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Julia R. posted an update 9 years, 9 months ago
Hey @everyone, I know some of you aren’t American, but I wanted to remind you about the 15-year anniversary of the devastating attack on the World Trade Center. Just lift up an extra prayer today for those affected most.
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Julia R. replied to the topic Plot help please! in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 9 years, 9 months ago
Oops, @jess, I forgot to tag you in my last post…
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Julia R. replied to the topic Plot help please! in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 9 years, 9 months ago
If you’re asking if you should use Alexa or Alexis in your book… that’s tough! Then there’s always Alexyi or Alexi or Alixis… the variations are unlimited! Look on websites or in books for baby names… they often have numerous variations and alternate spellings for a “normal” name.
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Julia R. replied to the topic Plot help please! in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 9 years, 9 months ago
@jess: I think Hazel was used in the Percy Jackson books, but I might be wrong. I like the name Dalton a lot. Your book sounds amazing! Although, you don’t want the government in your book to end up like Syndrome (a.k.a. Buddy) from the Incredibles: killing off people with powers because they are jealous of their gifts. I like the idea of the kids…[Read more]
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Julia R. replied to the topic To all and sundry in the forum Start HERE 9 years, 9 months ago
@dragon-snapper: LOL you sound like you’d be handy on camping trips! I’m sure your claws make typing a little difficult.
I ended up having to order The Art of Big Hero 6 from inter-library loan, so if you can’t find it at your local library system, you may have to search abroad. When you do get your hands on that book, look for Jin Kim’s artwork…[Read more] -
Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Lessons from a recent revision. in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 9 months ago
Hey, @Mark-Kamibaya welcome back!! It would be a poor welcome indeed if someone attacked you now… XD
I do see what you’re saying, and to some extent I agree. For the most part, however, we aren’t talking about scene-by-scene summaries. In @Daeus‘s case, it was several chapters summarizing a character’s childhood. (At least I assume that’s what…[Read more]
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Julia R. replied to the topic To all and sundry in the forum Start HERE 9 years, 9 months ago
@dragon-snapper: Why, yes, I have seen Big Hero 6! Have you read The Art of Big Hero 6 by Jessica Julius? It has some fantastic concept art pieces in it! By the way, dragons are great. Really, really great. Being a dragon sounds awesome ;).
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Greta replied to the topic Editing Advice (Poem) in the forum Poetry Critiques 9 years, 9 months ago
@overcomer
I love the topic for the poem! Okay, you said you wanted feedback…so here comes some feedback. 😛‘Till I am overcome
By the multitude in my mind
I am restless fromI would rewrite the last line in this stanza. I know it’s hard (believe me, I know) when you’re trying to find rhymes, but I think a different rhyme with “overcome” w…[Read more]
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Editing Advice (Poem) in the forum Poetry Critiques 9 years, 9 months ago
It’s a lovely poem, @Overcomer— great concept, nice dexterity with the words and such— I definitely think it has promise. The one thing I’m not getting though is a consistent sense of rhythm. I’ll be reading, and think I’ve got a rhythm, and then I keep reading and the very next sentence it’s disrupted. I get the impression there IS a rhythm…[Read more]
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Editing Advice (Poem) in the forum Poetry Critiques 9 years, 9 months ago
It’s a lovely poem, @Overcomer— great concept, nice dexterity with the words and such— I definitely think it has promise. The one thing I’m not getting though is a consistent sense of rhythm. I’ll be reading, and think I’ve got a rhythm, and then I keep reading and the very next sentence it’s disrupted. I get the impression there IS a rhythm…[Read more]
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Julia R. replied to the topic Need Ideas for Fantasy Names (countries, people, etc.) in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 9 months ago
Another way my sister makes names more interesting is switching out vowels in names. For instance…
“a”, “i” or “e” can be changed to a “y”
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Writers' Corner 2 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 9 months ago
@Daeus sorry, gotta run. I got 716 words written though, so I’m pretty happy.
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Writers' Corner 2 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 9 months ago
@Daeus m’kay I’m with you.
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Julia R. replied to the topic Ren in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 9 months ago
Hannah and I (she may have mentioned it already) have a theory also about Snoke being the reincarnation of The Emperor/Palpatine, who I loathe. Ugh, when he pushed Mace Windu out of that window and Anikin did nothing…
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Julia R. replied to the topic Ren in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 9 months ago
@dragon-snapper: You mentioned that Rey lived in an abandoned X-wing. However, I’m pretty sure it was an AT-AT (synonymous with an Imperial Walker, I think…). I didn’t catch the thing about the pilot doll, though! That’s cool!
Oh, and your theory about the little sister? Yes!!!!! I have actually wanted that to happen long before I got on…[Read more] -
Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Lessons from a recent revision. in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 9 months ago
@Daeus thanks. I think I will. *calls over shoulder* ‘Hey Matthew! Did you remember about the confetti?!’
*grins*
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Writers' Corner 2 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 9 months ago
@Daeus I won’t be doing it tonight. Good luck.
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Greta replied to the topic To all and sundry in the forum Start HERE 9 years, 9 months ago
@Julia-R
My grandparents live in Michigan, and my mom and dad went to Mackinac Island for their anniversary one year (I’m @ingridrd‘s sister 😉 ). I personally have never been there, but I’d love to go sometime. 🙂
Awesome choices for Disney characters! Rey and Rapunzel are both great characters.
Ooo, I love watercolor and acrylics, too! I’m…[Read more] -
Greta replied to the topic Howdy! in the forum Start HERE 9 years, 9 months ago
@Luke-C
It’s nice to meet you. 🙂 That’s cool that you’re into science and engineering. I’m not much good with either. 😛 Action and adventure stories are awesome!
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Julia R. started the topic Need Ideas for Fantasy Names (countries, people, etc.) in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 9 months ago
I’m trying to write a book and can never think of a unique name for my country/kingdoms in my stories. Everything I think of either sounds like the name of a Lord of the Rings character or a planet from Star Wars. Does anyone have any tips, ideas, or useful websites?
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@julia-r I didn’t see this until after 9/11, but thanks for the reminder. It is so unbelievably sad for me (and I didn’t know anyone who died), but I can’t imagine what the families and friends of 9/11 victims must be feeling at this time of year. 🙁 :'(