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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 4 months ago
@elishavet-pidyon SOUNDS GOOD XD
Jocelyn & Nyx
”Friendly?”
”Doesn’t sound very friendly.” Nyx huffed, turning up his nose and giving it a twitch. Lyn shrugged. She waved enthusiastically to the stranger; an adult, who was glaring at the two in shock and confusion. He also seemed to be appalled by their presence.
As though by entering t…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic I need help, please! in the forum Plotting 4 years, 4 months ago
By the way, I just realized what your profile picture says. XD
That could make sense. I would have this as hammered down as possible before the death scene of course. 😉
If you do ever read the Wingfeather Saga, some of this may clear up. But if you do, enjoy the series, don’t just read it for writing purposes. =) (I will especially…[Read more]
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Wingfeather Saga in the forum Book Discussions 4 years, 4 months ago
SPOILERS (I warn just in case XD)
I also cried over nugget (both times)
AND THEIR REAL FATHER
and I cried over PODO OH MY GOSH ESPECIALLY BECAUSE I’M THE GRANDDAUGHTER WITH THAT RELATIONSHIP WITH HER GRANDPA.
AND THEN JANNER.
to save my favorite c…[Read more]
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Wingfeather Saga in the forum Book Discussions 4 years, 4 months ago
My favorite characters are
KALMAR AND JANNER
(SPOOOOOOILER)
SOBS……
JANNNNNNNNEEEEEEEERRRRRRRR *SCREEEEEECHES IN PAIN*
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 4 months ago
@emilysf IDEA Maybe Zoe should meet Corvina….
No matter what, Corvina’s not like Malcolm (she’s actually probably been kinda where Zoe’s been and while she won’t admit it will probably feel sorry for her.)
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 4 months ago
@elishavet-pidyon u wanna introduce ocran to Jocelyn or u want me to?
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 4 months ago
Arabella & November
November gripped Ara tightly, not daring to let her fall to the floor, as she was still trembling from her recent vision.
Zlatan stepped forward, his expression concerned, but not as confused as his brother’s, “In ze room ve just passed zere’s a place she can sit down. Can you valk, m’lady? And if zere’s anyv’one…[Read more]
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EmilySF replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 4 months ago
@godlyfantasy12 She is, heh.
Good for him 😂 because she’s going to be stuck there until someone comes and tells her to do something or gets her out of her head for long enough.
(Smh, most of my best characters have something really traumatic about them, and usually in their backstory, whether they know it or not; because, I do have a character…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 4 months ago
@godlyfantasy12 @elishavet-pidyon
By the way, whoever I mention first is the actual point of view for a section.
Vulkasin and Zlatan.
Door after door brought nothing in reward, and by the second corridor Vulkasin was sure they were headed higher into the castle, not down to some courtyard.
He was about to suggest they turn around when Ara’s…[Read more]
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 4 months ago
@elishavet-pidyon oh I did make a Jocelyn scene btw but u may have missed it lol! Looks like we submitted at the same time but they kinda coincide well sooo yea!
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 4 months ago
@emilysf aww, she sounds like a great Charrie but poor thing!! Sounds like she needs to meet Jocelyn or Ara and November eventually!
if she meets Lyn, Lyn will definitely pull her out 🤣 (literally…like literally pull her.)
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 4 months ago
@elishavet-pidyon I think I’m gonna have Jocelyn and Nyx run into Ocran and then maybe they be like OKIE BAI if they realize he’s bad or something lol
Jocelyn & Nyx
“Hey, check it out! Light that isn’t from candles!” Lyn pointed to one of the windows beside her.
The duo had been climbing a spiral staircase for a while before ever reaching…[Read more]
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EmilySF replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 4 months ago
(Majorly making this up as I go, because 13 year old me struggled with descriptions even more than I do now, and was cringingly cliche about some things.)
Zoe
“[Nic]? [Ric]? Where are you?” She whispered the words, her terror strangling her voice to almost nothing, but her desperation forcing them out. Voices echoed through the large room of the…[Read more]
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 4 months ago
@elishavet-pidyon cuz we can always defeat him and yeet him out of the castle XD
maybe he doesn’t own it, but he found it and was like “OH HEY FREE STRONGHOLD!! YA KNOW XD
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 4 months ago
OOH I LOVE THIS IDEA where it’s actually like “his” castle kind, but like he’s using it as a stronghold and he hasn’t just “appeared there” so ye…that’s awesome cuz we kinda needed someone for the brothers to fight ROFL
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EmilySF replied to the topic I need help, please! in the forum Plotting 4 years, 4 months ago
I am hoping that I can write this well, and will be spending much time on completing it and perfecting it in the expansive future. 🙂
Is your MC dying just because he won’t defend himself/kill someone, or because he sees that Anti isn’t ready to die/has something he needs to do. Obviously someone willing to murder isn’t ready to die, b…
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 4 months ago
@elishavet-pidyon poor Viktor XD
ALRIGHTY SO LETS GET THIS SHOW ON THE ROAD!!!
….SOMEHOW 🤣
Arabella & November
They’d been walking for a while, opening different doors only to reveal more hallways, or various rooms that didn’t seem to get them any closer to their destination: outside. November hoped the brothers weren’t getting…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 4 months ago
It is interesting though, Zlatan’s story is set up a little different as although there is a ‘villian’ who initiates most of his problems, Zlatan is his own antagonist.
His name btw, means ‘Golden one’.
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 4 months ago
@koshka yea I’ve got trauma….XD
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 4 months ago
BONIFER SQUOON SHRIEK…..*throws stuff against the wall and throws tantrum!!!*
I. LOATHE. HIM.
I how can he be LESS NICE?!?! Bonfire squoon is a sick monster….
ahem….anyway….those books crushed my soul, ignore my rant.
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