@christi-eaton
Active 7 years, 11 months ago- Rank: Knight in Shining Armor
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Emma Flournoy replied to the topic The Legend of King Daeus in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 years, 4 months ago
@Daeus Oh, I knew she drew it, I just saw it colored in your version. Cool. Effects.
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Elizabeth replied to the topic Greetings, fellow scribblers! in the forum Start HERE 9 years, 4 months ago
I wasn’t brave enough to say it @kate-flournoy
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Elizabeth replied to the topic Novel Excerpt (Feedback Welcome) in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 4 months ago
Thanks! I’m glad it was a relatively easy fix. @kate-flournoy
No, I haven’t fixed my plot issues. I don’t even know where to begin with them, to be honest…
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Greetings, fellow scribblers! in the forum Start HERE 9 years, 4 months ago
@Aratrea lol
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Novel Excerpt (Feedback Welcome) in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 4 months ago
All right @That_Writer_Girl_99 read through the document, and left a comment in one place, but otherwise you did good. 😀 You’re handling Matthias with more subtlety. *thumbs up*
Have you figured out your plot problems? Any way I can help you?
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Julia R. posted an update 9 years, 4 months ago
“Go the extra mile. It’s never crowded.”
-Dr. Wayne Dyer
ps I have no idea who the guy is who said that, I just thought it was a cool quote! -
Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Greetings, fellow scribblers! in the forum Start HERE 9 years, 4 months ago
@BethanySinkyRoses welcome aboard, new KeePer! 😀 Look forward to seeing you around.
(@aratrea I hope you know that profile picture makes you impossible to take seriously. XD)
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Elizabeth and
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Snapper replied to the topic The Legend of King Daeus in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 years, 4 months ago
@gideon-sowdon Aye, he did.
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Elizabeth replied to the topic Novel Excerpt (Feedback Welcome) in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 4 months ago
Nah, I’m just struggling with what to do for the next chapter.
I’m trying to focus on major plot points. And I can’t think of any…which is why I haven’t written anything new in days. @kate-flournoy
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Novel Excerpt (Feedback Welcome) in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 4 months ago
@That_Writer_Girl_99 no, you’re doing and have done great. Just last I checked you were having problems with the plot, and that’s the one thing that really hangs me up when I struggle with that.
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Elizabeth replied to the topic Novel Excerpt (Feedback Welcome) in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 4 months ago
Did I not do that? I mean, I’m working on it. It’s been fun planning the different arcs… @kate-flournoy
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Novel Excerpt (Feedback Welcome) in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 4 months ago
@That_Writer_Girl_99 quick tip: look at your different character motivations. Each character is the hero of his or her own story. What are they aiming for? What is it they want? Kara’s not going to be the only one moving the plot. Each person’s life is an entire story. You chose to tell those stories through Kara’s eyes, but they’re still separate…[Read more]
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Elizabeth replied to the topic Novel Excerpt (Feedback Welcome) in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 4 months ago
It’s alright, love. Life happens.
I’m just…sitting here…alone…planning…trying to break a wall with a toothpick…
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Elizabeth replied to the topic Writer's corner #5 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 4 months ago
*takes pizza* Thanks! @jane-maree
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Elizabeth replied to the topic To blog or not to blog in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 4 months ago
Yessss! Yay for the writing alter-egos @graciegirl ;’)
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Elizabeth replied to the topic Writer's corner #5 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 4 months ago
Hi everyone!
*looks around* Anyone here?
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DelightInLife replied to the topic Writer's corner #5 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 4 months ago
@jane-maree Thank you! Yes…I probably should have mentioned how long it is. 🙂
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DelightInLife replied to the topic Writer's corner #5 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 4 months ago
@winter-rose About 10 pages.
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DelightInLife replied to the topic Writer's corner #5 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 4 months ago
@jane-maree Yes! Awesome! Thank you! 🙂
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