ClaireC

@ariel-ashira Praying for you!

@filewriterbase13x ooh yeah! I would love actual Rapunzel hair. And I’m gonna leave the character up to you. You can elaborate a TON if you want. I totally wouldn’t mind you adding in anything extra, but I can’t think of anything I would like to add in particular.

@rochellaine  Oh!  So my director adapted the story of Cinderella for the stage (she wrote the script) and she also wrote the songs since it’s a musical.  There were a few changes made to the story like Ella’s dead mother comes back and transforms her dress, instead of a fairy-godmother.  Things like that.  🙂 😉

@ariel-ashira I just sent it to you! Let me know if you get the email okay.

@ariel-ashira I just sent it to you! Let me know if you get it okay. 🙂

@rochellaine

Second degree burns. Fun  😉

Do not apply lotions, ointment or fats to the burn for starters, just so we have that out of the way.

Do  not remove any clothing or jewellery stuck to the burn either.

Holding a burn under running water is the best way to treat it. If there isn’t any running water, pouring water over the wound will d…[Read more]

@seekjustice What do you do for second degree burns?  I just tried to google it, and then backed out of a website instead of reading it because I was afraid there would be pictures of the burns there… 😛  I mean, I know generally what you do for burns, but I want to know if there’s any specific treatment that a paramedic or EMT would give on t…[Read more]

@Rochellaine

Okay, I can see that. We don’t have to argue about it 😛 You’re probably right, so I’ll have a look at it and work out how to change it. After all, it’s only one sentence, not a whole chapter thing 😀

@skredder

Better than it has, not as good as it could be.

That describes a large amount of nearly everything I do… 😀

Yup!  Almost done, though.  Hooray!

@seekjustice Well, I can understand that, but it still implies that he was trying to be romantic, while the rest of the scene (as well as what we know of his character) really doesn’t indicate that at all.  The first time he says “romantic” it’s a joke, and a little flirtatious, which is fine, but the second time it just sounds really weird. 🙁  S…[Read more]

@skredder Short stories, huh?  I love writing short stories!  Except…I rarely finish them. 😛  I’ve finished a couple though.  How’s it going now?

@skredder

I’m going to post it once I’ve eaten lunch 🙂

I often work on short stories between working on novels, I find it lots of fun trying to condense a story into so few words (most of my short stories are under 2000 words)

They’re great for experimenting too!

@Rochellaine

Yep I got your comment. I’ll have to reread the section though. I…[Read more]

@seekjustice That was not fifteen minutes.  That was an hour. 😛  Looks like I’m bad at giving estimates!

But anyway, I’m here now, and it looks like you’re about to leave. 🙁  By the way, I did give you the comment about Justice, but I put it in your document instead of here.  Did you get it?

@skredder Hi!

@skredder Oh, cool! I love writing short stories! Do you write many?

I’m wading through my novel, trying to get to the end of Part 2!

@skredder I’m on,  but I’m about to go for lunch. What project are you working on?

@rochellaine

Okay, see you seen 😀

Okay, I am tired.

@rochellaine

Okay, see you seen 😀

@catwing bye! (I’ll probably hear it soon)

@rochellaine

Um…no…not really. it’s bad news, but it hasn’t freaked me out…not yet anyway. No I hadn’t heard yet.

Well, we do. I mean, my dad does, and we just listen and nod and pretend we understand what he’s talking about.

@seekjustice Haha! 🙂  Yes, definitely we need to be praying.  And no, the world will never learn.

I’ll be departing for about fifteen minutes or so.  See you in a bit!

@seekjustice @catwing Oh, I hope I didn’t just freak you guys out. 🙁  Sorry!  I just heard the news and wondered if you had.

I don’t know if your families talk about big world events like this or not, so maybe I shouldn’t have said anything…