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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Novel Excerpt (Feedback Welcome) in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 6 months ago
@That_Writer_Girl_99 okay. That’s fine. It’s good to know your limits. We don’t want you burning out. 😉
Wellll… since you want to stick to Kara’s pov, maybe she could overhear some guards talking about what happened? Or perhaps she hears Matthias talking to a guard, receiving or giving a message from/to the Warden. This gives her suspicions…[Read more]
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Novel Excerpt (Feedback Welcome) in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 6 months ago
@That_Writer_Girl_99 again, my apologies… *clears throat meekly* Telepathic dragon in the making here; I was practicing and got it wrong. *mysterious wink*
Moving on now.
No, you’re right. That’s not enough to drive an entire chapter. Unless something important happens in the sparring room, I would say cut it entirely. Writing is about change,…[Read more]
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Novel Excerpt (Feedback Welcome) in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 7 months ago
@That_Writer_Girl_99 My apologies. That’s what would have gotten me stuck. XD
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Novel Excerpt (Feedback Welcome) in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 7 months ago
@That_Writer_Girl_99 switch POVs.
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Character Art Exchange in the forum Art 7 years, 7 months ago
@That_Writer_Girl_99 I’ll give him a shot. 🙂
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Keleigha Liess posted an update 7 years, 7 months ago
@izzye Hi Izzy! What kind of writing do you like to do best?
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Novel Excerpt (Feedback Welcome) in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 7 months ago
@Ethryndal King @Daeus has spoken…
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic *waves hand wildly * Sup Keepers!! in the forum Start HERE 7 years, 7 months ago
@Daeus shhhhh! Don’t scare the newbies!
Ah well… guess it’s too late for that. *sighs**blinks scaled eyelids happily* Yes indeed @That_Writer_Girl_99… did I fail to mention? I’m a dragon. *accidentally ignites her mug of tabasco sauce with laughing*
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Novel Excerpt (Feedback Welcome) in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 7 months ago
@That_Writer_Girl_99 you know what? That’s perfectly fine. You don’t have to be able to write it. I’ve been writing every night for four and a half years and I still don’t know how to write. I’ll never know all there is to know. But I sure wouldn’t have got anywhere near as far as I have if I’d never tackled something I couldn’t handle. It’s the…[Read more]
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Julia R. posted an update 7 years, 7 months ago
@ceaseless-prayer Hi Kelieigha Liess! Awesome name, by the way! What kind of writing do you like to do?
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Hi Julia, thanks! I like to write mostly realistic fiction, but also some fanciful fiction or allegorical type. What about you? What is your favorite time period?
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I like fantasy and sci-fi. I love writing short stories. As for time periods, I love the medieval era, Renaissance period, and also pre-Christian eras. I think there is so little known about exactly what happened when in those times that you could make almost anything happen and you wouldn’t really have to worry about dates or what was invented…[Read more]
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I think fantasy is cool, but I’m not so good at writing it, usually. My sister is pretty good at that, I think. I do think medieval era is pretty fascinating. Those time periods would be pretty easy to write about. I’ve always been really interested in WWI & II era. Usually, when I try to write short stories, they turn into novels…that have yet…[Read more]
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Novel Excerpt (Feedback Welcome) in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 7 months ago
*grins* It’s nice to be needed. 😉
Well… I guess it depends on how devastating the Catastrophes actually were. People can spend their whole lives hiding from ugly truths that broke them hard enough. I certainly think the guilt thing would be very powerful. Not only does it tie directly into the theme, it is solely thematic in that he’s acting…[Read more]
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Keleigha Liess replied to the topic "The Board" in the forum Stewards of the Pen 7 years, 7 months ago
Did you read the “start here” page? You can read that,
and then click on the link to the ” introduce yourself ” page,
and havefun
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic College Video in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 7 months ago
@Ethryndal @That_Writer_Girl_99 yep. No cats either. *runs for cover*
Ha! That can’t be it, Elizabeth, because I’m really short too. 😀 5′ 4 and 1/2″…
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Novel Excerpt (Feedback Welcome) in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 7 months ago
@That_Writer_Girl_99 perfect. All of those. Love them to pieces. You have so totally got this. *grins*
As for Matthias… *pulls on her nose in perplexity and wrinkles her forehead* How could he be the Warden’s son though if he’s an Elemental…? And I’m not sure that would really do much for your theme.
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic College Video in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 7 months ago
@That_Writer_Girl_99 *dons chainmail* I hate coffee. *angelic smile*
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic College Video in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 7 months ago
@That_Writer_Girl_99 hey… do you know that song too? I love that song…
Ahem, yes. We’re going to be fine. I suppose I could always open a video rental store. :’D
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Ummm mainly fiction and pomes :). You?
I mainly do fiction too, mostly realistic. I’m not very good at poems, but I like reading other peoples! 🙂 How long have you been writing? 😉
Ummm, since I was seven, but I’ve been writing seriously since I was twleve.
You?
Well, I started when I was about four, but was probably between ten & twelve when I started writing seriously. So, how old are you now? 🙂
I’m 15 now, you?
I turned 20, at the end of last year. My sister @countryman (her username was auto-corrected. :0 ) just turned 15. 🙂 Did you always have an interest in writing, or was it kind of something that grew over the years?