@elanor
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Elanor replied to the topic Does anyone here write poetry or haiku's ? in the forum Poetry 1 year, 5 months ago
I can’t tell you what inspired this one it just came out.
Masked
These days I am a stormcloud
shrouded in sunbeams
With waves of dark thought yet
Joy’s fountain remains.
If you hit the wrong trigger
I might just explode.
But if it remains hidden
I’m sure I’ll implode.
Like bitter dark chocolate
With sweetness enrobed
On the out…[Read more]
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Elanor replied to the topic Does anyone here write poetry or haiku's ? in the forum Poetry 1 year, 5 months ago
Thanks girls. 😊
Great job on yours as well!
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Elanor replied to the topic *bows* Bonjour! in the forum Start HERE 1 year, 5 months ago
Greetings @zemira ! Welcome to the Kingdom of Pen. (Don’t worry I’m a weirdo too)
I also love writing poetry! If you pop over to the poetry topic we have discussions and a place to post your masterpieces (or in my case disaster-pieces.
See you around.
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Elanor replied to the topic Does anyone here write poetry or haiku's ? in the forum Poetry 1 year, 5 months ago
Thank you. 😊
Anddddd to my. Veggie Tales peoples here’s a Pirates who don’t do anything rendition I made.
The Pirates Who Don’t Do Anything (Cretans Version)
Written for a fun summary after our study of Titus on Crete. We talking about how the Cretes who accepted Christ were being transformed from war faring pirat…[Read more]
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Elanor replied to the topic Does anyone here write poetry or haiku's ? in the forum Poetry 1 year, 5 months ago
Lost Love
This is from my heartache knowing two dear sisters in Christ were going through the pain of having said goodbye to loved ones whom they had held very near to their hearts.
When love’s lost
It takes with it a heavy cost
So full of love
For those God gave from above.
This love so fills
That it bubbles up and spi…
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Elanor replied to the topic Does anyone here write poetry or haiku's ? in the forum Poetry 1 year, 7 months ago
Im soo glad you enjoyed them. I’m less than active myself. To be honest I’m basically absent unless someone tags me, mentions poetry, or a favourite book/author.
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Elanor replied to the topic Does anyone here write poetry or haiku's ? in the forum Poetry 1 year, 7 months ago
Here’s one I wrote yesterday. It’s not the best but here:
Hallelujah
Making Hallelujah into a note
And accompanying lyrics wrote
When one is going through trials and pains
They let it out though their creative strains
The greatest of musicians and authors
Went through pain, heartbreak, suffering, and wars
Instead of becoming crippled and…
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Elanor replied to the topic Does anyone here write poetry or haiku's ? in the forum Poetry 1 year, 7 months ago
💕
I went back and forth for a while but decided to just use my own name. But it’s fun to think of epic pen names.
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Elanor replied to the topic Does anyone here write poetry or haiku's ? in the forum Poetry 1 year, 7 months ago
Amen! Those two verses pretty well sum it up. Lately I feel both overwhelmed with a call for home and to stay here as long as I can to reach as many as I can with Christ’s light.
Yess. I’ve gotten myself into the indie Christian author corner via KP and then on to other similar things and I think I’ll have endless reads there…[Read more]
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Elanor replied to the topic Does anyone here write poetry or haiku's ? in the forum Poetry 1 year, 7 months ago
Thank you. Indeed. There’s so many days that I’m thinking, Lord come please.
Then at the same time my heart aches for all the unsaved friends that I have who have no interest in Christ at all and I’m thinking Lord wait maybe with time I can plant enough seeds and you’ll change they’re stony hearts.
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Elanor replied to the topic Does anyone here write poetry or haiku's ? in the forum Poetry 1 year, 7 months ago
Okay so this one is perhaps a bit dark or depressing. It came to me on a day that I was just longing for Heaven.
Homeward BoundThere’s days I feel utterly alone
And I long to go to my true home.
But God says wait a while longer
When you can’t hold up I Am stronger.
People say I’m friggin great
But on the inside I’m about to break.…
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Elanor replied to the topic Does anyone here write poetry or haiku's ? in the forum Poetry 1 year, 7 months ago
I’m glad you girls appreciated my brown eyes poem. 💕 I don’t know why but I find sharp blue eyes suspicious like they’re too observant or judging or something. Like I’m one to talk having blue-gray eyes myself pending my mood 🤣
@felicity I love that poem of yours for spring!! It’s beautiful!
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Elanor replied to the topic Does anyone here write poetry or haiku's ? in the forum Poetry 1 year, 7 months ago
Here’s one of my more recent ones:
Brown Eyes
March 20th,2023
I was chatting with some girlfriends on GR and one was saying how a guy had beautiful blue eyes and I commented that I always found brown eyes soo intriguing and then went on to say something along these lines and they giggled telling me I should write romance novels. 🤣
Brown ey…
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Elanor replied to the topic Does anyone here write poetry or haiku's ? in the forum Poetry 1 year, 7 months ago
Those are beautiful!
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Elanor replied to the topic Does anyone here write poetry or haiku's ? in the forum Poetry 1 year, 7 months ago
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Elanor replied to the topic Does anyone here write poetry or haiku's ? in the forum Poetry 1 year, 7 months ago
@felicity I loved that!! (Ahh why do all the best poems come to mind while you’re in the very midst of doing something?!)
@starshiness I love yours tooo!! 💕
This is my most recent one to complete (I’ve started and not finished 5 in the last two weeks due to poet writer’s block🤦🏻♀️)
My Impossible
March 21st, 2023
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Elanor replied to the topic Poem Advice on Punctuation in the forum Poetry Critiques 1 year, 7 months ago
I am terrible at punctuation and always let my bestie go to town on my poems because she’s the punctuation queen.
But I had to pop on and say that’s a beautiful poem.
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Elanor replied to the topic “Look Up Child” in the forum Poetry Critiques 1 year, 9 months ago
Sorry for the tardy response. But I absolutely LOVE this poem!! It’s beautiful!
It reminded me also of Lauren Daigle’s “Look Up Child”.
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Elanor replied to the topic For the Poets Among Us… in the forum Poetry 1 year, 9 months ago
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