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Jenna Terese replied to the topic Writers' Corner #15 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 5 months ago
@ariel-ashira Oh, phew, that’s good. not that he got beat up though 🙂 @rochellaine I love goats too!
Rochellaine, that’s a great idea! I’ll go ahead and start the document. Should I make a topic for it?
I don’t think I realized that was you in the collage! 😀
Another snippet:
The morning broke grey and misty over the city. Rin hadn’t s…[Read more]
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Ariel Ashira replied to the topic Writers' Corner #15 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 5 months ago
@rochellaine I love goats too! Â Do have any? Â We had some little pygmy goats for a while, and nubians back when I was like five.
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Ariel Ashira replied to the topic Writers' Corner #15 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 5 months ago
@jenwriter17 Actually, Joshua saves the goat although he really gets beat up in the process. Â He knows how much the goat means to the blind boy, because it helps him go places like a seeing eye dog.
This story is set in A.D. 31-33 and has the death, resurrection, and accession of Jesus in it. Â Is that what you mean?
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Jenna Terese replied to the topic Writers' Corner #15 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 5 months ago
@rochellaine I was gonna ask you; do you wanna tag someone else to do the ‘broken air-conditioner’ poem? my life isn’t letting me work on it much, so I’m afraid it would take forever to finish it.
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Ariel Ashira replied to the topic Truly Lost our Minds in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 5 months ago
@filewriterbase13x Oh good!  And I like B-bot. 🙂
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Jenna Terese replied to the topic Writers' Corner #15 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 5 months ago
@ariel-ashira I like it! 🙂 that poor boy who got his goat taken away……
what genre is your WIP?
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Ariel Ashira replied to the topic Writers' Corner #15 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 5 months ago
@rochellaine @jenwriter17 Okay, here’s from one of my stories…
Joshua’s fists clenched. Â The frenzied mob of white-clad bacchantes grabbed the little black goat from the blind boy, who gave a cry and tried to reach his pet. Â His mother pulled them both out of reach of the drunken crowd. Â The screams and cheers of the bacchantes filled the ni…[Read more]
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Jenna Terese replied to the topic Writers' Corner #15 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 5 months ago
@rochellaine *looks at empty wallet* i’m just saving my faves to pinterest 🙂 yup, the modesty struggle is real. I actually found quite a few websites that have modest clothing. let me know if you want the list 😉 i probably thought of you cuz some of your writing prompt collages have vintage-y photos. 😉
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Jenna Terese replied to the topic Writers' Corner #15 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 5 months ago
@ariel-ashira Yes, it is 😀
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Jenna Terese replied to the topic Writers' Corner #15 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 5 months ago
@rochellaine I was just looking at a website modcloth.com, and I though “hmm, maybe Rochellaine likes vintage clothing.” Here’s the link if you wanna check it out (not all the clothing is modest, but there are some cute things 🙂 ): https://www.modcloth.com/
i like the snippet 🙂 poor girl….
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Ariel Ashira replied to the topic Writers' Corner #15 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 5 months ago
@rochellaine Nice! Â Does Chara go to the hospital???
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Ariel Ashira replied to the topic Writers' Corner #15 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 5 months ago
@jenwriter17 Thats really cool! Â Is that from your book?
I would like to, but I don’t have access to our computer right now, so I am just using notebooks to work on my plot lines and such while I can’t actually be writing the story.
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Jenna Terese replied to the topic Writers' Corner #15 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 5 months ago
@ariel-ashira Welcome! we’re sharing WIP snippets if you want to too. 🙂
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Jenna Terese replied to the topic Writers' Corner #15 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 5 months ago
@rochellaine Okay, here’s one:
  That laugh. It shook Rin’s core and made her shudder. Her ears tingled and her eyes squeezed shut.
  Enough.
  Rin flung an arm out. Her fist hit Takara full on the cheek.
  Takara stumbled back and the soldiers grabbed Rin’s arms. Takara steadied herself and gingerly felt her face. It was already red. “How d…[Read more]
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Ariel Ashira replied to the topic Writers' Corner #15 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 5 months ago
@rochellaine@ jenwriter17 Hi, guys!  I can’t be on long, but maybe for a little if were talking about anything. 🙂
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Jenna Terese replied to the topic Writers' Corner #15 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 5 months ago
@rochellaine We can do anything between a couple sentences to a paragraph if you want. 🙂
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Ariel Ashira replied to the topic Need Advice with my Character's Responses in the forum Characters 8 years, 5 months ago
@rochellaine Thank you! Â Yeah, his sister was five when he left, and she hardly remembers him. Â Also, because of the traumatizing situation they were in for a while when he was taken away, she has hardly spoken for those two years. Â My poor little character!
I find it tons of fun, but also difficult to write these very emotional scenes. Â I enj…[Read more]
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Jenna Terese replied to the topic Writers' Corner #15 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 5 months ago
@rochellaine haha “course of” that’s cute! 😉
Yup, my dystopian. 🙂
you wanna share snippets of our WIPs? it’s okay if you don’t want to.
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Jenna Terese replied to the topic Writers' Corner #15 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 5 months ago
@rochellaine I think I can be on for a while 🙂 Working on your western?
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Jenna Terese replied to the topic PRAYER REQUESTS #2 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 5 months ago
@alia Well if it’s in God’s will, He’ll definitely make a way somehow. 🙂 I’ll be praying.
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