Elfwing

@rae

I’ll make a full reply later since I’m angry at myself rn, and when I get angry, most ppl think it’s at them. Same with disappointment.

It’s ok, I totally get it! And don’t be angry at yourself, we’ve all had those moments. Sometimes I get really frustrated with whatever I’m doing and get super mad at my story and self for it not being what…[Read more]

I’ll try later lol

Oops it’s not working lol. so sorry about that!

Retry:

Also, here’s a drawing of my characters! ( thought you might like to see)

Top 5 Myths to Avoid When Writing about Grief

Here’s another one, I hope these help! (they’re what I can find lol)

Three Ways to Use Subtext to “Show, Don’t Tell”

this one may help, I’ll go look for some others, I can’t find the old stuff 😪

@rae

Hi! I finally finished the critique!

Evening came, leaving the Banorian landscape lit by flickering torches under a deep blue sky. The trees still rippled in the wind, but they were now just dark shadows.

Nahim walked away from where he had left Mandin, the Ward in the annual meeting at the close of this festive day. He was invited by…[Read more]

@grcr yeah, I remember her from the books.

oh, and on your signature, the “did the sun come up in the west?” sounds like something me and my brother’s character Goose would say. He has immense power over basically anything he wants but is super clueless about it…..

@rae

cool

Like Anakin Skywalker’s, or Echo’s except with a hand instead of a plugin thing?

(sorry for replying so late)

@freedomwriter76 thanks!!

@jonas I know!!

That and Shrek. (at least I’ve seen a lot of memes and stuff involving that)

It’s so weird, right?

@jonas lol I don’t have a problem with the idea, it was just funny to me that it was like that

@rae don’t know if I got to comment on that drawing. She looks cool!

NGL, it would be a cool idea, but…….

@jonas your idea sounds wayyy too close to a certain mobile game……lol

Are you sure you want this to turn into an Among Us roleplay?

(I don’t play that game but I know how it works.)

@grcr where’d you get the name Tsunami? It’s pretty cool.

@smiley nice.

I see a teeny bit of clone wars style in there….?

@rae

Hi!

I just wanted to let you know that I finished reading the second half of chapter two, and I’ll get started on giving you my thoughts, sorry this has taken so long!