Charityanne

@savannah_grace2009

GIRL…

YOUR WRITING STYLE IS AMAZING I LOVE IT SOOO MUCH!!!!!!! 😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍

@mineralizedwritings

AAAHHHHH I LOVEEE TAUREN AND LESLI SOO FREAKING MUCHHHHH 😍😍😍😍😍😍

@everyone-else-cuz-im-too-tired-to-comment-on-everything-sorry-yall-lol

I love everyone’s writing SOOOOO MUCH!!! Y’all keep going, you’re doing great…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76 Thanks for the tag hehe! <3

Oh my goodness I love Ezra’s moodboard!!!! The momma quote is so good *cri*

@euodia-vision

XD yeah it’s too bad they don’t let you pick the part of the picture you want to use

@loopylin

wow that looks really cool! Reminds me of spiderpunk from ATSV XD

@euodia-vision

You could stick Felicity (and the twins too!) in with Riya. I think her original roommates have kind’ve disappeared…

And Lois could room with Tirion and @keilah-h ‘s Crosshair and Tech!

Ok, thanks! That’s really helpful.

@fernweh_grace

That sounds like so much fun. I love thunderstorms and candles. I’d love to read what you wrote. Did you post it already somewhere else?

@euodia-vision

Thanks! 😊

Oh wait here I changed the colors slightly (you probably can’t even tell lol)

@whalekeeper @mineralizedwritings @highscribeofaetherium @keilah-h @freedomwriter76 @anyone (y’all can ignore these tags if you want)

This is a full Rina drawing I’ve been working on for a while.

@hybridlore

You’re welcome!

There’s a lot of things I could say in reply, but I think the best thing to do would be spend a long time on worldbuilding. The more worldbuilding you do, the more will become clear, and the world will seem more real to the viewers. I know pantsing if fun, and you can totally do it, but it sounds like it might be…[Read more]

@whalekeeper

Ok, thanks! I can stick Felicity in the same room as the twins and some other girls and then I guess Lois can go… somewhere… eh, I’ll figure it out.

I know it’s a long shot, but Marcel might ask one of the twins to the dance. If they get to know each other. He loves origami 😊

That would be so awesome! Origami is Ellie’s favorite…[Read more]

Also, @whalekeeper , I know I’ve asked this a few times already, sorry, but how can I figure out who my character’s roommates are?

@peeps

Ok, here’s my lil alien dudes

Eddie: female, about 14 in human years ish, 3’ tall, green eyes, long brown hair in a French braid, tan skin with some green coloring, long unicorn-like tail, wears a white tank top and dark pants

Ellie: Eddie’s identical twin sister, chin length brown hair, wears a sky blue hoodie

Eddie

Eddie was dying…[Read more]

@grcr

Ooo I love this one and the other character ones you’ve posted! Your story seems really cool.

I should start making mood boards again…

@freedomwriter76

NO! *grabs Riker and Leon* don’t take ma bois from me!!!! I shall give them blankets and coco myself, thank you very much! XD

lol you better 😆

this new 😀 emoji is creeping me out just a lil bit…XD

hehe yeah sometimes my friends use that emoji when they’re trying to be threatening

@freedomwriter76

Those all look so cool!

why are all my charries so saddddd 😭

Well, I don’t know. Do I need to steal them from you so they can have a break and give them each a blanket and cup of hot coco? XD

@rae

Also what kind of things do you most want criticism on? Grammar? Style? Story structure?

I can also just read it and tell you the things I like about it. : )

@rae

Hello!

I’m sorry I didn’t see you tagging me for a while. I finally started reading your story and I’m enjoying it so far, but I’m only halfway through chapter two. I have a really hard time reading the italics and long paragraphs, but I’m not giving up! I’ll give you a longer response later when I finish it.

Thanks for tagging me. Sorry I…[Read more]

@hybridlore

Right, like the internal resolution vs the outward resolution. Sooo, I sort of feel like Katrin doesn’t exactly have her own huge goal. It’s more she’s trying to survive and protect her brother, but I’ve lately realized that she also holds a grudge against the administrators for a few reasons, mostly just because of the living conditi…

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Oh and as long as the rest  of your book is unique it’s alright to have a stereotypical ending. It’s when your book has a love triangle, America as a setting, and rebels taking down the government. If you can add one factor to really mix it up and make it something totally new, it won’t be considered stereotypical (Is it set in England for a…[Read more]

@hybridlore

Oof that’s a hard one XD

For a single novel, I think you do need a defining ending.

Something I have heard about in my research about plots is that there’s two separate goals your character has to reach. One of them is said and known about, such as defeating the government, the other is never mentioned but obvious to the reader.…[Read more]