@daeus
Active 5 years, 12 months ago- Rank: Chosen One
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Daeus replied to the topic What does the future look like? in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 7 months ago
Entirely beyond my capacity to predict. Way too many factors, most ones we wouldn’t even think of. If you’re writing for, 2290 though, my best idea would be to have a global collapse, and rising dictators, though not an all out dystopia, and then have things improve from there and then have 2290 be when things are starting to dip back down again.…[Read more]
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Daeus replied to the topic Ren in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 7 months ago
Yes, agreed. It would be a mistake to put Rey and Fin together. Not that it would be bad necessarily, but there’s just no reason to.
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Daeus replied to the topic Hello! Ni Hao! Anyang! Hola! **Waves**, Etc… in the forum Start HERE 9 years, 7 months ago
*snicker snicker snicker*
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Daeus replied to the topic Hello! Ni Hao! Anyang! Hola! **Waves**, Etc… in the forum Start HERE 9 years, 7 months ago
Howdy Charis. Welcome, welcome, and welcome (to the bestistest place on the internet, that is). We actually rarely talk just about a certain genre, but maybe if you want to go start a thread on one, that could be cool. If you talk on here for a bit, you’ll soon come to see what we talk about.
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Daeus posted a new activity comment 9 years, 7 months ago
@bluejay Yep.
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Daeus posted a new activity comment 9 years, 7 months ago
@bluejay Yes, I am interested, but I’m a little swamped right now. I’m beta reading two other novels and Kate might send me the second piece of hers any time. Would it be alright if I postpone for a month?
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Daeus replied to the topic Hi Everyone in the forum Start HERE 9 years, 7 months ago
@christi-eaton Oh, sure. It’s coming along pretty well so hopefully won’t be too long.
@zcpeterson Thou art officially warned to read the count of monte cristo, the punishment for not doing so being that you will not have read it, at which apocalypse the angels will surely weep for you.
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Daeus replied to the topic Fall and Winter Goals: Writing Club in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 7 months ago
@corissa-maiden-of-praise WAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!! You are doomed to bliss. Dooooooooooooomed.
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Daeus replied to the topic Fall and Winter Goals: Writing Club in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 7 months ago
My goals are by the end of the year to totally finish up with editing Edwin Brook as well as totally finishing up my novelette (btw @kate-flournoy, are you still up for that?), and then I want to get the first draft of my next novel written.
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Daeus replied to the topic The (Awesome) Summer Writing Club! in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 7 months ago
@overcomer Yep. I’ll be writing that as soon as I can get the time away from editing my other works.
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Daeus replied to the topic The (Awesome) Summer Writing Club! in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 7 months ago
@Overcomer Wrote three chapters out of intended five. Not much, but I’ve been doing a lot of editing and that’s been coming along pretty well. I think I also rewrote my novelette.
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Daeus replied to the topic Workshopping/Critique in the forum Poetry Critiques 9 years, 7 months ago
@zcpeterson My general impression is that it could use a consistent meter.
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Daeus replied to the topic Art Sharing and How to Do It in the forum Art 9 years, 7 months ago
@julia-r The only way I think you can do it is with a link. Do you (or someone in your family) have a social media account or a website?
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Daeus replied to the topic What Is Your Birthday? in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 7 months ago
Well, since Facebook already knows these things, I may as well reveal to you all that I’m 18. Birthday is May 26. Enjoy your knowledge of these top not so secret things.
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Daeus replied to the topic Ren in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 7 months ago
@anne-of-lothlorien Actually, it never even crossed my mind that she learned it way too fast. Maybe it would have peeved me if I had thought of it, but since I didn’t, I guess I’ll just imagine I’m still innocent and remain content.
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Daeus replied to the topic Hi Everyone in the forum Start HERE 9 years, 7 months ago
Aha! I was wondering when you’d show up. (moderators notice stalkers). Glad you finally poked your head above water. Drowning certainly isn’t recommended.
There’s lots of stuff to do on the forum. For instance…
If you make a big writing discovery, share it so we can all know about it too
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Daeus replied to the topic What Is Your Birthday? in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 7 months ago
@anne-of-lothlorien I’ll fill in for you.
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Daeus replied to the topic Prayer Requests in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 7 months ago
Will do.
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Daeus replied to the topic A Tale From Two Views in the forum Poetry 9 years, 7 months ago
@bluejay Seems like you did a pretty good job with the huge limitations of trying to fit all those words in there. One thing to note is that the lines:
“His words must be erroneously
They definitely weren’t symmetrically”
are not grammatically correct because of their -ly endings.As far as improvement, because of your limitations, I think your b…[Read more]
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Sure. @daeus
Btw I’m not sure you ever saw this so I’m posting it again, is this a haiku poem?
Soft kittens are cute
Fun to hold and to play with
Be very gentle.
🙂
@bluejay Yep.
Oh good. My youngest sister had to write one for school. She’ll be pleased to know that it was right. 🙂