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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic My New WIP Chapter 1!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 8 months ago
@felicity @mineralizedwritings @lightoverdarkness6
ahh now I can give advice!!!
so for the chili/hot sauce scenes and the difference of opinion between ppls, no view is wrong!
This actually is dependent on Light and the tone of her book!
So, before you go and change anything Light, you first just need to ask what the tone of your b…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 8 months ago
So, I’m not sure if this happens for your fire elves, but a friend of mine has an elven character that has a fire talent and I’m sort of mixing her’s with what I know of November. Anyway…
The Twins
Novembré’s breath grew heavy and his eyes went wide as the implication of their words seemed to sink in. Sparks flickered in the…[Read more]
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 8 months ago
@mineralizedwritings friends to lovers later down the road 😊 @loopylin @lightoverdarkness6
Luna
She absentmindedly touched her hair, giving a small laugh. “It’s more of a…ombré I guess…I was born with it! Glad you like it,” she giggled, smiling from ear to ear. She’d never been around others similar to her until recently, having been raised…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 8 months ago
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 8 months ago
Oh! And @esther-c
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 8 months ago
@lightoverdarkness6 😊 u wanna RP Matt’s response? Lyla can also say something to Luna if u like.
@koshka u on?
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic My New WIP Chapter 1!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 8 months ago
I just don’t really like critiquing ppl unless they ask for a certain thing and then Ik what to critique, or if I see a certain story element that doesn’t make sense
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic My New WIP Chapter 1!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 8 months ago
@lightoverdarkness6 oooof…I usually don’t give critiques much just cuz I don’t really care too except for when they ask for like a CERTAIN thing, or if I just see something story wise if that makes sense XD….
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic My New WIP Chapter 1!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 8 months ago
@lightoverdarkness6 aww poor kids! I like it! Luv Asher obviously 😂 their sibling relationship is so sweet!
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Koshka replied to the topic Okay, I need a MaIn ChArAcTeR name in the forum Characters 3 years, 8 months ago
Ah, I see. I’m not sure though, maybe they do. I haven’t come across an explanation yet, but I did see it done, just the last letter in a name.
I may need to come back to this after some study.
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Koshka replied to the topic Holiday Novella! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 8 months ago
Whatever you like! I would love to hear your ideas. (Or should that be read?)
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Name Meanings in the forum Characters 3 years, 8 months ago
@lightoverdarkness6 aww thx!
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 8 months ago
@lightoverdarkness6 aww thx!!! Ahhh I feel like Matt and Pax are totally gonna bond over their shared stutters 😭 @mineralizedwritings @loopylin
Paxton
Paxton’s eyes widened slightly as the young boy asked about his bear, his words stumbling out, just like Paxton’s often did.
He…sounded just like him. Though, a tad braver.
Paxton glanced at Lu…[Read more]
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Name Meanings in the forum Characters 3 years, 8 months ago
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Holiday Novella! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 8 months ago
@whalekeeper @koshka @elishavet-pidyon @lightoverdarkness6 @esther-c @starofthenorth @arien @mineralizedwritings @theloonyone @loopylin @sarafini gasp I never added @felicity to this!!
So, if I do this it’ll obviously still be being written after Christmas is over 😂
I gotta figure out how to start it and everything, so if y’all wouldn’t mind…[Read more]
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic The Keeper of the Lost Cities in the forum Book Discussions 3 years, 8 months ago
@folith-feolin as I don’t read grimdark but I do know it’s definitely not something I’d probably read really at all, KOTLC, definitely isn’t as intense probably as what ur used to.
which is great for me XD XD XD
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 8 months ago
@mineralizedwritings yup! Her name is Hope! She’s been through a lot, just like Paxton, so he feels so attached to her.
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 8 months ago
@loopylin @mineralizedwritings @lightoverdarkness6
Gonna wait to RP till @lightoverdarkness6 RPs for Matt and his sis.
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic The Keeper of the Lost Cities in the forum Book Discussions 3 years, 8 months ago
@folith-feolin u might wanna read book7-9 now that they’re out 😉)
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 8 months ago
@loopylin @lightoverdarkness6 @mineralizedwritings
Luna
Tauren walked them over to the others, and as he did another boy walked out from them, eyes wary as he looked at them.
“Who are you?” He asked.
Luna felt Paxton bristle beside her. She held her smile, hoping the boy’s bit of hospitality would fade.
“U-Uh…Carter, this is Dolunay…”…[Read more]
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