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@seekjustice I’m not deleting them… Just moving them to be more of side characters for this book. They each have their perspectives and stories. But all the POVs got muddled and confused readers when I was swapping between six different people. 0.0

@seekjustice So, so. I’m not liked editing to much and I’m having to get back into the swing of things.
But Jack is behaving. Just having trouble Showing, not Telling,
Also dealing with the hard truth that I have to change POVs in places and make a few MCs into side characters. :*(
(It will only be Alex, Jack, and Cele. Mostly…)

@seekjustice It’s Finding Secrets. The one I did all those collages for. 😀

@alia Yikes… Hope you feel better soon.
Good night then.

@catwing, @seekjustice, I disappeared to have dinner, and now (because I don’t feel well) am going to bed

@seekjustice Welcome.

@ingridrd what is her power? I really like it.
@daughteroftheking oooooh… I like it.

@alia @seekjustice @rochellaine @dragon-snapper @ethryndal @ingridrd @daughteroftheking
I’m actually sitting down and editing my book tonight! No distractions this time! Yay! (Boo…)

@jenwriter17 Kay would jump into Niagara Falls. Not much air up there where the plane is flying.
Alex says the same.
what about your characters?

@rochellaine, maybe. I’m going to submit it to the Story Embers contest, so I don’t know yet

@seekjustice,

I’m back

@seekjustice @skredder @sarah-anson (if you’d like to read it too 🙂 ) Chapter 7! 😀

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1_aD1ola1rVG3cFwLSZ8S87nBtL7_j1xCdWK0rpUgpek/edit

@seekjustice Haha!  I guess you do, don’t you! 😀

I’m going to go now.  I’ll probably be back tonight around the usual time.  Hope to see you then!

@seekjustice I love J names too, but I guess for now I’ll go with Marc.

Did you decide to actually edit Stars?  How’s it going?

@jenwriter17 Hello!  Aaaand…goodbye… 🙁  Hope to see you soon!

@seekjustice Haha. 😛  I like Jay, but I already have two boys in the book named Jared and Josiah, so another “j” name might seem a bit much, don’t you think?  (Although alliteration’s always awesome and amazing.)  Marc might be good. (I wrote a whole story with alliteration once…[Read more]

@seekjustice @rochellaine @alia Ugh, sorry guys I have to go. I’ll be on later though 🙂

@daughteroftheking  Ooh!  I like it.  🙂

@alia Sounds great! 🙂  By the way, if you’d let me read it when you finish I’d love to, because like I said before, it’s a really cool idea!

Don’t mind me, I’m just quickly explaining myself

@rochellaine, The first few times I saw the prompt I rolled my eyes because there was no way I was going to endorse doing bad and still coming out the winner. But then the twist came to my head and I figured out how to write it without that being the theme.

@seekjustice @rochellaine @alia Are you all still on?

@alia That is a really cool story idea!! Poor little kid. 🙂  I kind of think there’s a theological problem with it, though, don’t you think?  “All’s well that ends well” isn’t exactly a Biblical concept.  (Please don’t be upset.  I’m just asking, and you can write whatever story you want.  And I could be completely wrong about how this stor…[Read more]