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Ruth replied to the topic Criticism on a revision draft in the forum Sci-Fi 2 years, 11 months ago
CHAPTER 7-THE INVESTIGATONS
The suns were bright and shining over Ladance as two Laxdains came walking together through the dusty streets. One was taller, dressed in red coarse, but durable, clothing with a powerful blaster strapped to his side, from his thigh to his knee. The other was shorter, but with tailored and comfortable clothes, and a…[Read more] -
Ruth replied to the topic Criticism on a revision draft in the forum Sci-Fi 2 years, 11 months ago
@hybridlore @power @freedomwriter76 @euodia-vision @kyronthearcanin @jonas @loopylin @whalekeeper @anyone-else-who-might-have-slight-interest
CHAPTER 6-ON BOARD THE NIGHTMARE
Nahim was alone and unbothered for the first time in a while. He ran his right hand over his sling for his left arm but didn’t try to move the shoulder. He was different… -
Ruth replied to the topic Criticism on a revision draft in the forum Sci-Fi 2 years, 11 months ago
@hybridlore @power @freedomwriter76 @euodia-vision @kyronthearcanin @jonas @loopylin @whalekeeper @anyone-else-who-might-have-slight-interest
Next chapter…I’m just going to post most of my chapters now since I plan to change some of them soo, but want some feedback.
CHAPTER 5-MASTER PAUL
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Ruth replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 11 months ago
Thanks. I’ll try doing my first mood board. **Me getting a sinking feeling that I’m going to fail**
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Ruth started the topic Igua…the story that's going nowhere in the forum Fantasy 2 years, 11 months ago
Hi. I’m just going to tell you about the person who is now driving me insane instead of Jr. (if you don’t know what I’m talking about, look at my forum signature) his name is Ih-goo-uh. And his story needs some motivation to get up and get going.
Igua: Backstory
Igua was the son of a Realn Cloak in my fantasy world, Wond. At this time, the…[Read more]
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Ruth replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 11 months ago
How do you guys make your mood boards? I understand what you put on them, but how do you put them together?
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Ruth replied to the topic Editing a post causes it to get deleted in the forum Questions and Support 2 years, 11 months ago
How do you even edit a post? I haven’t figured that out yet. And how do you delete a post?
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Ruth replied to the topic Weapons, Tech, War, Armor, Anything warrior related. in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 11 months ago
I’ll try, but no promises about him agreeing. He’s shy, but maybe not seeing your faces will make him more likely to do it!
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Ruth replied to the topic Weapons, Tech, War, Armor, Anything warrior related. in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 11 months ago
@jonas @thearcanaxiom
Cool! It feels particularly reminiscent of the One Ring to me. It bears some degree of intelligence, and it is loyal to its master, and always seeks to return to them. I second Jonas’s question, in what way does it repel harm to its master? Is it perhaps more of a mysterious influence where if it is turned on the master, s…
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Ruth replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 2 years, 11 months ago
@at-everyone-who-commented
Thanks.
The woman graphite picture is called a Cloak. It took me two hours in March to do, and back then it was perfect, and now I criticize almost every feature except the hood. Typical artist thing, you only criticize after the drawing is done.
The watercolor was a cover art idea for something called Dream hence t…[Read more]
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Ruth changed their profile picture 2 years, 11 months ago
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Ruth replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 11 months ago
@savannah_grace2009 @acancello @trailblazer @grcr @mineralizedwritings @esther-c
NAHIM
Nahim started awake, ashamed that he had slipped off to sleep in a place where he didn’t feel safe. The house rumbled below him and a feminine voice boomed in his ears. With haste, he put his helmet on and stood, walking over to where two strangers that he had…[Read more]
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Ruth replied to the topic Weapons, Tech, War, Armor, Anything warrior related. in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 11 months ago
A character. He’s cruel to all but his son and daughter. He would never harm his daughter, but his son…He has caused him pain, mental and physical before, but he would never kill him. I did a thing on his son and he a little bit on the Chat Chat.
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Ruth replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 2 years, 11 months ago
The pencil drawing is from early this year, the watercolor is from recently
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Ruth replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 2 years, 11 months ago

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Ruth replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 2 years, 11 months ago

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Ruth replied to the topic Weapons, Tech, War, Armor, Anything warrior related. in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 11 months ago
The above post by @thearcaneaxiom has put me in memory of a weapon my brother and I developed a while ago. It doesn’t have a name but it was given to my character Alpha by a guy named Abdeel.
It’s a knife, with a blade surrounded by green mist. It can pierce stone, and is a poisoned blade. It chooses one master, and unless the master gives it…[Read more]
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Ruth replied to the topic Weapons, Tech, War, Armor, Anything warrior related. in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 11 months ago
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Ruth replied to the topic Weapons, Tech, War, Armor, Anything warrior related. in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 11 months ago
Excellent question. Yes, it doesn’t go all the way down to the feet, but it’s a shield designed to be protective of threats more in front and above. It isn’t meant to be a body shield, but a soldier can stake the shield into the ground, then crouch beside it when in assault. They can also lower the shield by rotating the top to th…
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Ruth replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 11 months ago
Oh, I just don’t understand the whole story (not the backstory, just the whole scope of the story) but I wouldn’t expect to when I haven’t read everything you’ve written about it 😊
That’s probably cuz I haven’t written all of it! I just kinda make up a character, make up a backstory and make up random scenes and eventually patchwo…[Read more]
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