have ever come up with…

They’re characters derived from tons of other fandoms, but run through the naming system of the Warriors books. Star Wars, Marvel, Keeper of the Lost Cities, Tron, Jurassic World, you name it. Various random video…[Read more]

@the_lost-journal don’t worry, people in this world aren’t walking around with bullet holes all over. that’d be a little too creepy for the frivolous nature of the story.

Luckily for you, I was just thinking about changing it out for something less threatening, but I haven’t ironed out what yet.

I have no idea how many snowballs I was hit with so…….

I’ll come back with 200 or more words. LOL.

@elishavet-pidyon

That’s a very pretty board! I like the dove in the corner.

(boy don’t I have a thing for shepherds. XD)

No shame in that. All my main characters are some form of soldier or warrior. XD at least yours have a more or less peacetime job.

@whalekeeper

one does not simply EXIST IN THE SAME UNIVERSE as their crush.

Barnes is brave just for that.

also hey, you have a mask, I have a security blanket (but only when I’m at my house). No shame in that.

Marcel’s is so accurate though lolllll

I think I ran out of letters to use so I couldn’t properly credit him for the quote lol

@the_lost-journal He’s an assassin. A sniper to be exact, so he specializes in hitting people from far away. The only thing is, he and all his targets kinda respawn because they’ve basically been put into a flesh and blood video game. So he’s joking that he’s shot them down so many times, he’s losing track of where he got them this time and is ru…[Read more]