@daeus
Active 5 years, 11 months ago- Rank: Chosen One
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Hannah replied to the topic Salutations! in the forum Start HERE 8 years, 7 months ago
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Glitter Ocelot replied to the topic Salutations! in the forum Start HERE 8 years, 7 months ago
@josiahdeboer : Noooo of course you didn’t. *grin* And thank you. xD Glitter Ocelot came from the facts that I both love glitter and some people in my life decided that I’m actually deep down an ocelot. xD
@emma-flournoy : Thanks Emma! ^-^ ENFJs are fun. =D I like reading and writing both fantasy and sci-fi. *nod* What’re…[Read more] -
Catwing replied to the topic Writers' Corner #9 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 7 months ago
@daeus @daughteroftheking @seekjustice @jessi-rae @emily @salome01w4g @epicaddie2 @dragon-snapper I have arrived! I’m writing more of my outline now!
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Catwing replied to the topic Title for my story in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 8 years, 7 months ago
@daeus *shrugs* Oh, well.
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Catwing replied to the topic Title for my story in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 8 years, 7 months ago
@emma-flournoy @kate-flournoy Time-travel symbols? Let’s see… A watch, gears, swirly portals, a glowing book, a clock face, distorted picture, etc… @daeus That helpful?
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Emma Flournoy replied to the topic Title for my story in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 8 years, 7 months ago
@Daeus Oh right, To Soar ON Eagles. It didn’t give me any Native American vibes till Kate mentioned it (thanks a lot Kate. XD) but I don’t think it’s the best one anyway. Yet.
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Gracie replied to the topic Title for my story in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 8 years, 7 months ago
@Daeus So far I agree with the general crowd. Those first three, eh…..not really feeling it.
However, The Man Who Came Back….
I hear an echo of that geeky squeal I give when something in a story is totally awesome.
(In comprehensible English: what Kate said. That’s more like it. I don’t think that one necessarily though.) 😛
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Jackson Graham started the topic Article Question in the forum Fantasy 8 years, 7 months ago
@gretald, @bluejay, @writefury, @daeus, @hannah-olsen, @mark-kamibaya, @Sarah-H, @kate-flournoy, @emma-flournoy, @dragon-snapper, @michael-stanton
I just read the article “How to Resist Writing Sterotypical Fantasy Races”. In my book (which is set to be available for sale by Christmas), I have elves and an orcish race. Does this make it too…[Read more]
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Snapper replied to the topic Title for my story in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 8 years, 7 months ago
@daeus Ooh, I like that…although it is a little long. Of course, the title ‘The Lion, the Witch and the Wardrobe’ is long too. XD Maybe instead of ‘who’ you could say ‘that’….I don’t know…weird Snapper preferences.
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Ethryndal started the topic Taking Breaks from Unfinished Books in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 7 months ago
Heeey… I need advice…
I’ve been considering putting my current book on hold temporarily/possibly forever and writing something different, the reason behind this being that I’ve just hit several plot holes and character issues that will require an excessive amount of brain power to overcome. This has been a troubled book, as I’ve had to…[Read more]
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Title for my story in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 8 years, 7 months ago
@Daeus oooh, that’s more like it. I don’t think that one necessarily (because it gives away the ending) but that’s definitely a whole lot more dynamic and deep.
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Title for my story in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 8 years, 7 months ago
@Daeus that does give off some pretty strong Native American vibes, just so you’re aware.
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Snapper replied to the topic Title for my story in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 8 years, 7 months ago
I like the last one, because that does relate to your book the mos, although I like the wording of ‘The Time of Courage’, or even without the ‘the’ in there.
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Mariposa Aristeo replied to the topic Title for my story in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 8 years, 7 months ago
@daeus I know I haven’t read your book, but I thought I might be able to at least help you with your title. 🙂 I like the second one best. I don’t much care for the last one; it sounds a little too unoriginal. If you want to convey time travel in the title though, none of these seem to show that. And I agree with what Josiah said about the first…[Read more]
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Emma Flournoy replied to the topic Title for my story in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 8 years, 7 months ago
@Kate-Flournoy @Daeus Symbol? EAGLE, EAGLE, EAGLE! To Soar Like Eagles.…
*snort* I KNOW. But that’s all I’ve ever been able to think of when I’ve thought what you could name it.
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Title for my story in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 8 years, 7 months ago
@Daeus of the three I like the last one best, but none of them are really jumping out to me as worthy of the story. Is there something… less generic? Maybe something that more obviously says ‘time travel’?
All three of those also seem slightly forced, theme-wise. *scrunches self down in chair and trails off into unhelpful muttering* I don’t…[Read more] -
Hannah started the topic Historical Fiction Writers in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 7 months ago
A little thread for all of us lovers of writing or reading HF
If there’s already a thread for this I apologize…. not really *mischievous grin*
I’ll tag a few people I know like HF
@daeus and @seekjustice Do either of you know of anymore HF writers or do we rule the roost?? 😀 😛 -
Catwing replied to the topic Writers' Corner #9 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 7 months ago
@jane-maree @daeus @salome01w4g @dragon-snapper @daughteroftheking @emily @shannon @seekjustice @jessi-Rae @writer-peoples! *flys in* I’m outlining tonight. *throws feathers* Is anyone else writing too?
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Jane Maree replied to the topic Writers' Corner #9 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 7 months ago
@Daeus @Dragon-Snapper @That_Writer_Girl_99 @Emily @everyone
I’m going to be critiquing for the better half of the day again. *settles down with some pizza* I’ll be here for several hours. -
Hannah replied to the topic Hi in the forum Start HERE 8 years, 7 months ago
@daeus *collapses with relief* oh good, good, good!!! 🙂 I seem to be a minority when it comes to writing, at least around here.
@theacornman whoa!!! that’s very interesting!! I think I know what cornwall is…. :{ - Load More
