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Snapper replied to the topic Writers' Corner #6 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 5 months ago
@daeus @kate-flournoy (I miss you, fellow dragon) @that_writer_Girl_99 @winter-rose @jess @delightinlife @daughteroftheking I’m here.
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Snapper replied to the topic The Legend of King Daeus in the forum Short Story Critiques 7 years, 5 months ago
@emma-flournoy Ah yes. I had to make Stanton an evil overlord somehow. 😀
@daeus *races ice cream cone to cliche* Hurrah! (I hope you don’t mind being captured. 😀 )
@delightinlife Don’t worry! There are some coconut milk ice creams in my house too. 😀
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Snapper replied to the topic The Legend of King Daeus in the forum Short Story Critiques 7 years, 5 months ago
@daeus @kate-flournoy @emma-flournoy kina-lamb @lifeofkatie (be sure to read the 1st one first) @jane-maree @ethryndal @aratrea @overcomer @audrey-caylin @jess @graciegirl @adry_grace @anne-swiftblade @christi-eaton @jadamae @jess @northerner @that_writer_girl_99 @perfectfifths @theliterarycrusader @hope @ingridrd @winter-rose @rolena-hatfield @cla…[Read more]
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Leumeister replied to the topic Aquila in the forum Sci-Fi 7 years, 5 months ago
Hello everybody tagged below!
I’ve got a bunch of unfinished drafts of stories (plus the finished draft for the Pilot for Aquila) and I was wondering if any of you would like to alpha-read some of them (and, perhaps, beta-read the finished draft). I need input on what I’m working on because I’ve got some stories I’m stuck on.
So, for those of…[Read more]
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Anne of Lothlorien started the topic My Attempt in the forum Poetry 7 years, 5 months ago
So, I read some of the poems y’all suggested. (I loved the Wreck of the Hesperus). And I tried one of my own. It’s a bit silly, and I don’t like the ‘magic’ and ‘tragic’ rhyme at all, but for lack of a better one, I left it. Maybe someone can help me change it? But how do you all like it?
The Faerie Child
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Anne of Lothlorien started the topic My Brother Wants Y'all's Opinion in the forum Film 7 years, 5 months ago
Hey there.
So.
My brother is an animator. A movie maker. And this summer he is venturing out on another project, and he has made me his co-collaborator or something like that. So he asked me to ask y’all about it and if you like it and stuff.
So… here’s the basic plot. I’m still a bit fuzzy on it and it may not be one hundred percent accurate,…[Read more] -
Daeus replied to the topic Writers' Corner #6 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 5 months ago
@delightinlife Yep. 🙂 No date set yet, but I believe I’ll plan to reach out to people we want to be on the panel this week and then the panel will probably happen something like two weeks later.
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Northerner started the topic Who here is thinking of entering Rooglewood's Five Poisoned Apples contest? in the forum 7 years, 5 months ago
It’s the last one they’re doing, and I’ve heard (though I can’t track down the rumour far enough to know for sure whether it’s true) that every submission gets feedback this time.
If you are, tell us about your…[Read more]
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Daeus replied to the topic Beginners' Tips For Writing Science Fiction in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 5 months ago
Yep. @Kina-Lamb
@Arella-Noreen
@DelightInLife
@GracieGirl
@Rachelle
@R-J-Wordsmith
@GabrielleMassman
@Dragon-Snapper
@Asyia-Serene
@Abigail-Blomberg
@Northerner
@Emma-L
@Leumeister
@PerfectFifths
@I-J-Anderson
@NatalieMarie
@Rebelutoinary
@Ethryndal
@Writefury
@Sierra-R
@SleepwalkingMK
@Brandon-Miller
@R-E-P
@The-Bean
@Anne-of-Lothlorien
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Daeus replied to the topic A True Story in the forum Non-Fiction 7 years, 6 months ago
Just a min. *snatches list* Here we…[Read more]
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Cloudy started the topic Discord Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 6 months ago
This is an invitation link to a discord group. This group is exclusive to people from KP. Please don’t invite anyone who isn’t in Kp. It will or could be used for chatting (more quickly) about stories in real time, and stuff. I’m not saying get rid of KP, considering this looks like it’s going to do away with the forum…[Read more]
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Northerner started the topic Thank you, KP! in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 6 months ago
This weekend I saw a girl who I’m certain is a writer, though I never talked to her (I’m trying to get contact information for someone who might know her, so I can ask for her contact information in a slightly less creepy way than otherwise, but that’s another story), and she reminded me how much of my writing life I spent alone.
I started…[Read more]
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Daeus replied to the topic Writer's corner #5 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 6 months ago
@winter-rose @delightinlife @that_writer_girl_99 @ethryndal @jess @audrey-caylin @dragon-snapper @graciegirl I’m writing till 9.
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Snapper replied to the topic Writer's corner #5 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 6 months ago
@delightinlife Ooh yay! Chocolate! Thank you for the motivation. 😛 This one is harder than my last.
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Ethryndal replied to the topic A (Kind of) Short Story Open to Beta Reading! 🙂 in the forum Short Story Critiques 7 years, 6 months ago
@kate-flournoy *has confidence in abilities* Well that makes me happy.
@delightinlife Sometimes when I’m writing short stories, I find that it helps to just forget about word limitations and write how you want. Then, when you’re done, you can go back through and carefully weed out any extraneous words or parts. And it might behoove you to ditch…[Read more]
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Ethryndal replied to the topic A (Kind of) Short Story Open to Beta Reading! 🙂 in the forum Short Story Critiques 7 years, 6 months ago
@delightinlife Muahahaha—*chokes* Ahem. Please keep in mind that I’m not the most experienced writer, and emotions are one of the things I struggle with, so take everything I say with a grain of salt. But I am reading a book about writing emotions, so here’s what I’ve learned from it so far.
First of all, writing your own emotions into Josiah…[Read more]
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Ethryndal replied to the topic A (Kind of) Short Story Open to Beta Reading! 🙂 in the forum Short Story Critiques 7 years, 6 months ago
@delightinlife If I can be of any help later on, I be here. 🙂
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Ethryndal replied to the topic A (Kind of) Short Story Open to Beta Reading! 🙂 in the forum Short Story Critiques 7 years, 6 months ago
@delightinlife I just want to add—Thank you for letting me beta read your story! Beta reading is something I don’t get to do very often, but I find that working objectively through someone else’s writing helps me better my own. Handing one’s Precious over to the merciless arms of the editors is never an easy thing, and I appreciate your bravery…[Read more]
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Snapper started the topic Chapter Titles in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 6 months ago
Hello again!
So, I’m editing my novel, and originally, it has chapter titles, but I’m wondering whether I should keep them or not. What are you all’s opinions on chapter titles? Can they add, or can they detract?@daeus @graciegirl @northerner @kate-flournoy @winter-rose @ethryndal @that_writer_girl_99 @jane-maree @jess @audrey-caylin @delightinlife
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Ethryndal replied to the topic A (Kind of) Short Story Open to Beta Reading! 🙂 in the forum Short Story Critiques 7 years, 6 months ago
@delightinlife Well, I’m done. 😀
Okay, I was thinking about the whole part with Reuben, and this is my idea (which is probably terrible): What if Reuben wasn’t bullying the squire? What if the kid had done something wrong, and Reuben was reprimanding him? But to Josiah, who missed the first part of the conversation, it looks like the knight is…[Read more]
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