Denali Christianson

@elishavet-pidyon u on?? If so u wanna RP? @koshka @keilah-h what do y’all think of the teams? @freedomwriter76

yall wanna start getting ready for guards to attack?

@queen_of_alvastia @freedomwriter76

Corvina

“Corvina, don’t leave us behind!”

Corvina gritted her teeth. Why was everyone here so committed to talking to her?

She huffed, ignoring him.

She stopped, however, at the sight of two men up ahead. Two…fairly muscular men. Strong jawlines, muscles that were highly pronounced by their outfits. Corvina…[Read more]

Franz be yelling at Lyn and she just be like “WHAAAAT???” *hangs upside down from chandelier.*

“IAAAAAAAAAMMMMMMMM GONNNNAAAA SWIIIIIIIIING FROM THE CHANDAAAAAALIEEEEE-“

*crashes into Vulkasin* XD

Oh btw @koshla u can change where Mikkel is that was just a suggestion. Then there’s 4 in each group

@koshka @keilah-h @freedomwriter76 also on our RP I believe it’s @elishavet-pidyon turn….but don’t like hold me to that I could be wrong XD. All I know is I’ve made quite a couple….

also yall….

is this the point where we start thinking about getting split up?

im thinking something happens…a conflict??

Maybe Ocran’s guards or somet…[Read more]

U can have her think he’s cute (like little girls do…I could see her doing that) and I have a feeling Bucky would have NOOO idea what to do with that little girlish infatuation

XD Verity fangirling is gonna be…something

meanwhile Corvina’s just gonna be like

Oh yay….more people… 🙄

@freedomwriter76 @queen_of_alvastia OOF I’m getting major Corvina vibes from Viola as well!!! But I’m curious to see if they’re gonna clash or what cuz sometimes u never know…

Sometimes ppl with similar personalities clash and, especially being the same gender….this’ll be fun

@queen_of_alvastia

As far as edits go, it was confusing which character you were speaking for as the POV switches around. Are you writing omniscient view?

@queen_of_alvastia

Is he okay?

IS HE?!

I need to knoooow!!!!!!

@queen_of_alvastia

*Quiet voice in corner*

What just happened?

@elishavet-pidyon

Oooh this sounds so incredible first off!! You’ve already done AMAZING stuff so far!! Ugh 😭!

So, honestly it’s a little hard for me to actually give advice BUT I can say that I have a character very similar to this in my own series.

She’s not a mother, or “abusive” or even an adult for the first part of the series.…[Read more]

Bruh I LUVVVVV TFR WRITING PROMPTS!!!! THEY CRACK ME UP!!!!!

Also I feel like that would be something Corvina would totally say

@freedomwriter76 thank u!!

@godlyfantasy12

You’re welcome! This is my favorite type of book research too, so thank you!

@koshka wow!! Thank you so much!!! That’s actually perfect and exactly how his scars are!! He does get pain actually from time to time and it directly correlates with pain that Corvina has in her hand sometimes.

Also, thank u for the info about his expressions and face muscles, didn’t even think about that! Also his sight…while his eye did escap…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12

Okkaaayyyy…*drags self back from hospital reports*

It looks like the wound is somewhat chronic, frozen in the stages just after bleeding, where the skin is sealed somewhat, but the wound is still open while no longer bleeding. which would make sense if it is painful from time to time. The magic would have to come in here as the…[Read more]

This sounds really neat!!! Could u give an example??

Anymore advice is still appreciated tho! Even for future reference lol!!! Cuz there’s conflict in…welp…all over the place in this series lol

It’s rlly funny how just typing it out and working thru it can help sooo much lol