@elanor
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Allison replied to the topic Break the Record!!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 11 months, 1 week ago
Yeah, we eat really early.😅
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Allison replied to the topic Break the Record!!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 11 months, 1 week ago
Were already so close!
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Allison replied to the topic Break the Record!!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 11 months, 1 week ago
Im also EST and 5 is usually around our dinner time. Hopefully I can make it…
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Allison posted an update 11 months, 1 week ago
“Hey Dad, will you buy me a flame thrower?
Of course not. Don’t be silly.
Even if I didn’t use it in the house?”
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Allison replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 11 months, 1 week ago
Heres the answers to your questions!
1. Is it boring??- Nope! I love the characters and how you describe the little things like the table, the trees the overall feel of the room.
2. Is Sef relatable?- Yes! As I’m reading, theres parts that pop out to me like ‘Oh I act just like that, I know how that feels.’ Like when Sefs…[Read more]
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Allison replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 11 months, 1 week ago
@esther-c @freedomwriter76 @mineralizedwritings @savannah_grace2009 @grcr @highscribeofaetherium @jonas @whalekeeper @euodia-vision @hybridlore @loopylin @trailblazer @rae @janellebelovedpig @felicity @karissa-chmil @landric @booksbyjayna @everyone!
I DID IT!! I’M DONE WITH THE ROUGH DRAFT OF MY FIRST NOVEL!!!!!!!Oh my gosh this is so…[Read more]
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Allison replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 11 months, 1 week ago
THANK YOU SO MUCH!!! I’m typing the last words now😭
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Allison replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 11 months, 1 week ago
Thank you so much! 💗
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Allison replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 11 months, 1 week ago
YES!😭 I’m finishing my big novel up right now!!! Its 85k words unedited so I’m feeling pretty good about the length.
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Allison posted an update 11 months, 1 week ago
I cant take the suspense!
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Allison replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 11 months, 1 week ago
I just read your chapter above… ERICH!! He may be another one of my favorites…
Ahh, well, you’ll come up with something😊
I did! Luckily I remembered that we have melt and pour soap and other craft supplies.
Yep, sure is! I’ve had these characters and stuff for a while (and several of the characters also appeared in Fre…
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Allison replied to the topic My Work In Progress in the forum Novel Critique Requests 11 months, 1 week ago
Thats totally ok, go with what God wants you to do! The second chapter eased you more into the action which is also a very good type of introduction😊
I kind of am still a little worried that nobody will like it the other way XD
Dont worry, I do! Think of really popular books like Harry Potter, J.K. Rowling didn’t jump right…[Read more]
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Allison replied to the topic My Work In Progress in the forum Novel Critique Requests 11 months, 1 week ago
it’s all true though…I became such a better writer when I joined KP and after talking to all of you guys!!
I did to! I dont think I would have ever got this is close to finishing without everyone on here <3
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Allison replied to the topic My Work In Progress in the forum Novel Critique Requests 11 months, 1 week ago
Ok, I read them both. The first one does pull me in better and I want to read more, but I just love the description and feel of the second, however, it may be a bit slow for the beginning chapter. That’s all I have for now, I will go over it more later today if I have time!
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Allison replied to the topic My Work In Progress in the forum Novel Critique Requests 11 months, 1 week ago
This is supposed to say “feel free to tag me in any post”…so yeah…XD
Dont worry, I understood XD I make errors like that all the time 😂
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Allison replied to the topic My Work In Progress in the forum Novel Critique Requests 11 months, 1 week ago
Awww your dedication and acknowledgement is so sweet 🥰
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Allison replied to the topic My Work In Progress in the forum Novel Critique Requests 11 months, 1 week ago
I have skimmed through these pages here and read pieces of your WIP and I have to say… I love them! Your really good at describing the way things look and feel. I will defiantly look through your link and give my critique 🙂 And pretty soon I will be posting some of mine to get feedback, I’ll be sure to tag you 🙂
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Allison posted an update 11 months, 1 week ago
@freedomwriter76
Hi! We haven’t chatted in a while. I was wondering how you are doing? You ready for the holidays? <3-
@freedomwriter76
I cant see any of your replies on the comments, they pop up in my email but not on here.. (I think also a while ago you chatted me and asked how I was doing and I couldn’t see it and I feel so bad that I never responded 😂) I got the one you sent me today too in my email…
Anyway, I’m sorry your weekend was rough, if you ever…[Read more]
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Allison replied to the topic Prayer Requests for Anyone in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 11 months, 1 week ago
Ouch! Ill be praying for you, hope you recover quickly <3
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Allison replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 11 months, 1 week ago
I know it probably has to happen….but it’s going to like destroy poor Hugo…
It will destroy him, and it will also alter his personality in many ways 😭
(I mean at least Vikii can comfort him…still it’s sad though)
Exactly! I feel like having Vikii will make the future story better, (My brother is trying to convince me to write…[Read more]
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Hey!! How does it feel to be done with your NOVEL????
Great! A little bit weird though, I have been doing it for nearly a year. Now I’m just rewriting scenes I dont like, filling in the blanks which is really fun! Hows your writing?
My writing’s going pretty good, I’ve been doing some major work on the first couple chapters, just making the prose better and making descriptions more vivid…I just really love that first chapter (the one I shared on the Chat Chat) for some reason…XD
I do to! Its so realistic and sweet.
If you want to, I really dont know what to think of this scene I wrote. I feel like I can do more with it, any points would be appreciated 😀
(I warn you, Its a little tense)
All the air seemed to drain out of my lungs. My limbs went limp with fear and I could barely register the clouds and dark sky that were around me.
This was it, this was…[Read more]
Oops forgot your tag @savannah_grace2009