@devastate-lasting
Active 5 months ago- Rank: Eccentric Mentor
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Ruth replied to the topic An aggravation over Stained Glass in the forum Poetry Critiques 2 years, 6 months ago
I dabble a little in poetry and honestly have no talent for it, but my favourite verses are the two last. Why? Because it feels right somehow. I would help you out more, but I’m afraid I don’t reckonize your style well. I apologize for how little help I can offer.
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Ruth replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 6 months ago
Problem is, before the dance, I need to find him a date. Either someone super nice or someone who can relate to him like no other…someone who’s super nice would be better, since he really needs a pick-me-up most the time.
Ugh! I gel like someone who sets their brother or son up with a blind date!
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Ruth replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 6 months ago
Chase Duke
Chase dropped his head into his folded arms, waiting for the dance lessons to begin. At this point he wanted it over and done with.
I imagine Chase as a good dancer since he is actually very aware of how his body moves. He also has a gentlemanly undertone if you can pierce the blackness.
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Ruth replied to the topic Guardian Angels, a space story in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 6 months ago
Oh dear…I think I have failed as a writer.
It’s currently around twenty two o’clock for me, so I can’t fully reply rn (and dont have much energy or will either) but I will say that a few of your edits are mistaken…and it’s totally my fault!
I can’t believe I really liked this chapter!
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Ruth replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 6 months ago
Wait, @calyhuge where are your charries who were being attacked by the mormaka?
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Ruth replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 6 months ago
Angere
Angere looked into Rigere’s face. He knew what she was going to do.
“You want to kill the Lost Child? The Realn who calls for his mother?” Rigere nodded, her evil icy eyes thinning to slits.
“He will die before anyone else. I don’t care. And if you kill the lady Realn…” Angere grinned to himself.
“Every Warrior hates seeing a pretty…[Read more]
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Ruth replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 6 months ago
Sorry, that’s @calyhuge
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Ruth replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 6 months ago
@cslyhuge
Yes, but he is built like Nahim.
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Ruth replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 6 months ago
He doesn’t understand fully what “born under the light f the Stones” means, but he has potential…
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Ruth replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 6 months ago
He doesn’t understand fully what “born under the light f the Stones” means, but he has potential…
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Ruth replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 6 months ago
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Ruth replied to the topic The Heist (RP) in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 6 months ago
Yep! I just finished up first semester of CH 1, but went through all of CH A and B (do NOT ask me about Latin! I’ve only grasped the basics this year!)
Do you understand Truth Trees? It got so confusing in class that eventually our tutor gave up and we skipped the entire strand! My classmate and I were relieved! Second semester CH B…[Read more]
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Ruth replied to the topic The Heist (RP) in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 6 months ago
Wow! I have 2,404 read notifs…I thought I had more than that!
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Ruth replied to the topic The Heist (RP) in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 6 months ago
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Ruth replied to the topic The Heist (RP) in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 6 months ago
Yes, none of those are true, but all are VALID and follow the seven rules of validity for syllogisms, therefore, they are VALID and in logic, that’s what matters rn.
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Ruth replied to the topic The Heist (RP) in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 6 months ago
I understand from your viewpoint what you said, but from MY viewpoint, I CAN logically prove ANYTHING as long as it is valid!
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Ruth replied to the topic The Heist (RP) in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 6 months ago
@jonas @highscribeofatherium
Okay, i admit at this point I’m just being silly
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Ruth replied to the topic The Heist (RP) in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 6 months ago
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Ruth replied to the topic The Heist (RP) in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 6 months ago
WATCH YOUR TERMS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I have been trained to deep dive terms and find their TRUE meanings!
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Ruth replied to the topic The Heist (RP) in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 6 months ago
You can’t prove premises with logic, so this can’t be resolved with logic.
That is not the point of a syllogism, I don’t see how that is applicable.
h wait, you did make a completely valid argument, but your premises were false.
You have yet to tell me how validity is truth
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