@elanor
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Allison replied to the topic Prayer Requests for Anyone in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 1 year, 2 months ago
Ill be praying <3
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Allison replied to the topic Christmas!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 2 months ago
Great topic!!
How do you celebrate Christmas Eve/Christmas? (family gatherings, church services, other fun traditions?)- We usually have all our grandparents over, but since we moved were just by ourselves. And we always watch the “Muppets Christmas Carol” and have Hawaiian pizza (No idea why) .
Did your family do Santa Claus (or…[Read more]
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Allison replied to the topic Writer quotes! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 2 months ago
“No tears in the writer, no tears in the reader. No surprise in the writer, no surprise in the reader.”
― Robert Frost“When I sit down to write a book, I do not say to myself, ‘I am going to produce a work of art.’ I write it because there is some lie that I want to expose, some fact to which I want to draw attention, and my initial c…[Read more]
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Allison replied to the topic Break the Record!!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 2 months ago
We did it!!!!!
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Allison replied to the topic Break the Record!!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 2 months ago
Were there! I guess we need 13….
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Allison replied to the topic Break the Record!!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 2 months ago
Ack, Mom just said dinner when were ready so I might not be on at 5
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Allison replied to the topic Break the Record!!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 2 months ago
Yeah, we eat really early.😅
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Allison replied to the topic Break the Record!!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 2 months ago
Were already so close!
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Allison replied to the topic Break the Record!!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 2 months ago
Im also EST and 5 is usually around our dinner time. Hopefully I can make it…
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Allison posted an update 1 year, 2 months ago
“Hey Dad, will you buy me a flame thrower?
Of course not. Don’t be silly.
Even if I didn’t use it in the house?”
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Allison replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 2 months ago
Heres the answers to your questions!
1. Is it boring??- Nope! I love the characters and how you describe the little things like the table, the trees the overall feel of the room.
2. Is Sef relatable?- Yes! As I’m reading, theres parts that pop out to me like ‘Oh I act just like that, I know how that feels.’ Like when Sefs…[Read more]
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Allison replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 2 months ago
@esther-c @freedomwriter76 @mineralizedwritings @savannah_grace2009 @grcr @highscribeofaetherium @jonas @whalekeeper @euodia-vision @hybridlore @loopylin @trailblazer @rae @janellebelovedpig @felicity @karissa-chmil @landric @booksbyjayna @everyone!
I DID IT!! I’M DONE WITH THE ROUGH DRAFT OF MY FIRST NOVEL!!!!!!!Oh my gosh this is so…[Read more]
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Allison replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 2 months ago
THANK YOU SO MUCH!!! I’m typing the last words now😭
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Allison replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 2 months ago
Thank you so much! 💗
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Allison replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 2 months ago
YES!😭 I’m finishing my big novel up right now!!! Its 85k words unedited so I’m feeling pretty good about the length.
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Allison posted an update 1 year, 2 months ago
I cant take the suspense!
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Allison replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 2 months ago
I just read your chapter above… ERICH!! He may be another one of my favorites…
Ahh, well, you’ll come up with something😊
I did! Luckily I remembered that we have melt and pour soap and other craft supplies.
Yep, sure is! I’ve had these characters and stuff for a while (and several of the characters also appeared in Fre…
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Allison replied to the topic My Work In Progress in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 2 months ago
Thats totally ok, go with what God wants you to do! The second chapter eased you more into the action which is also a very good type of introduction😊
I kind of am still a little worried that nobody will like it the other way XD
Dont worry, I do! Think of really popular books like Harry Potter, J.K. Rowling didn’t jump right…[Read more]
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Allison replied to the topic My Work In Progress in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 2 months ago
it’s all true though…I became such a better writer when I joined KP and after talking to all of you guys!!
I did to! I dont think I would have ever got this is close to finishing without everyone on here <3
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Allison replied to the topic My Work In Progress in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 2 months ago
Ok, I read them both. The first one does pull me in better and I want to read more, but I just love the description and feel of the second, however, it may be a bit slow for the beginning chapter. That’s all I have for now, I will go over it more later today if I have time!
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Hey!! How does it feel to be done with your NOVEL????
Great! A little bit weird though, I have been doing it for nearly a year. Now I’m just rewriting scenes I dont like, filling in the blanks which is really fun! Hows your writing?
My writing’s going pretty good, I’ve been doing some major work on the first couple chapters, just making the prose better and making descriptions more vivid…I just really love that first chapter (the one I shared on the Chat Chat) for some reason…XD
I do to! Its so realistic and sweet.
If you want to, I really dont know what to think of this scene I wrote. I feel like I can do more with it, any points would be appreciated 😀
(I warn you, Its a little tense)
All the air seemed to drain out of my lungs. My limbs went limp with fear and I could barely register the clouds and dark sky that were around me.
This was it, this was…[Read more]
Oops forgot your tag @savannah_grace2009