Charityanne

Part 3:

However, I think the reveal would be a lot more powerful if you set us up for it earlier on in the chapter. I didn’t know before hand that he always had his helmet on. I kinda just imagined him as a normal dude with a normal human face. I think including a description of him, his outfit, and especially his helmet, and then mentioning t…[Read more]

Part 2:

Those eyes had looked straight into his own, those black pupils, red irises and… red sclerae. How could someone of man and elven lineage have such eyes?

This is a really cool reveal that I did not see coming. Now Nahim has suddenly become a lot more interesting and I’m excited to learn more about him.

Ughhh the part 2 won’t post

Part 2:

Those eyes had looked straight into his own, those black pupils, red irises and… red sclerae. How could someone of man and elven lineage have such eyes?

This is a really cool reveal that I did not see coming. Now Nahim has suddenly become a lot more interesting and I’m excited to learn more about him.

However, I think the reveal wou…[Read more]

@rae

Um this post isn’t working so I’m going to send it in two parts to see if that helps.

Part 1:

I’m still only halfway through chapter two. Haven’t really found the time to read the whole thing though. But anyway here’s some thoughts:

This chapter is a lot easier to read for me since it’s no longer in italics and I hope you keep writing it…[Read more]

@rea

I’m still only halfway through chapter two. Haven’t really found the time to read the whole thing though. But anyway here’s some thoughts:

This chapter is a lot easier to read for me since it’s no longer in italics and I hope you keep writing it that way. There’s obviously nothing wrong with using italics. It kinda looks cooler, actually.…[Read more]

@fernweh_grace

Finally finished reading! I’m loving the characters. That last one with the toad was adorable.

@freedomwriter76

oh it’s leoooo

yes facial hair is a hassle to draw 🤣 hey good practice though?

@freedomwriter76

I put it in as my cover photo and it looks AWESOME!!! Thanks!

I had to take a screensnip of the part I wanted because it auto cropped it to the part with the bloody hand and it looked rather gruesome XD

@freedomwriter76

Woah I love it! My boi Ruebsy!!

Also I need to save that bottom left crying drawing for reference XD I have a hard time finding good poses for people crying because if you try to look them up it’s just a bunch of weird stock photos of people making sad faces 🤣

@freedomwriter76

Thank you so much!! So gald you like him! His face actually looks better in person, but the light is glaring in the picture XD

@freedomwriter76

Yw!

Also, I finished watching civil war! It was really good, but tbh I think spidey didn’t fit the tone ;(

The final battle was epic

Do you think I should go straight to the infinity saga, or is it necessary to watch avengers 1 and age of ultron first? I know their basic plot but haven’t seen them.

@rae

Thank you! 🙂

@loopylin

Thanks!

Hobie is really cool. 🙂

@rae

Draw whatever you like! I really like to make fanart personally.

@euodia-vision

I’m trying to say that mineralizedwritings I LOVE the bucky drawing and want to know how in the world you made that armor so realistic!

Thank you so much!

I think the main thing is just noticing where the light hits. It’s kinda leathery, so the tiny folds that collect near the edging of each piece have these kind of triangle h…[Read more]

That’s annoying

Oh wait nvm

@euodia-vision Are you trying to send a picture?

@whalekeeper

Hugo!! Yay!

He wasn’t the character I was talking about but I’m really excited anyway XD

I kinda wanna add Dante and Rina too… but then I’d have a total of seven characters running around :/