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@mineralizedwritings

haha, I love it!

@loopylin @freedomwriter76 @lightoverdarkness6

Lol freedom the nickname is so funny XDXD I made a comic of it just cuz I had too lol

(TONY STARK IS SO FUN TO DRAW!!!!)

@freedomwriter76 @mineralizedwritings @lightoverdarkness6

This is probably an unnecessary detail, but does Tony have his nanotech suit or an older one?

Carter 

“Now, what are all of your names? I’m Tony. Tony Stark. Though most of you have probably heard of me.”

Carter had stood as soon as the man had opened the door. Now, he looked curiou…[Read more]

@acancello

Wow!! Those are cool! Yeah, I’ve been trying to get better at describing situations in my book as well. I like to look up ‘descriptive words for –‘ whatever I needed, and just reading them helps me to remember them for future reference. Also, if you copy and paste them into a doc, you can review them when you need it. That’s what I…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76 @mineralizedwritings @loopylin

(Also, if it’s alright with everyone, I’m not gonna have Matthew recognize Tony, because, well…I’m not quite sure how Matthew would act around him, what he would say…it would probably be really awkward 😅. Sorry!)

Matthew

I tried to slow my rapid breathing, panic overcoming me. I stared at…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76

 Thank you for the prayers! ❤️❤️❤️

You’re welcome! 🙂 ❤️❤️

Yeah, I knew dandelions were edible! Really cool that y’all are working on a recipe tho! ❤️

Cool! Yeah, I’m a little worried how it will taste XD 🤫.

And thanks!!! I like my new signature too! ❤️❤️❤️

Yess!! It’s so good!

Aww Ryo!! Morgan!! Awww I bet they would be such go…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76 @godlyfantasy12

Ooh yesss Alex!!! Get him!!! Oh wow 😲. Vance better look out XD

And Bren is so precious/sweet ❤❤

Vance

Bren stared at me, brows furrowed. He bit his lip, thinking for a moment.

“But…” He started, “He’s not a puppy. He’s a person. You can’t take a person…”

I let out a sigh of annoyance, glowering at the…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76

Anyone can go next!

Thank lol. He doesn’t like it when people are like WoW yOuR GeTtInG sO tAlL

and then he’s actually proud of it 🤣

@loopylin

DANTE!!!!! 😭😱😭

@freedomwriter76 @mineralizedwritings @loopylin

Uh…I haven’t gone in a while 😅. Sorry about that. I can go in a bit, unless someone else wants to go ahead! 🙂

@freedomwriter76 @godlyfantasy12

Okay!! Aww thank you!! ❤️❤️❤️❤️

No worries! I’ll try to do Dylan today sometime as well. 🙂

@godlyfantasy12

WOWOW!!! AHHH GRIMM!!!! No kidding @Freedomwriter76. XD

😍😍😍😍😍😍😍

LOVE IT!!!

@keilah-h @mineralizedwritings @princesachronicle22

So this is a really big and deep fountain, right? I’m imagining it being pretty deep.

Ellie

“Serin!” Ellie shouted as her companion collapsed to the ground.

Ellie and Allen rushed over and knelt down beside her. Ellie reached for her injured arm, but hesitated. She wasn’t sure how to remove…[Read more]

@loopylin

Thanks! : D

@mineralizedwritings

Oh, I just saw your rp too. Everly and Layson are so cute!

@princesachronicle22

That was so cool! Now I want to see a scene with Serin and Kun’en fighting together

Okay so I’m still working on my action scenes, and if y’all see anything that you think I can improve on or any tips to help it flow better, that would be awesome!

Honestly, I feel like I need some tips from you. That was so much fun to read.

@keilah-h @loopylin @princesachronicle22

Layson looks up as Serin severs the beast with a final blow. Adrenaline pumps through his viens, making his head feel heavy. Serin collapses to the side. Layson runs one hand through his hair, then looks down in disgust at his bloody forearm. He clenches his teeth as the fresh scrapes from the creatures…[Read more]

@thearcaneaxiom

Cool! I’m the same, I like learning by myself so online works great.

@thearcaneaxiom

yeah… I hate proofs XDXD

I have literally no idea! XD I just remember when she couldn’t find somebody to watch my sis and I so we sat in the back of the classroom doing sticker gems lol. The students looked so big and scary 😬 Oh and her college had cool chairs to spin in. That was kinda all that mattered to me at the time so…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76 @lightoverdarkness6

Honestly so glad you guys like it too 🤣 hopefully my future readers feel the same XD