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@Dekreel everyone else has some good ideas, and I second theirs. Basically, if you can bring in a side plot or throw in another antagonist to add more conflict and higher stakes it’ll keep your middle going strong.

@dekreel This isn’t an idea of what to do, exactly, but there’s an article on Go Teen Writers website about writing the middle of your story that might help you?
http://goteenwriters.blogspot.com/2012/08/writing-cream.html

I also like K.M. Weiland’s articles about the three act structure. But if you’re not an outliner that may not be as useful.

@dekreel! Haha, well I’d love too! I’m hoping to get a video up on how to get good photos on my blog through YouTube up soon during Thanksgiving Break, so I’ll link to it if you want!

Here’s a link to a post on my blog too if you want to see that! Photography just comes naturally to me; I think it was passed down from my photographer father!!…[Read more]

@dekreel I read it as dee-kreel, if that helps *shrug* but pronounce it however you like 😉

@dragon-snapper I agree. I think the films were trying to do different things, which is okay, I guess. But Force Awakens was setting up new characters we were meant to be invested in, because we’ll be following them for this new trilogy at least, and I’d…[Read more]

@dekreel *processing*
Okay, so a middle of a story. I know absolutely nothing about Doctor Who, but I’m thinking you could add more clues as to whoever this Riddler person is (I skimmed the Thirteen plus Five thing, BTW). Some scenes could include traveling through this planet, searching for the answer to the riddle. Suggestions – 1) performing…[Read more]

@dekreel @perfectfifths Yes. Yes. I was mean. Sorry. 😛

@lady-iliara *blink* I have no idea…

If I am to put a quote out there, then I won’t do another KP obscure one. One that should get this topic’s engine running. 😉

“It’s man’s discovery of Nunya.”

@dekreel you mean by “they find the riddler” they find the person who gave them the riddle? But in the excerpt it looked like the riddler already came to them

As far as what they do in between… well, in my opinion they would try to solve the riddle, of course. Once they’ve landed on the planet and need to find the answer to the riddle, they’ve…[Read more]

@dekreel you could have the characters figuring out how the Fifth doctor and Dekreel are on the planet with them and a time loop isn’t happening. Maybe trying to get the two of them to help figure out what the riddle means?

@dekreel Their country is called Araluen.

@dekreel *wanders off and gets distracted* Ooo shiny… *chases shiny to library website* Well, no harm in requesting a new book while I’m here… *already has way too many books*  *eventually wanders back to KP* Well, it’s past my bedtime. Good night!

@lady-iliara Heh heh, I know…

@radically-surrendered Thanks so much!! I can tell we have a lot in common 😉 Honestly, I have no idea how I got that big emoji… I pressed “quote” on one of my comments and it did this really weird thing, haha… when I posted it I was like “WAIT WHAT??!!” Hm, I can’t choose on a favorite animal, there’s too many…[Read more]

@dekreel Lol. Whatcha working on? I’m writing about the Pastry of Doom.

@dekreel *bursts in, late* You still around? 😀

@dekreel yes, the human picture is steam-punk. Aetherlight is a steam-punk game, and that’s where I got the picture from. 🙂 Aethasia is the land in Aetherlight, so (I’m guessing that) everyone from there would probably have steam-punk-y things too.

@dekreel, I’m signing off

@dekreel

@dekreel, dystopian is in the future with a society that is…@charisetter! Help me explain!

@dekreel, no. I don’t do NaNoWriMo, I don’t have time.

@dekreel, ooh, DW.

It’s a mix between fantasy and dystopian. But it leans more towards fantasy, minus the fantasy animals and species.