Lin

GUYZ It’s half an hour before the set time and we’re at 10 active members already!!!!! I think we can do this!

@savannah_grace2009

Would you mind adding Sef? I think I’m going to go with her, since Music and Chase are not…connecting really.

@calyhuge

I’ve been thinking, and I’m sorry I put you through the trouble with Music, but I don’t feel like…How do i explain this to a guy? When my charries fall in love with other charries, I immediately know. Idk if guy writers get the same feelings as girl writers about their charries, but I just get a feeling when I’m in that character’s…[Read more]

@beth-torres

Jeptune

“Touching, touching. A sister and her little brother, who apparently hate each other for some reason.” The slyiad half dropped down from a tree, her eight eyes thinning, and her red lips twisted in a villianest smile. Dried blood showed on a bandage on her torso (Torso, right? I forget where my own charrie got stabbed!)…[Read more]

@highscribeofaetherium @jonas @keilah-h

The stones have no fixed location as long as they don’t go beyond the borders of their realms, unless in the hands of one who has their light(Fennin).  I personally imagine the dragons keeping them close to skin as like a scale in the most protected area, or a place the can keep careful watch on it. As far…[Read more]

@whalekeeper

Nar

“Kinda like the lines on a warrior’s face. No matter how young, no matter how old, the face shows the stories there to be told.” Nar smiled, brushing a curl from her eye. “That’s the closest I can relate my world to yours. My world is the world of the warrioress, where some go off to war, and come back dead on their shield.…[Read more]

@whalekeeper

Nar

“That’s… Unlike anything I’ve ever heard of… ” Nar’s mind wondered what her world would look like if that was the case, it certainly would be crazy. “Does that mean that if I think I’m a bird, I am one?”

@esther-c

I may answer all your questions later, but for now, I am drawn into the story.
BUT
I see potential for this story to be better if you had at least one chapter before this that introduced us to daily life with the Orb. It would drawn me in more, and make us care about Ev and Ami more than just plopping them and the plot in our laps off…[Read more]

@whalekeeper

Nar

“Yeah, I get that. I mean, you don’t get punished for messing it up, you’re just corrected. If you’re born Realn it’s as natural as walking, and putting your left hand over your heart just feels like a crime. If you’re not…it seems like a bunch of silly rules. Why not use the left hand, your right might be busy?” Nora sto…[Read more]

@keilah-h

Yeah, from Nahim’s right elbow down is robotic. I might make it the entire arm.

Hey this really helped me, so I’m gonna share it with ya’ll…

Writing Weakness Quiz

@whalekeeper

Nar

Nar laughed.

“Yeh, the Realn can be very…very nable? Nohble?”

“Noble?”

“Yes. Everything is honor, and glory and tradition. Even which hand you put over your heart as a sign of friendship can’t be mixed up. It can be strict, but you get used to it.”

@loopylin Oh no! 😱 another victim of Wyoh!

Wyoh stop this!!!!

@whalekeeper

Nar 

Taking Hugo’s hands almost stoppedcher heart, but it kept pumping, racing in loud thumps in her ears.

“The general rule of this dance in that in all your twirls and vines, you must make the general shape of a leaf traced upon the ground with your feet. Other…[Read more]

@loopylin

Also, idk if you already know this tip, but when outlining with a pen, often leaving your sketch lines and not erasing them makes the drawing seem less flat.

@loopylin

Do you have access to a scannercor printer? When I have a beautiful drawing I want to ink, I will sometimes scan it, then print it off. If you have a computer, you can just save it by drive or send it by email or right click on the image here and push “save image as…” Then right click the image in folders on the computer and push…[Read more]

@scoutfinch180

Also, what is the end goal of your plot? Reuniting the galaxy and reversing what Grathmere did while working with him? I recommend making Grathmere somewhat morally relatable (think Edmund Dantes from The Count of Monte Cristo)

I honestly have never thought about it. I think the most good Grathmere can do is to destroy his allies…[Read more]

Sorry had some trouble andd it posted for some reason. @scoutfinch180 the rest.

After GA, the Wondians did mix some of their blood with aliens from other planets, but there are still

Those of pure Wondian blood. For instance, most the Dwarves are pure since don’t often accept others into their small circles.

For the sake of sci-fi and stories,…[Read more]

@scoutfinch180

OH ok, I read Alin as Aelynn, sounding more like a girl’s name in my head. Also, What Alin says there does sound a little feminine in a way,

XD I’m sorry, but it’s just funny to me, cuz that is how Alin’s name is pronounced! In fact Nahim’s oldest brother, Knihan, had to have the spelling of his named changed because “Nihan” is a g…[Read more]

@whalekeeper

Glad you enjoyed it!

Nar

“A lot. Both my parents are fond of music, and my older brother plays drums when he feels the mood. I like to dance personally, especially duos. Realn-style duos are the prettiest dances you will ever see. Triplets are complicated. Most dances are upbeat and quick, some so much so only the most flexible and…[Read more]