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Ava Murbarger (Solfyre) replied to the topic Anyone have Spotify? in the forum Music 1 year, 6 months ago
Hmmm… Maybe something just for writing in general? And then songs for certain kinds of characters? Anything like that, and if we think of something else.
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Ava Murbarger (Solfyre) replied to the topic Anyone have Spotify? in the forum Music 1 year, 6 months ago
Yep, that’s me! 🙂
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Ava Murbarger (Solfyre) replied to the topic Edit thread (for all your editing questions) in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 6 months ago
I agree with Freedom. Most times, in fiction, it’s spelled out. However, in something like a journal entry… I think it was that if it’s more than three syllables, you should spell it out, otherwise it’s fine. And if there’s a number with more syllables than that, and another in the same sentence has one or two, then spell both out. I…[Read more]
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Ava Murbarger (Solfyre) replied to the topic Anyone have Spotify? in the forum Music 1 year, 6 months ago
It’s Starlighter.
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Ava Murbarger (Solfyre) replied to the topic Anyone have Spotify? in the forum Music 1 year, 6 months ago
I do, in fact, have spotify… Idk what the difference is exactly, but I don’t have the premium thing or whatever. Cool idea! I love listening to music while I write/think up a story idea. 🙂
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Ava Murbarger (Solfyre) replied to the topic Let's Laugh! Writing Memes in the forum Art 1 year, 6 months ago
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Ava Murbarger (Solfyre) replied to the topic My Series REVEALED! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 6 months ago
Cool! I’ve never tried DISC… I’ll have to check it out.
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Ava Murbarger (Solfyre) replied to the topic Chapter 1 of The Dragonsbane Society in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 6 months ago
Thanks!
Yeah, I probably should have put that in somewhere. At dinner for the underground, they all eat together in the dining hall, and new people are announced. There are sometimes misunderstandings if people don’t remember that, but win the underground system they switch around roles a lot, getting to know everyone better…[Read more]
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Ava Murbarger (Solfyre) replied to the topic My Series REVEALED! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 6 months ago
Oooooooooh I knew pretty much none of that and it’s SOOOO good. Ara is even better than I thought! And the vine scar is super cool. Can’t wait to see where this goes! 😃😉
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Ava Murbarger (Solfyre) and Starshiness are now friends 1 year, 7 months ago
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Ava Murbarger (Solfyre) replied to the topic My Series REVEALED! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 7 months ago
Ooooooohh I love this!!! Ara is so great from the bits and pieces I’ve seen of her. Can’t wait to read more! 😃😃
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Ava Murbarger (Solfyre) replied to the topic Characters for my WIP! For those who wanna know (Also i wanna hear yours too) in the forum Characters 1 year, 7 months ago
Ooh, I love it! Very nice. I’ve never done a mood board either, so I don’t know how exactly you would do it “right.” Good job!
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Ava Murbarger (Solfyre) replied to the topic Chapter 1 of The Dragonsbane Society in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 7 months ago
@keilah-h @thearcaneaxiom @felicity @esther-c @awsumfaith
Here’s the next section in the Dragonsbane Society:
Amara pulled back the string of her bow, peering at the target, a circle of thin wood they’d nailed to a tree. Keeping the arrow straight, she released it and watched as it buried itself in the ground. She sighed and dropped the bow. W…[Read more]
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Ava Murbarger (Solfyre) replied to the topic Little One's Journey… title pending in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 7 months ago
I love this!!! 🙂
I agree with @felicity. The descriptions made it seem so real, without losing the style of writing. Well done! 😃
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Ava Murbarger (Solfyre) replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 1 year, 7 months ago
Yep, definitely meant amorphous star! Totally didn’t just put two random words together… Idk how that happened honestly. I looked up and thought, wait, what is a morphed star? And then forgot what I was thinking when I put it, so… Yeah, we’ll go with amorphous! 😅🤣
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Ava Murbarger (Solfyre) replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 1 year, 7 months ago
Oooooh, cool! I love it! It’s like ocean waves, or morphed stars…
*me reading through this and realizing ‘morphed stars’ makes no sense* 😅🤣
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Ava Murbarger (Solfyre) replied to the topic Civil War Short Story Critque in the forum Short Story Critiques 1 year, 7 months ago
Definitely do not scrap it!!! 😅🤣 It’s way too good to scrap. Use it in something, make it its own something, but just don’t get rid of it. You never know when you might use it.
Hmmm… I think maybe do them separately? I like the characters and think it would be good to see more of them. If you did it all in one, it would be strange to…[Read more]
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Ava Murbarger (Solfyre) replied to the topic He is Risen!!!!! ⭐️ in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 7 months ago
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Ava Murbarger (Solfyre) replied to the topic Civil War Short Story Critque in the forum Short Story Critiques 1 year, 7 months ago
Oooooh I love this!!! 😃😃
I agree with @gwyndalf-the-wise I would love to read more, even as just a larger short story.
Unfortunately, I cannot think of any critiques to give right now, other than Will wasn’t capitalized once. 😅 I really love the story! It feels so real.
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Ava Murbarger (Solfyre) replied to the topic My WIP in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 7 months ago
Thanks! Quelin was the first one I ever actually drew. 🙂
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