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DelightInLife replied to the topic Writer's corner #5 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 6 months ago
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DelightInLife replied to the topic Writer's corner #5 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 6 months ago
@daeus @winter-rose @kate-flournoy @gracie-girl @ethryndal @aratrea
Hello!
One of my homework projects for our homeschool co-op is to write a short story that follows the Hero’s Journey pattern. (Is anyone familiar with the Hero’s Journey?)
Anyway, I would love to have someone beta read it and get some feedback. The assignment is due next…[Read more]
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DelightInLife replied to the topic Writer's corner #5 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 6 months ago
Oh! I forgot to post earlier what I wrote. I wrote a scene of my Hero’s Journey short story.
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DelightInLife replied to the topic Writer's corner #5 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 6 months ago
@winter-rose @enthrydal Thank you for your suggestions! Awesome! @dragon-snapper Bye!
I’m going to write for awhile longer… 🙂
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DelightInLife replied to the topic Writer's corner #5 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 6 months ago
@winter-rose @ethryndal Thank you for your help! Yes, I think I am going to have him react in anger. I just emailed my English teacher and she suggested going off the idea in the Bible where Moses kills the Egyptian. I liked that suggestion and actually was thinking of it already. I’ll just have to be careful to not make it the same as another…[Read more]
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DelightInLife replied to the topic Writer's corner #5 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 6 months ago
@winter-rose Medieval times. It is set in my own world so I do have a bit more freedom, but I am writing more realistically and not fantasy.
Thank you! I’m going to put him in my WIP this summer when I have more time to write. 🙂
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DelightInLife replied to the topic Writer's corner #5 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 6 months ago
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DelightInLife replied to the topic Writer's corner #5 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 6 months ago
@ethryndal @winter-rose @gracie-girl @dragon-snapper @kate-flournoy
Hello! Mind if I join?
I have a question for you all. I’m working on writing a story for one of my homework assignments and I am stuck on a specific question. My character in the story has a passionate and fiery spirit, and will act without thinking when he sees injustice.…[Read more]
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DelightInLife replied to the topic *waves hand wildly * Sup Keepers!! in the forum Start HERE 7 years, 6 months ago
Welcome to Kingdom’s Pen! @lady_erin Your book sounds really cool! I am actually playing the Storyteller in Peter Pan and will be doing the play in a couple weeks! Hope you enjoy it here! 🙂
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DelightInLife replied to the topic Novel Excerpt (Feedback Welcome) in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 6 months ago
“You can go back and fix things you already put down, but you can’t fix what isn’t there.”
Awesome advice, Kate! 🙂 @kate-flournoy
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DelightInLife replied to the topic Writer's corner #5 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 6 months ago
@daeus Hello! I had a question. How often do you guys do panel discussions? I was able to listen in on the last one, and would enjoy doing it again! Thank you! 🙂
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DelightInLife replied to the topic I'm Getting Published!!!!! in the forum Poetry 7 years, 6 months ago
@lola-jane Yay! Congrats! *throws ice cream into the air* *realizes that may have been a mistake* 🙂
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DelightInLife replied to the topic Ah, Just One More Thing in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 7 months ago
@corissa-maiden-of-praise Hope you have a wonderful time! (I’m in Washington) 🙂
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DelightInLife replied to the topic Anyone Want to Play Forum Volleyball? in the forum Start HERE 7 years, 7 months ago
*comes in wearing a helmet and boxing gloves* I don’t really know anything about playing volleyball but I’ll give it a shot (with extra protection just in case) 🙂
That tea sounds good @christ-eaton! Can I have a cupful?
Welcome to Kingdom’s Pen! @stewie-plotter Hope you enjoy it here! 🙂
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DelightInLife replied to the topic Hi there! in the forum Start HERE 7 years, 7 months ago
(Forgot to tag on my last reply) 🙂
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DelightInLife replied to the topic Hi there! in the forum Start HERE 7 years, 7 months ago
Hello Moriah! Welcome to the bestistest place on the internet! I’m so glad you decided to join Kingdom’s Pen!
I clicked on the link to your website and saw that said that you have taken photos in Uganda, Africa! That is really cool! I’ve actually been to Malawi, Africa last summer on a mission trip.
What kinds of things do you like to write…[Read more]
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DelightInLife replied to the topic *wants to be original, but can't think of suitable greeting* *sighs* Hello in the forum Start HERE 7 years, 7 months ago
@f5a8c3e92 Welcome to KP! I also really enjoy baking! What do you like to bake? That’s awesome that you’re learning Japanese! I’m learning Hindi myself, though I haven’t been working on it as much lately. How long have you been learning the language? 🙂
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DelightInLife replied to the topic The Legend of King Daeus in the forum Short Story Critiques 7 years, 7 months ago
@dragon-snapper @daeus Oh, thanks! Now that I clicked on the link I realized that I have taken that test before. My result was “Advocate” or INFJ. I just didn’t notice those letters on the side of the personality type until now.
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DelightInLife replied to the topic The Legend of King Daeus in the forum Short Story Critiques 7 years, 7 months ago
@dragon-snapper By the way, I keep seeing ENFJ or other letters mentioned. Is that from a personality test? If so, which one? (I’m just curious) Thanks! 🙂
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DelightInLife replied to the topic The Legend of King Daeus in the forum Short Story Critiques 7 years, 7 months ago
@dragon-snapper Oh my goodness! I didn’t read this all the way through until just now, but this is awesome! My favorite part was: “Her fist was stuck midair, and she thought back to every book she had read before. Great. Now she was living a cliché.”
Thanks so much for sharing! I am eagerly awaiting the sequel! 🙂 - Load More