@daeus
Active 4 years, 11 months ago- Rank: Chosen One
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Daeus replied to the topic A Prison Problem… in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 6 months ago
@that_writer_girl_99 I will humbly acknowledge that Kate probably has a much better answer than me, but I don’t see your dilemma as a huge problem unless you want the warden to be a pure character. You can just depict him as a character in a very complex situation who doesn’t like what he’s doing, but doesn’t know what other choices he has.
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Daeus replied to the topic Smooth/Effective Dialogue in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 6 months ago
@gh24682468999 I support what @perfectfifths said. It sounds though like your main problem is not that you aren’t showing reactions, but that you feel like you have too many and it’s cluttering your prose.
I assume you’re using action tags (i.e. Sam put on his glasses. “Don’t I look cool in these?”)
Action tags are extremely helpful to a story.…[Read more]
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Daeus replied to the topic For all who love speculative fiction in the forum Announcements 7 years, 7 months ago
@kate-flournoy 7-8pm
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Daeus replied to the topic For all who love speculative fiction in the forum Announcements 7 years, 7 months ago
@salome01w4g There will be a replay.
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Daeus started the topic For all who love speculative fiction in the forum Announcements 7 years, 7 months ago
Hi friends,
I’m excited to announce that on October 2nd KP will hosting a panel discussion dedicated to the topic of speculative fiction!
Yes, fantasy, sci-fi, the stuff we love. I hope you’ll be there. 😀 😀 😀
Here’s the link.…[Read more]
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Daeus replied to the topic Hello, Kingdom Writers! in the forum Start HERE 7 years, 7 months ago
@livylynn Welcome to the bestistest place on the internet! I think we can use a couple older people around here. 😉
I think it’d be cool to be a songwriter. What type of songs do you write?
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Daeus replied to the topic Title for my story in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 7 years, 7 months ago
@graciegirl @josiahdeboer @emma-flournoy @kate-flournoy @emily @salmoe01w4g @dragon-snapper @winter-rose @corissa-maiden-of-praise
I’m pretty sure that I’m going to go with “Fools In The Darkness”. I’m just going to survey my subscribers to make sure, then make a final decision.
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Daeus replied to the topic New Website Party! in the forum Announcements 7 years, 7 months ago
@emma-flournoy You can still open pages directly from the slideshow, you just have to click the title. The pictures don’t work.
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Daeus replied to the topic Hey, hi, hello! in the forum Start HERE 7 years, 7 months ago
@sage-g Welcome to our kingdom. 🙂
Oh, wait! There is one very important question that has not been asked yet. Do you know what your personality type is?
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Daeus replied to the topic Prayer Requests in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 7 months ago
That’s good to hear, @anne-of-lothlorien. 🙂
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Daeus replied to the topic Title for my story in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 7 years, 7 months ago
@kate-flournoy Fyi, Fools In The Darkness comes straight from the theme as well.
“He walks up to the inner machine and opens the door where ten men are waiting for him. They have a foolish mission to do some good in a dark world and as fools they hope to succeed.”
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Daeus replied to the topic Title for my story in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 7 years, 7 months ago
@kate-flournoy @winter-rose @salome01w4g @corissa-maiden-of-praise Oh my! The debate continues. What I’ll probably do is poll my subscribers. So are there any of these you don’t like?
Corissa, it should be out in a little over a month.
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Daeus replied to the topic Title for my story in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 7 years, 7 months ago
@kate-flournoy @emma-flournoy @clairec @emily @josiahdeboer @northerner @graciegirl @catwing @winter-rose @dragon-snapper
I came up with three more ideas
1. Fools in the darkness
2. The Time Traveler’s Dilemma
3. Key to the futureFor 1 and 3, I would probably have the subtitle “a time travel novel”.
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Daeus replied to the topic Character/Fiction inspired Typography/Art in the forum Art 7 years, 7 months ago
@kate-flournoy I especially like Dunstan’s.
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Daeus replied to the topic New Website Party! in the forum Announcements 7 years, 7 months ago
All KPs can be parliment members.
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Daeus replied to the topic New Website Party! in the forum Announcements 7 years, 7 months ago
@emma-flournoy Just… *shakes head*
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Daeus replied to the topic New Website Party! in the forum Announcements 7 years, 7 months ago
@kate-flournoy I love cabbage!
@winter-rose Um, you can eat donuts I suppose. King Daeus won’t set the style in doing so, but it’s not illegal.
@marisopa Chocolate covered pineapple sounds pretty good. 😀
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Daeus replied to the topic New Website Party! in the forum Announcements 7 years, 7 months ago
@kate-flournoy I love cabbage!
@winter-rose Um, you can eat donuts I suppose. King Daeus won’t set the style in doing so, but it’s not illegal.
@marisopa Chocolate covered pineapple sounds pretty good. 😀
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Daeus replied to the topic New Website Party! in the forum Announcements 7 years, 7 months ago
@dragon-snapper But the really cool thing about Parliment is that you get to yell really loud. 😀
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Daeus replied to the topic New Website Party! in the forum Announcements 7 years, 7 months ago
Yes, @kate-flournoy @dragon-snapper must shake claws *nods*
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