Linyang Zhang

That ended up bigger than I expected…

New character design

The character’s name is Gabriel Mai.

I never know what to rp

@loopylin

Chase

Chase’s eyes wandered to the puppy. Such a little thing. He’s almost smaller than the wolf pups. Chase looked up at Felicity, actually meeting her eyes, his own eyes remaining green. “W-want t-to go?” He pointed out the window at the puppy.

Here we go, introducing Peri, Hazel, Mabel, Ester, Sebastian and Julia, my characters from various universes! I’m using a handful of questions I picked up from the archives. These aren’t even all the answers but I don’t want to make a post that’s a mile long and I’m gonna wait to see if people want more. Feel free to ask me or any one of these…[Read more]

Nice to see I won’t be alone 🙂

@dekreel

Thx.

The backstory behind it is pretty crazy.

…I may or may not have liked this idea so much I spent three hours writing answers from the POVs of six different characters… I’ll share when it’s not the middle of the night haha.

Also @rae Silvanis’s full name is awesome ^.^

If I may add my two cents: an ACTUALLY MATURE romance story with TWO ACTUALLY MATURE human beings who respect each other through and through and even if they break up they’re as courteous as can be

But that’s boring

Ah….. so that’s why it’s so rare…

@loopylin

Also I just had an idea. What if, as Chase got closer to certain people, he started associating them in his mind with different animals depending on their personality? Could be a way he gets more comfortable around some people. Just an idea though. You can use if you want or not.

That is an awesome idea! And it sounds just like something…[Read more]

@whalekeeper

I’m game 🙂

@loopylin

Sorry that I haven’t been active. I wasn’t sure what to rp, and there was alot of life stuff I was working with.

Chase

Chase shook his head. “Wha-what t-teach-er g-gives t-tree l-less-ons?” Besides, if you want to climb trees, you can talk to squirrels about it. They can tell you all kind of things about the different kind of trees…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

Thanks

@loopylin

Chase

Chase didn’t know what to think of the chaotic sight, so he stared with blank, black eyes, face half cast in shadow by his hoodie. “Why T-teach-er in t-tree?” A single flicker of purple came to Chase’s eyes, then died again.

@loopylin

Yeah, sorry.

Um, Chase would prefer puppy.

I’ll write a quick rp for him to get things moving along

He wasn’t as fearsome as she had pictured after the fight the previous night. Instead he seemed kind and gentle, more so than most other people she had met.

It’s funny to think of Chase as fearsome, he’s just so…not u…[Read more]

@loopylin

Nar: “Of course. You can never spend any amount of time in my profession without finding someone you couldn’t help.”

Wordy writing styles.

As Andrew can testify, more than once I have criticized books for wordy writing styles.

I’m not saying writers should state things as brief as possible, but writers shouldn’t take a paragraph and fill it with needless words. It bogs down the reader. There’s a balance between adding needless words and being too brief.

I think I did this with Silvanis…But I did punch him last night for no good reason so he might be pretty hostile so I’ll do…Nar I guess just cuz I was looking at an old drawing of her today

1. What is your full name?

“Narray Mae Nayhelm, but everyone usually calls me simply Nar.”

2. What is the most important thing the average person should…

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