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Jenna Terese replied to the topic Writers' Corner #16 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 4 months ago

@alia Yes! Are you still on?
Jenna Terese replied to the topic My Life is Novellas in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 4 months ago

@seekjustice Thanks so much for your advice, it makes sense. I’ll try to focus more on what my story needs instead of what I want 😀
Jenna Terese replied to the topic Clouded Fury Alpha links in the forum Novel Critique Requests 8 years, 4 months ago

@skredder Cool! I should be able to read it all tonight 🙂
Ingrid replied to the topic WANTED: Alpha Readers!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 8 years, 4 months ago

@jenwriter17 OH, gotcha! I totally get it. Thanks for your willingness. 🙂
Jenna Terese posted an update 8 years, 4 months ago

I’m going on a critiquing/beta/alpha reading hiatus! (once I finished reading for Ingridrd, Seekjustice, and Skredder that is). These upcoming months are just going to be so busy. I’ll let y’all know when I’m available for reading again. 😉 I might make exceptions once in a while for really short critiques.
@skredder @seekjustice @ingridrd @rochel…[Read more]
- Ingrid replied 8 years, 4 months ago
  
  *thumbs up*
- Skredder replied 8 years, 4 months ago
  
  Good luck with your upcoming months! 😀
- SeekJustice replied 8 years, 4 months ago
  
  Okay, no worries! I’ll try to catch up on your novel soon 😉
  - Jenna Terese replied 8 years, 4 months ago
    
    @seekjustice Okay, no rush 😉
Jenna Terese replied to the topic WANTED: Alpha Readers!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 8 years, 4 months ago

@ingridrd I’d be glad to critique this 🙂

But, y’all, this’ll be my last critique/beta/alpha reading job for a while. The upcoming months are going to be pretty busy (a few trips out of town, getting my WIP ready for an editor at Realm Makers, my equestrian team season starting, beginning a blog). I’ll finished reading for @skredder and @seekjusti…[Read more]
Jenna Terese replied to the topic Conference Season Starting…Kapeefer Meetups in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 4 months ago

@warrenluther04 aw I won’t be going to California this year (actually, probably not until 2019 or 2020 🙁 )

How was your hiatus? 🙂
Ingrid started the topic WANTED: Alpha Readers!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 8 years, 4 months ago

Okay, y’all.

Here are the first couple chapters of the first draft of my fantasy WIP, Substitute. Please, please, please be harsh. Pick it apart. 🙂

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1mfYLvDN_yaH-bZPaBtSAFRid80w3Pm6NgUrJUZrQkG4/edit

Imma tag the people who critiqued the Prologue before, but anyone can edit!

@jenwriter17 @epicaddie2 @daughte…[Read more]
Ingrid replied to the topic Create-a-story in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 4 months ago

There is some shuffling, then more silence.

“Brek, what—?”

The door bursts open.
Ariel Ashira replied to the topic Need Advice with my Character's Responses in the forum Characters 8 years, 4 months ago

@daeus Okay. Thank you! Its still helpful!
Jenna Terese replied to the topic Writers' Corner #16 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 4 months ago

@alia Sorry, I can’t be on tonight. Will you be on tomorrow?
Jenna Terese replied to the topic My Life is Novellas in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 4 months ago

@jane-maree @sam-kowal @ariel-ashira Thank you all so much! I’m beginning to figure this out now 🙂
Jane Maree replied to the topic My Life is Novellas in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 4 months ago

@Jenwriter17 pretty much just throwing in all the subplots and more try-fail sequences will fill out your plot a lot more.
Jenna Terese replied to the topic Would You Rather Character Edition in the forum Characters 8 years, 4 months ago

@catwing oh, good to know 😉

Rin would probably rather be deaf. Not sure why though.

would your character rather be duct taped to a plane mid flight or jump into Niagara Falls? Yeah this total random craziness 😜
Ariel Ashira replied to the topic Need Advice with my Character's Responses in the forum Characters 8 years, 4 months ago

@itsastarrynight Thank you! @daeus Do you have a little time to give me some advise on this?
Ariel Ashira replied to the topic My Life is Novellas in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 4 months ago

@jenwriter17 I guess I just describe every scene in detailed, sensory language, and I have been working on adding more subplots. I do struggle with creating complicated plots!
Ingrid replied to the topic Create-a-story in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 4 months ago

@alia @bekreations *beam* Thanks for bringin’ this back, guys! I don’t know what to add, but… 🙂 *thumbs up*
Ingrid replied to the topic Character Art Exchange #2 in the forum Art 8 years, 4 months ago

@ariella-newheart Why thank you. 🙂 And I love your version of Aspen!!!
Sink replied to the topic MC Issues in the forum Characters 8 years, 4 months ago

@ariella-newheart Thanks! I’ll try it out.
Sink replied to the topic Character Art Exchange #2 in the forum Art 8 years, 4 months ago

@ariella-newheart Thanks! Yes, they are. The middle is Smaug and Bilbo… Bilbo with a katana, anyways. (Don’t ask me. It just happened.)
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