Elanor

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What can i do to make my dialogue better and less choppy to read and flow better ?

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It’s about a bunch of princesses at this tournament for ultimate glory and bragging rights of their kingdom. There’s a lot more to it but I’m trying to shorten it as much as possible. But I could go on for hours. lol

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Yes, actually! I’m working on my YA Sci-Fi/Fantasy novel. I’m only at about 15,000 words so far, but I’m getting closer and closer to finishing my first draft every day.

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That’s cool! Ever defender that I’ve known has been an awesome person, I’m sure you’ll be the same! 🙂

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Oh, sorry, I guess I should explain myself, huh? 😉

An ENFP is a Myers-Briggs personality type. Each letter stands for a trait.

E = extraverted

N = intuitive

F= feeling

P = prospecting

I highly suggest taking the test yourself to figure out your type! It can be very informative and revealing about yourself.

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@elanor Nice, nice! Glad you’ve picked it back up!

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Hello, Lilly, I’m Evelyn! I’m a 14 year old, ENFP, chocolate lover. I hope you enjoy KP! 🙂

@elanor I’ve been maybe writing 5-6 years? What about you?

Oo, yes, those books are really awesome! I enjoy being taken for a ride where I don’t know what will happen.

@elanor I play piano and do ballet! I write mainly crime, fantasy, and school life stories.

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Hi! It’s awesome to have you! I’m Kathleen, and I totally understand the struggle of getting the story in your head out some what readable on paper. XD But shifting my focus on the characters and writing the story from their eyes and mind always helps me a lot.

It’s so cool all the worldbuilding you did for your story. Does worldbuilding…[Read more]

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Hi, Lilly! Welcome to the forum! I’m Lydia. 😀

Ah, yes, J.R.R. Tolkien is the best! (In my humble opinion, he was one of the greatest novelists ever. 🙂) Love your signature and profile picture, by the way.

Here are a few questions for you, if you feel like answering them:

1) Who are your top three favorite authors?

2) What is your…[Read more]

@elanor Whoa, that’s so cool! You must have an awesome collection!

@elanor Lovely movie choices! And yes, Hallmark, does, uh, kind of suck. At least for me.

Those desserts sound delicious! And vanilla is seriously good.

Oo, rocks! What’s the most interesting rock that you have?

@elanor Dragons! I love dragons! Nice to meet you, by the way! I’m Linyang, but most here call me Lin! Lovely to make your acquaintance!

As @joy-caroline has beaten me to some of my common welcoming questions, I’ll greet you with these:

1. What are some of your favorite movies?

2. Any particularly delectable desserts you’ve tried before?

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