Denali Christianson

Oh btw @koshla u can change where Mikkel is that was just a suggestion. Then there’s 4 in each group

@koshka @keilah-h @freedomwriter76 also on our RP I believe it’s @elishavet-pidyon turn….but don’t like hold me to that I could be wrong XD. All I know is I’ve made quite a couple….

also yall….

is this the point where we start thinking about getting split up?

im thinking something happens…a conflict??

Maybe Ocran’s guards or somet…[Read more]

U can have her think he’s cute (like little girls do…I could see her doing that) and I have a feeling Bucky would have NOOO idea what to do with that little girlish infatuation

XD Verity fangirling is gonna be…something

meanwhile Corvina’s just gonna be like

Oh yay….more people… 🙄

@freedomwriter76 @queen_of_alvastia OOF I’m getting major Corvina vibes from Viola as well!!! But I’m curious to see if they’re gonna clash or what cuz sometimes u never know…

Sometimes ppl with similar personalities clash and, especially being the same gender….this’ll be fun

@queen_of_alvastia

As far as edits go, it was confusing which character you were speaking for as the POV switches around. Are you writing omniscient view?

@queen_of_alvastia

Is he okay?

IS HE?!

I need to knoooow!!!!!!

@queen_of_alvastia

*Quiet voice in corner*

What just happened?

@elishavet-pidyon

Oooh this sounds so incredible first off!! You’ve already done AMAZING stuff so far!! Ugh 😭!

So, honestly it’s a little hard for me to actually give advice BUT I can say that I have a character very similar to this in my own series.

She’s not a mother, or “abusive” or even an adult for the first part of the series.…[Read more]

Bruh I LUVVVVV TFR WRITING PROMPTS!!!! THEY CRACK ME UP!!!!!

Also I feel like that would be something Corvina would totally say

@freedomwriter76 thank u!!

@godlyfantasy12

You’re welcome! This is my favorite type of book research too, so thank you!

@koshka wow!! Thank you so much!!! That’s actually perfect and exactly how his scars are!! He does get pain actually from time to time and it directly correlates with pain that Corvina has in her hand sometimes.

Also, thank u for the info about his expressions and face muscles, didn’t even think about that! Also his sight…while his eye did escap…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12

Okkaaayyyy…*drags self back from hospital reports*

It looks like the wound is somewhat chronic, frozen in the stages just after bleeding, where the skin is sealed somewhat, but the wound is still open while no longer bleeding. which would make sense if it is painful from time to time. The magic would have to come in here as the…[Read more]

This sounds really neat!!! Could u give an example??

Anymore advice is still appreciated tho! Even for future reference lol!!! Cuz there’s conflict in…welp…all over the place in this series lol

It’s rlly funny how just typing it out and working thru it can help sooo much lol

@koshka ooh good question…

hmm…thinking about her right now…

(see…I have that “author” perspective where I see the character’s future self and how they are now XD) so in the future she’d be more up front and in control of her self, but right now, I believe she’s in such a state of turmoil in this scene that she’d lash out verbally.

But…due…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12

Ooo, wonderful tension! The things authors love to create yet struggle to write.

It sounds good so far; the emotions seem balanced to me.

How would Ara respond to November being hurt? How did she want to respond to Riven?

At this point it looks like she’s about to explode, which could manifest itself in various ways depending…[Read more]

it did the spacing weird. As in non-existent XD