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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic HELP WITH A SCENE PLZZZZ!!! in the forum Plotting 4 years ago
“November!” Ara shifted as she fell, reaching to pull him down with her, but her fingers just brushed the edge of his shirt. Her back hit the floor and she gasped, the breath knocked from her lungs. Her body ached from the impact but she ignored it, scrambling to get to her feet.
Too late.
“No!” Ara reached for her friend, just as the bird’s…
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic HELP WITH A SCENE PLZZZZ!!! in the forum Plotting 4 years ago
I can actually submit the scene if you’d like. Might be easier lol.
it’s short and it starts from where November is injured.
(Background Corvina can turn into a Raven at will, and November pushed Ara out of the way to take Corvinas blow)
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic HELP WITH A SCENE PLZZZZ!!! in the forum Plotting 4 years ago
And thank you!!
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic HELP WITH A SCENE PLZZZZ!!! in the forum Plotting 4 years ago
November, her and Corvina
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Need Some Advice With An Injury Scene! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years ago
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic HELP WITH A SCENE PLZZZZ!!! in the forum Plotting 4 years ago
@freedomwriter76 ur tag kept glitching
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GodlyFantasy12 started the topic HELP WITH A SCENE PLZZZZ!!! in the forum Plotting 4 years ago
SOOO apparently this is where you go for stubborn scenes lol!!
AND I know I’ve already posted a question for help with an injury, well I’ve kinda gotten some help online with that so…but anymore help in that thread I’d appreciate as well, also feel free to ask ur own questions and such.
ANYWAY!! I am rlly trying to write because it’s be…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Need Some Advice With An Injury Scene! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years ago
I’ll need to check this, but it sounds like the wounds close up, but be scar tissue grows. Anyway I’ll be back on here once I’ve done some research.
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Koshka replied to the topic Inspo Exchange in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years ago
Ooo, here’s one I found recently.

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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Need Some Advice With An Injury Scene! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years ago
UGH it won’t let me post it. But I found an awesome website with a whole entire list of injuries and even environmental stuff like cold and heat for writing and, It tells you if it would be fatal and such!
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GodlyFantasy12 started the topic Need Some Advice With An Injury Scene! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years ago
HEYO!!! Wasn’t sure where to put this thread XD But I need some advice with writing an injury infliction scene!! (I’m also gonna use my pal google, but thought u guys might could help out too!)
SO! I am working on my draft of book 1 of my series, and in it, my female MC (Arabella’s) All Is Lost moment is when my male MC (November) is injured by…[Read more]
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years ago
@queen_of_alvastia @freedomwriter76
Corvina
Verity obviously wanted to converse.
Corvina sighed internally. She honestly wasn’t interested, but…the kid was upset, and Corvina had to grin at her spunk.
“Well…not much we can do about it now.” Corvina shrugged. Verity huffed and crossed her arms.
Corvina spotted a flash of something cross the…[Read more]
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years ago
ah sorry about the confusion with Crow!! Also luv Crosshair and Jareth together! It’s fun seeing stoic Crosshair with a son! Definitely got some explaining to do 😂
anyone else wanna RP?
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years ago
@koshka @elishavet-pidyon @keilah-h @freedomwriter76
November
Everyone seemed to notice Franz’s sudden change of behavior when Naja entered the room. How he didn’t seem quite as gruff as before. How he acted so differently with her compared to how he had with….Well…
Everyone else.
It was….strange….
And November didn’t fully grasp it.
Per…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years ago
@freedomwriter76 @elishavet-pidyon @keilah-h @godlyfantasy12
Vulkasin
Loud voices. The beginning of an argument. Shuffling feet on cold stone.
The barrack…
Something was digging into his side. Vulkasin tried rolling over, but the thing followed his movement. He finally forced open one eye.
The cross piece and pommel on his sword.
Why did I…[Read more]
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic *Sigh* Here we go again, Tony & Steve…XD in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years ago
Awwwww!!!!! AND HE LOVES LOKI?! AGH MA HEART!!!! He even looks similar to a Loki! A mini trouble maker in the making!!!
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years ago
@freedomwriter76 @queen_of_alvastia
Corvina
She’d wanted to take up the back, but apparently that wasn’t going to bode well with a group of courageous men…
She rolled her eyes as she walked beside them, bristling everytime someone came close. She sighed.
While she’d been against bringing Sorren along, she couldn’t exactly stop anyone from doin…[Read more]
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years ago
@koshka @elishavet-pidyon @keilah-h @freedomwriter76
November
Riker’s kind gaze and sincere words calmed November’s nerves and he let out a breath. He nodded. “Ah…I-I’m good, thanks…” November warily watched Franz out of the corner of his eyes. “Are…are you okay?”
Arabella
The little boy seemed a bit skittish still, and he was clutching his…l…[Read more]
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years ago
@koshka @elishavet-pidyon @freedomwriter76 @keilah-h anyone on and wanna RP?
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