Charis

@rochellaine  Oh!  So my director adapted the story of Cinderella for the stage (she wrote the script) and she also wrote the songs since it’s a musical.  There were a few changes made to the story like Ella’s dead mother comes back and transforms her dress, instead of a fairy-godmother.  Things like that.  🙂 😉

@skredder The sequel of my fantasy series.  🙂  And I actually have to go eat dinner now because I have to leave.  (I have play performances for a show of Cinderella every night this week…)  Talk to you later!

@skredder @rochellaine I’m joining for a limited amount of time… 🙂

@that_writer_girl_99  Thanks for the feedback…very helpful!

@ariel-ashira  YESS!!! Oh, I’m so glad you liked it!

@daughteroftheking  Thank you kindly.  And yes, those are some good points.  *strokes chin*

@epicaddie2  Yep, I think I figured it out now!  Thanks muchly.  🙂

@catwing and @valtmy  Thank you both!

@skredder  Thanks so much.  ❤️

@ariel-ashira  Thank you!

@rochellaine  Thanks, friend!  And yeah, I am playing Ella in Cinderella.  🙂  It’s probably the most challenging role I’ve ever done.

@valtmy @rochellaine @skredder @seekjustice @ethryndal

Hey, guys.  Two things: 1) Could you keep me in your prayers this week?  I have practice late every night for a play that I’m in and performances Thursday—Saturday.  Please pray that I can stay on top of schoolwork and everything despite being dead tired.

2) My aunt and uncle have been in c…[Read more]

Welp, I’m signing off now. got 707 words written.

@ariel-ashira, thank you

@ethryndal, you’re back!

@rochellaine, still praying. keep us updated

hey y’all, I have a prayer request.

A friend of mine is in a difficult situation with her home life. I don’t have permission to go into detail, but it is really hard for her and her family. So if y’all could pray for protection and reconciliation for her, it would be great.

@filewriterbase13x, MORE KPA!!!!! Fantastic!

I personally think that short beginnings are the best. (if written well which this was)

@daeus, don’t have time to read it right now, got some major writing that needs to be done *glances at self imposed deadline* but I shall defiantly look at it later. thanks for taking the time to write it.

@jenwriter17, thanks for tagging me

@seekjustice, I put the first three chapters on here for people to read/critique.

Critique for my Kinda Sorta Fantasy Novel

See ya. I probably will have to leave in about 30-40 minutes, but hopefully I will be back later tonight (afternoon for you)

@seekjustice, I didn’t set a timer either. I just used the clock on the computer.

I’m working on Decisions.

@ariel-ashira, glad I’m able to help at least one person