@elanor
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Charityanne replied to the topic Autumn in the forum Poetry Critiques 3 years, 3 months ago
very nice!
there where a few places that didn’t quite rhyme quite right but overall I LOVE it!
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Charityanne replied to the topic A kitten in the forum Poetry Critiques 3 years, 3 months ago
Thank you!
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Charityanne replied to the topic Autumn in the forum Poetry Critiques 3 years, 3 months ago
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Charityanne replied to the topic A kitten in the forum Poetry Critiques 3 years, 3 months ago
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Charityanne replied to the topic A kitten in the forum Poetry Critiques 3 years, 3 months ago
Yes the poem is called A Kitten.😊
If you’re referring to where to pause in each paragraph that would be where the commas are.
hope that’s what you were looking for.
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Charityanne started the topic A kitten in the forum Poetry Critiques 3 years, 3 months ago
I stretch and yawn and run about I’m small and cute to see, I love to leave my small footprints wherever you have cleaned.
I sit and cuddle in your lap when I think it’s convenient, I know that I must be the best ‘cause to me you’re very lenient.
And when you are angry with me, I’m bashful on the spot, no one could ever keep a grudge against s…[Read more]
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Charityanne replied to the topic Poem Critique in the forum Poetry Critiques 3 years, 3 months ago
Beautifully done! Amazing! Inspiring! Dazzling! Marvelous!
very good very good👏🏼👏🏼👏🏼
Applause everyone applause!
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Charityanne started the topic Autumn in the forum Poetry Critiques 3 years, 3 months ago
A rustling wind, a shuddering chill, a woodpeckers knock on your windowsill…
The golden brown fields in the sun and the rain, like deer running past is the weather today…
A clear autumn sky full of dazzling stars, with seasons like this aren’t we glad that they’re ours.
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Charityanne started the topic The story of a Posy in the forum Poetry Critiques 3 years, 3 months ago
I am a little posey, I look into the sky, I love the bright and cheery days when birds go flying by,
the rainy days are lovely too wear underneath my shade, the little bugs come scudding where they need not be afraid.
My closest friends come to maintain the ground in which I live, I haven’t much to bless them with, but the fragrance that I give.
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Charityanne replied to the topic Daydream in the forum Poetry Critiques 3 years, 3 months ago
Thanks!
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Charityanne started the topic Daydream in the forum Poetry Critiques 3 years, 3 months ago
Daydream, a thought passing by, with your head in the sky, you don’t really know why, but you must say, goodbye…
Daydream, something that you play, every day after day, in a leisurely way, to make time go away…
Daydream, a future or plan for what lays at hand, it’s hard but you can be what you think you can… daydream.
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Charityanne replied to the topic I'm doing CWW this year. Is anyone else doing it? in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 3 months ago
I joined but I’m new at this kinda thing so we’ll see how active I am.
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Charityanne replied to the topic The Gentleman in the forum Poetry Critiques 3 years, 3 months ago
Thanks for critiquing.
Yes the spacing is kinda off, I posted that from my phone so it came out kinda weird.
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Charityanne replied to the topic Hi I’m new… in the forum Start HERE 3 years, 3 months ago
Thanks for the welcome!
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Charityanne replied to the topic Hi I’m new… in the forum Start HERE 3 years, 3 months ago
I’m not uncomfortable answering 🙂
It’t my real name Charity is my first name and Anne is my middle name. 🙂
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Charityanne replied to the topic Hi I’m new… in the forum Start HERE 3 years, 3 months ago
1. favorite food? Fruit across the board!
2. Favorite poetry theme to portray? Nature
3. Favorite animal? Horse
Thanks for the welcome!
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