@daeus
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Elizabeth replied to the topic Writer's corner #5 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years ago
No one bothered to tag me? I’m offended.
Just joking.
I’m here too. @daeus @dragon-snapper @winter-rose
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Snapper replied to the topic Writer's corner #5 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years ago
@daeus Hello!
@winter-rose I am editing my novel, and might move on to edit my contest story, then I shall brainstorm. -
Snapper replied to the topic Writer's corner #5 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years ago
I am editing for a while if anyone is out there. @daeus @audrey-caylin @winter-rose @ethryndal @jess @kate-flournoy @jane-maree @graciegirl @jenali
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Emma Flournoy replied to the topic The Legend of King Daeus in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 years ago
@Daeus Oh, I knew she drew it, I just saw it colored in your version. Cool. Effects.
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Anne of Lothlorien started the topic The Wonderland Story in the forum 9 years ago
So, remember a few KP newsletter contest back, when it was the girl holding up the Wonderland hitchhiking sign? Well, I wrote an entry for that, but unfortunately didn’t turn it in in time. But I have been thinking about turning it into a short story. Problem is, I really like what I’ve written, I just can’t think of a beginning, a background for…[Read more]
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Jane Maree replied to the topic To blog or not to blog in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years ago
@GracieGirl @Daeus I guess it could just be my personal experience with some of the WordPress blogs I follow that could be spurring my dislike, because I definitely agree that they can work well. If you know what you’re doing and you use everything properly. I think the main thing is that I’ve found the comments difficult to reply to, and…[Read more]
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DelightInLife replied to the topic Writer's corner #5 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years ago
@daeus @winter-rose @kate-flournoy @gracie-girl @ethryndal @aratrea
Hello!
One of my homework projects for our homeschool co-op is to write a short story that follows the Hero’s Journey pattern. (Is anyone familiar with the Hero’s Journey?)
Anyway, I would love to have someone beta read it and get some feedback. The assignment is due next…[Read more]
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Snapper replied to the topic The Legend of King Daeus in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 years ago
@daeus *screams and hides in piles of gold*
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Shaina replied to the topic The Legend of King Daeus in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 years ago
@ethryndal @aratrea Hahahahaha!!!!!! I was laughing so hard I’m surprised my family didn’t come to see if I was ok! That picture is so perfect! I love it!
@daeus Yes, the caption, just yes. You guys seriously made my day. 🙂 -
Elizabeth replied to the topic Writer's corner #5 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years ago
I’ll be planning/editing/writing for awhile if anyone’s interested. @daeus @ethryndal @anne-of-lothlorien @kate-flournoy @dragon-snapper @winter-rose
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bethanys.inky.roses replied to the topic How much conflict is enough? in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 9 years ago
Yes, @daeus, that was very helpful. Now I’m off to make sure my character has a goal as she’s struggling with shyness! And figure out how her goals will change as she changes.
@anne-of-lothlorien I love Stepping Heavenward! It’s on my “Top Ten Books I Recommend To Girls” list. Thank you too for the “reader feedback.” That reminds me…I have…[Read more] -
Emma Flournoy replied to the topic The Legend of King Daeus in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 years ago
@Daeus That is amazingly perfect. Did you color it?
You should put that as the header for Josiah’s video series or something…opening picture in the video, something. 😛 -
Gracie started the topic To blog or not to blog in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years ago
Sup, y’all?
Yes, ’tis me yet again, and I am here for another dose of writerly wisdom. What can I say? You guys are too helpful for your own good.
As you probably guessed from my horribly clichéd thread title, I am currently in a debate with myself about whether or not it would be in my best interests to start a blog. I have mulled on it for…[Read more]
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Anne of Lothlorien replied to the topic The Legend of King Daeus in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 years ago
Thank you @daeus. That. Is. Perfect.
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Anne of Lothlorien replied to the topic Writer's corner #5 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years ago
Hey @daeus, I think the time might have come for a new Writing Corner again… just a humble suggestion, oh king.
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Anne of Lothlorien replied to the topic The Legend of King Daeus in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 years ago
@Ethryndal… Oh. My. Goodness.
THAT IS SO PERFECT! HIS BEARD, HIS FACE, (it’s so recognizable) THE FROG… YOU EVEN GOT IT TO GRIN EVILLY!!!! This just made my day. Totally. @aratrea, you should put that as your avatar.@daeus I think I’ll plan the first launch of your take-over; I’m thinking multi-colored balloons popping out of boxes and…[Read more]
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bethanys.inky.roses replied to the topic How much conflict is enough? in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 9 years ago
Thanks, @daeus I actually just listened to your lesson on conflict two days ago, and so the added insight was helpful!
If I’m showing her thought process, and then how she acts, and how she changes, is that sufficient “conflict” (I’ll use quotes to show I’m not discussing warfare) for a book of this genre?For example, the first part to my…[Read more]
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bethanys.inky.roses replied to the topic Greetings, fellow scribblers! in the forum Start HERE 9 years ago
That was fast! It’s easy to see you believe in the cause of the Kingdom! @daeus
I’m currently studying holiness in the book of 1 Peter. Something really eye-opening for me was discovering that grace to obey comes as we obey. We don’t wait around till we feel Christ-like, but obey right now, with the faith that God will work. I really desire…[Read more]
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Writer's corner #5 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years ago
@Daeus yep. 590 words, so I’m pretty happy. 🙂 Thanks yourself.
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Writer's corner #5 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years ago
@Daeus writing now. I’ll be going until two o clock.
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