Cindy

@warrioroftherealm A thick line of pine trees that seems almost impossible to cross.

@warrioroftherealm Simple boundary markers could work.

@that_writer_girl_99 Oh! I love the whole beach/sea theme. 🙂

@emily @shannon I’m afraid I’m only going to make you sadder; I’ve never seen The Princess Bride either. 😉

@kate-flournoy Wow. That’s pretty cool.

@xonos-darkgrate *stifles laughter* Okay, I guess we can wait for the movie to come out before we judge it.

@kate-flournoy I haven’t seen their names in a while. :/

And I must say, I like Finn’s outfit. The only thing in that trailer that I wasn’t sure about was that…penguin thing. I sincerely hope he isn’t one of those really stupid comic reliefs.

@kate-flournoy

@kate-flournoy Yes! And you didn’t see Ray with Fin either. 😉 Fin was off with the rebellion, right where he belonged. *big happy smile* Good ‘ole Fin. That mechanic sounds just right for him.

Agh! No! It’s on restricted mode for meeee!!!!
*runs around in circles screaming (virtually, of course)*
Why, Kate why!!!!
@kate-flournoy

Sorry, I was being dramatic there.

Let me put this in cool, rational terms. This is the best thing since The Count of Monte Cristo. 🙂

Ooooohh…

OOOHHH. OOOOOOOOH. OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOHHHHH.

OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Yes! Yes! Yes! I could almost weep now. Let it be so!

Guys!!! *flails*
I just found something awesome!
Have you ever heard of 4thewords?
It’s an awesome online writing video game! So basically, it gets you going on this ‘rpg’ game, where you fight monsters and go on quests and do cool stuff. To fight the monsters, you are timed and have to write a certain amount of words within that time. Usually,…[Read more]

@allison-grace Have you heard the song Journey into the Star Cluster?

@kate-flournoy Haha! I’m a mind reader too now. 😀

@bethanysinkyroses First, I think the Yellowstone setting could work. As far as the plot goes, my suggestion would be to make it a “back and forth” plot. What I mean is, have two distinct spheres for your story: one, the sphere of the MC’s interaction with her mother; the other, the sphere of…[Read more]

@jane-maree @seekjustice I’m headed out now. I finished editing a chapter, and sent off a whole lot of story-related emails that needed to be sent. Bye!

@jane-maree PIZZAAA!!! Sweet. Thanks!
@seekjustice You are wise. I should have done the same. *nods sagely*

@seekjustice Ah…wish I’d done that. XD Some of the silly mistakes–I had three names for one character.

She can be a stereotype on the outside without being one on the inside. If she isn’t a POV character, maybe she could have someone she can confide in.