Denali Christianson

@koshka ooh good question…

hmm…thinking about her right now…

(see…I have that “author” perspective where I see the character’s future self and how they are now XD) so in the future she’d be more up front and in control of her self, but right now, I believe she’s in such a state of turmoil in this scene that she’d lash out verbally.

But…due…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12

Ooo, wonderful tension! The things authors love to create yet struggle to write.

It sounds good so far; the emotions seem balanced to me.

How would Ara respond to November being hurt? How did she want to respond to Riven?

At this point it looks like she’s about to explode, which could manifest itself in various ways depending…[Read more]

it did the spacing weird. As in non-existent XD

“November!” Ara shifted as she fell, reaching to pull him down with her, but her fingers just brushed the edge of his shirt. Her back hit the floor and she gasped, the breath knocked from her lungs. Her body ached from the impact but she ignored it, scrambling to get to her feet.

Too late.

“No!” Ara reached for her friend, just as the bird’s…

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I can actually submit the scene if you’d like. Might be easier lol.

it’s short and it starts from where November is injured.

(Background Corvina can turn into a Raven at will, and November pushed Ara out of the way to take Corvinas blow)

And thank you!!

November, her and Corvina

It did thank u! @anatra23

and thx that would be very helpful @koshka I just knew I want it to still look about the same as when he received them (extremely dark red and still like jagged and such)

@freedomwriter76 ur tag kept glitching

@godlyfantasy12

I’ll need to check this, but it sounds like the wounds close up, but be scar tissue grows. Anyway I’ll be back on here once I’ve done some research.

@lydia-s

Ooo, here’s one I found recently.

http://www.users.totalise.co.uk/~leiafee/ramblings/realistic_injuries.htm

UGH it won’t let me post it. But I found an awesome website with a whole entire list of injuries and even environmental stuff like cold and heat for writing and, It tells you if it would be fatal and such!

@queen_of_alvastia @freedomwriter76

Corvina

Verity obviously wanted to converse.

Corvina sighed internally. She honestly wasn’t interested, but…the kid was upset, and Corvina had to grin at her spunk.

“Well…not much we can do about it now.” Corvina shrugged. Verity huffed and crossed her arms.

Corvina spotted a flash of something cross the…[Read more]

ah sorry about the confusion with Crow!! Also luv Crosshair and Jareth together! It’s fun seeing stoic Crosshair with a son! Definitely got some explaining to do 😂

anyone else wanna RP?

@koshka @elishavet-pidyon @keilah-h @freedomwriter76
November
Everyone seemed to notice Franz’s sudden change of behavior when Naja entered the room. How he didn’t seem quite as gruff as before. How he acted so differently with her compared to how he had with….

Well…

Everyone else.

It was….strange….

And November didn’t fully grasp it.

Per…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76 @elishavet-pidyon @keilah-h @godlyfantasy12

Vulkasin

Loud voices. The beginning of an argument. Shuffling feet on cold stone.

The barrack…

Something was digging into his side. Vulkasin tried rolling over, but the thing followed his movement. He finally forced open one eye.

The cross piece and pommel on his sword.

Why did I…[Read more]

Awwwww!!!!! AND HE LOVES LOKI?! AGH MA HEART!!!! He even looks similar to a Loki! A mini trouble maker in the making!!!