Daniel Thompson

@dragon-snapper I am come!

@kate-flournoy Yes, it’s legal. Ideas aren’t copyrighted, only the organization of those ideas. So if you were to create your own course basically copying everything we say, that would be a copyright violation, but pretty much anything less than that is totally fine.

It’s actually good promotion for us. 😛

Some day I’m going to release you on…[Read more]

Is there an intended use for this topic @clairec

@dragon-snapper I agree. It could work. It might be confusing, but I think as long as you clearly establish the POV transition at the beginning of each chapter, I think it should be fine.

@princessfoo Certainly. It’s not easy, but it is doable and you’ll be very glad for the effort. May I ask what it is the characters struggle with?

@princessfoo Neat story concept.

It’s good to have God be part of our stories. It’s not essential or even always the right thing to do, but since he created the world, rules the world, and most stories don’t have Him in them, I think it’s a noble goal.

On the other hand, I’m not a big proponent of making God essentially a character of your…[Read more]

I guess I’ll take a break too. I wrote a little over 400.

@winter-rose @that_writer_girl_99 @ethryndal I’m joining in!

@kate-flournoy Now that is funny.

@kate-flournoy Yes, I can read music, just very poorly. It will be enough though. I’ll check this out when I have a moment.

@That_Writer_Girl_99 Well, yes, but is there a test or something to verify which type you are?

Hear, ye! How long shall the page be fruitless and the intellect idle? Where thy pen, oh writer! Forth unto the conflict! (I’m trying to convince myself to write.)

@winter-rose @that_writer_girl_99 @graciegirl @f5a8c3e92 @dragon-snapper

@that_writer_girl_99 Not sure exactly what you’re referring to, but I think everything I said was good. Keep at it! May the ideas be with you.

Woah woah, hold it people. I rule a separate kingdom. Josiah and I are in alliance. *looks warily at raspberries hoping they aren’t poisoned*

@dragon-snapper @jenali Signing off. I didn’t really come up with any ideas, but it should probably be tense enough. We’ll see.

@dragon-snapper @jenali Ok, now I’m back.

@dragon-snapper @jenali Ooops, sorry. I guess I have other work I need to do.

@dragon-snapper @jenali I’ll join in. I’m trying to figure out how to add another layer of conflict to my climax.

@That_Writer_Girl_99 I’ll just repeat what Kate said that the character voice is really well done. I’m especially surprised you’ve been able to get this good without anyone critiquing you. Honestly, that’s downright crazy.

It does seem that the plot needs some development though, as well as the question of what to do with the elementals.

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Hi, @moriahs. Glad to find another historical fiction lover. I can’t say I love the research, but if I can handle that, it’s one of my favorite genres.