@daeus
Active 5 years, 11 months ago- Rank: Chosen One
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Emma Flournoy replied to the topic Title for my story in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 8 years, 7 months ago
@Daeus Sounds good.
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Emma Flournoy replied to the topic New Website Party! in the forum Announcements 8 years, 7 months ago
@Daeus Ah, so I see. Thanks.
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ClaireC replied to the topic Title for my story in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 8 years, 7 months ago
I love ‘Fools in the Darkness’, @daeus. Good luck!
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Catwing replied to the topic Title for my story in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 8 years, 7 months ago
‘Fools In The Darkness’ It sounds suspenseful… @daeus
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katie replied to the topic Title for my story in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 8 years, 7 months ago
@daeus –
I’m liking “Key to the Future” or “Fools in the Darkness” – I don’t really care for “The Time Traveler’s Dilemma” — too “simple” maybe? 😉
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Gracie replied to the topic Title for my story in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 8 years, 7 months ago
@Daeus Fools in the Darkness all the way. I love how it ties in even if or perhaps bc it’s not as obvious a tie in as the others. Plus, the other two…I just feel like they’re rehashes of titles I’ve heard before. I can’t quite put my finger on where I’ve heard them but they ring a bell.
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Sage G replied to the topic Hey, hi, hello! in the forum Start HERE 8 years, 7 months ago
@shannon Yeah, I’m happy to know I’m not alone here! I was homeschooled my entire life, from start to finish!
I am very much human…as far as I know. >.>@princessfoo Thank you!
@emily I always like studying current events.
@that_writer_girl_99 I used to write poetry, but lately I write on my blog, or work on short-story/book ideas.
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Emma Flournoy replied to the topic Title for my story in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 8 years, 7 months ago
@Daeus I’m going to be really helpful and say I love Fools in the Darkness. I LOVE that thematic tie-in, and it does sound intriguing as a title. I don’t, however, know that it has enough to do with the overall theme, like Kate said… So I really like Key to the Future as well, which has more significance, though it doesn’t sound quite as intriguing.
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bethanys.inky.roses replied to the topic Hey, hi, hello! in the forum Start HERE 8 years, 7 months ago
@sage-g @kate-flournoy @daeus How did we forget such an important item?!
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Emma Flournoy replied to the topic New Website Party! in the forum Announcements 8 years, 7 months ago
@Corissa-Maiden-of-Praise Heheh. 😀
@Daeus I thought so.
@Dragon-Snapper A KP conference would be absolutely amazing. As long as I could come. XDOh and @Aratrea, I don’t know if this is new or if I just didn’t notice it before, but the forum search option is w.o.n.d.e.r.f.u.l. SO convenient. The categorization of site content on the side,…[Read more]
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Title for my story in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 8 years, 7 months ago
@Daeus true… I didn’t notice that. I still think though that just picking it up and not knowing anything about the story, it really wouldn’t work for me. You wouldn’t notice the twist in the meaning until the very end of the book, and it’s not as integral to the overall theme as it could be. Just a brief reference to a part of the result.
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Snapper replied to the topic Title for my story in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 8 years, 7 months ago
@daeus I’m late but I like the Fools in the Darkness best.
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Anne of Lothlorien replied to the topic Prayer Requests in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 7 months ago
THE BEST OF NEWS AND THE MOST BESTIEST ANSWER TO PRAYER PEOPLES!!!!!
Gladys Joy is officially HOME!!!
So my little sister was officially diagnosed with Down Syndrome, (we will need much prayer over the years for that) and she has three little holes in her heart, but they are not immediately threatening. Because of the weak muscle tone from DS,…[Read more]
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Title for my story in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 8 years, 7 months ago
@Daeus oh boy… 😛 Um. I have to say The Time Traveler’s Dilemma still takes the cake for me but if there really is another very popular book out there with a similar title, probably scratch it.
Fools in the Darkness… meh. Who wants to read about fools?
Key to the Future… I like it. It will probably grow on me. I especially like it because……[Read more] -
Hannah replied to the topic Title for my story in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 8 years, 7 months ago
@daeus the time traveler’s dilemma ….. it sounds kinda boring and unintriguing I would browse over it.
Key to the future , sounds creepy and scary hence I would browse over it.
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Hannah replied to the topic Title for my story in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 8 years, 7 months ago
@daeus Fools in the Darkness
Sounds so mysterious
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Title for my story in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 8 years, 7 months ago
@Daeus ooh! I really like the Time Traveler’s Dilemma. Like, really like it.
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ClaireC started the topic Book Length in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 7 months ago
Hey all, I’ve got a quick question.
What do you personally think is an average/good word count for a novel. Also, what are your own word counts?
I’ve estimated that mine will be somewhere between 80,000 and 100,000. It depends on how much I expand or cut out in the editing stage.
@daeus, @kate-flournoy, @aratrea, @jane-maree, @dragon-snapper, @co…[Read more] -
ClaireC replied to the topic Title for my story in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 8 years, 7 months ago
@daeus, I’m not much of an authority on the time travel genre, but I find that ‘The Time Traveler Who Wasn’t Ready’ is a little clunky. It gives to much away to me (unless that’s what you’re going for). It depends on if your MC knows he’s a time traveler or if he discovers it at your key or inciting event. I haven’t read you’re book, so this may…[Read more]
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Hannah replied to the topic Character/Fiction inspired Typography/Art in the forum Art 8 years, 7 months ago

Take 5…..
edit: it works *squeals and falls over because I’m so happy it worked!!!* okay @emily @shannon @daeus @graciegirl @daughteroftheking @dragon-snapper @catwing @ anyone else I should have tagged 😛
Here is the first collage for my HF story (Just pretend the people are wearing 18th century colonial clothing 😉 😛 )
Thanks Jenni it worked!!! - Load More
