Daisy Torres

The most recent book I’ve read was A Noble Masquerade by Kristi Ann Hunter. Now, my sister adores this book, but for some reason, I didn’t. It has a good interesting plot, pretty likable characters, but I just couldn’t get into it. It was quite a fast-paced book though. Maybe it was just the writing style, but it seemed bland to me. My sister…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12

This guy sounds fascinating!  His backstory is awesome, and he sounds like a genuine character.  For likeability, you could:

1)  Give the MC and Ridley something in common (a hobby, a genre of music, a favorite food, etc)

2)  like @elfwing said, moments of vulnerability.  That would make the reader open up to him really fast…[Read more]

@joy-caroline

Ah, sorry I never responded to this! *facepalms* My schedule is so busy lately and I forget everything so my apologies. :O Yes, that music is a.m.a.z.i.n.g. and I appreciate you sharing it!! It will be super helpful for my upcoming scenes!! 😀 Thank you! Oh yes, Religion is such a great class! Yup, I’m also taking American h…[Read more]

sorry it keeps eating my reply, so if you get like, five responses you can blame the website i guess? XD

@godlyfantasy12 well… it’s good from what you’ve described and I agree with @gracie-j

Anyways, I’m no expert by any means, but here are things I’ve used for my antagonist

1: moments of vulnerability where he’s honest with the girl he…[Read more]

@godly-fantasy12 well… it’s good from what you’ve described and I agree with @gracie-j

Anyways, I’m no expert by any means, but here are things I’ve used for my antagonist

1: moments of vulnerability where he’s honest with the girl he loves; a good relationship whether close friendship or romance requires honesty and vulnerability on both…[Read more]

@godly-fantasy12 well… it’s good from what you’ve described and I agree with @gracie-j

Anyways, I’m no expert by any means, but here are things I’ve used for my antagonist

1: moments of vulnerability where he’s honest with the girl he loves; a good relationship whether close friendship or romance requires honesty and vulnerability on both…[Read more]

@godly-fantasy well…. *breathes out

I’m no expert by any means, but here are things I’ve used for my antagonist

1: moments of vulnerability where he’s honest with the girl he loves; a good relationship whether close friendship or romance requires honesty and vulnerability on both sides.

(So maybe have scenes with him being open with Jocelyn at…[Read more]

@scoutfinch180 Hi! Thanks for the input. I’ll see how I can improve it for sure! 🙂 I’m not really into emotional scenes of this kind but these two have a special relationship, so I wanted to add it. And this is the first draft which is why there may be repeating words, and thank you for mentioning that as I sometimes forget that kind of stuff X…[Read more]

HI, @mkfairygirl! Thank you SO much for your tips!! I’ll def check out your website for inspiration!:)

@maryg3 Hi, Mary!!! 😀 That’s AWESOME that you’re going to start a blog!!!!!!!!!! You’ll LOVE it!!!!! Blogs are so much fun and a great way to connect with your readers!!!! For pages, definitely a home, about, and contact. If you want a separate “blog” page you can, or you can make your home page your blog page (which is what I do). You can get…[Read more]

@kathleenramm oh man good question! I haven’t actually sat down and read a book in months. I’ve been busy with moving across the country and renos and now moving again XD

I’ve listened through the Hobbit and LOTR several times in the last year in audiobook. The last book I actually held in my hands and read was Children of Hurin. Man, that is a…[Read more]

@gracie-j ok! good to know XD, thanks!

@gracie-j yeah I’d say it is KP because that’s happening to me tooat first it scared me because I thought maybe my computer had a virus or something, XD but I tried my phone and it did the same thing 

Hi @keilah-h,

Okay! I will consider that! Thank you!!😊

@jenwriter17

Ahh! I see! Okay thank you! That IS very helpful! I will definitely do that!:)

@seekjustice

Thank so much!! You’re advice on topics was very helpful! I will definitely keep in mind what I want my target audience to be! Your blog was really neat! Thank you for sharing:)

@jenwriter17

Thank you for your tips, especially on branding and colors and figuring out a mission!! Oh, sorry if this is a stupid question but what did…[Read more]

@gracie-j ok, yeah it wouldn’t let me respond for almost half an hour , then it finally loaded the response box 😂

my wifi is fine, it might be my account?

@gracie-j
Thanks! By the way am I the only one having trouble loading the page??? It’s been acting weird today. Wouldn’t load the website and errors and stuff…