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@Alia hmmm… interesting. Okay. Thank you for pointing that out; I’ll have to look at it again.

@Daeus oooh, I really like the idea behind Excelsior, but most people are probably just going to go… ‘huh? Sounds like some weird Latin elitist club or something… *yawns**scrolls past*’

So… maybe something slightly less high and lofty and a little more down-to-earth. (Can’t believe I just said that.) I can’t think of anything right off the…[Read more]

@Dekreel everyone else has some good ideas, and I second theirs. Basically, if you can bring in a side plot or throw in another antagonist to add more conflict and higher stakes it’ll keep your middle going strong.

@dekreel *processing*
Okay, so a middle of a story. I know absolutely nothing about Doctor Who, but I’m thinking you could add more clues as to whoever this Riddler person is (I skimmed the Thirteen plus Five thing, BTW). Some scenes could include traveling through this planet, searching for the answer to the riddle. Suggestions – 1) performing…[Read more]

@dekreel @perfectfifths Yes. Yes. I was mean. Sorry. 😛

@lady-iliara *blink* I have no idea…

If I am to put a quote out there, then I won’t do another KP obscure one. One that should get this topic’s engine running. 😉

“It’s man’s discovery of Nunya.”

@introvert_girl Really? You liked Force Awakens better?

Aha! I’m not alone! I liked it way better than Rogue One. Just couldn’t connect with the characters…or the plot of Rogue One.

@shannon I am a little late, but I hope not by too much. 😀

So…letters eh? Um… With some of my letters I like to talk about what I’ve been working on recently. If your characters are Christians, they can talk a bit about God too. Also, big events, even if its something that only in the news. Coal mine news is certainly interesting. There…[Read more]

@cindygreen *bows*

*grins* Can I just say that I really, really love that you’re using Thirteen for this? I’m so excited to see her on the show.

I can definitely see the problem you’re having, and I’ve experienced it before. I’d say for starters, you should explore the relationship between the Doctor and this Riddler person. Does he/she have a connection to the…[Read more]

@emily Well, you can have animals if you want. I’m currently building a fantasy world and I’m creating lots of different animals, but it’s not necessary.

I’d say that it’s very helpful to make a map of your world, and that you definitely should do it.

I probably wasn’t much help because I’m just repeating what everyone else said, but there…[Read more]

@dekreel Their country is called Araluen.

@emily I’m so sorry. I really did mean to get back to you earlier, but it looks like someone answered before I could.

My current WIP uses a bunch of different “fantasy” aspects. I’m not sure there are any characteristics that would properly define a fantasy novel in the way you seem to be thinking. A fantasy is something that isn’t real, so most…[Read more]

@seekjustice @shannon Good advice, thanks! I’m really excited about writing HF 😉

How’d that happen?

@emily *pops in* I LOVE FANTASY!!!!

Are there any particular questions?

There are some pretty good articles on fantasy and world building on here. Here’s the link: https://kingdompen.org/category/articles/worldbuilding/

@emily *pops in* I LOVE FANTASY!!!!

Are there any particular questions?

There are some pretty good articles on fantasy and world building on here. Here’s the link: https://kingdompen.org/category/articles/worldbuilding/

Yikes @emily sorry love, looks like I’m late. Any other burning questions I could (try) to answer for you?

@emily Thanks, that helps a lot!