Catwing

@jenwriter17 It’s just part, but yay! Now I have to rewrite entire chapters and add some action. *nods* My book needs more action toward the beginning.
Thanks!

@rochellaine @seekjustice @valtmy @dekreel I’ll be doing some writing/rewriting in a few minutes. So I’m here. 🙂

@Rochellaine Also the dwarves brought him to the coffin right?

@seekjustice I can make more points tomorrow.

@jenwriter17 @valtmy @alia I am going to sleep. Good night. I finished this edit stage! *throws feathers* Rewriting tomorrow. ^.^

@alia How could I forget Snow White? But I can’t remember her encounter with the prince…

@Alia I got as far as him taking them flying and them being terribly hungry and he would wander off literally forgetting they existed. It was ruining the movie for me.
I guess the movie version is still a bit strange.

As I recall…
Not love at first sight ~ Belle(Beauty and the Beast [old and new]), Rapunzel, Jasmine? (Aladdin. But he may have loved her at first sight I think), Anna (Frozen), Giselle (Enchanted),
Love at first sight ~ Cinderella, Ariel (Little Mermaid),
I don’t remember… Aurora (Sleeping Beauty),
There’s probably a few missing… Who am I missing…

@seekjustice *grins* Of course. (But isn’t that a chore? ;P)
I only read part of Peter Pan recently and I read fairy books when I was younger… I got distracted and had to return Peter Pan. I didn’t really care for it. (So the large fay huh?)
You do kill off quite a few characters…

@Seekjustice I think I have seen all of them, except Mulan and Moana. I suppose there is good and bad in them. I don’t think they have negatively affected me… Tinker Bell on the other hand. If you don’t believe in fairies, your fairy dies. To cure a fairy, say I believe in fairies a few times. When I wasn’t sure if fairies existed or not I…[Read more]

@rochellaine They are adorable. 😉 (Hope you hand is better soon)
Currently they are 7 & 9 months (You may think of what I thought when I was thinking about that. XP), a doeling and a wether.
They’re fun. One was rubbing her head against my hand. If I can teach her to do it on cue… Fist/face bump! 😛
But they are not a horse… ;P
I am immune…[Read more]

@alia Thank you.
Looking through the comments on my book. But I’m leaving the ones where I’m going to have to do a good bit of editing, because after I finish doing these comments I’m going to rewrite some things. Delete chapters, add chapters, change the POV of a chapter. 😉
What about you?

@alia Hi I didn’t see you there until just now.
Indeed I have. Do you like my Catwing Guard armor?

@seekjustice @rochellaine @dekreel @valtmy @jenwriter17 I’m doing some more comment fixing. And guess what? My family got goats today. They are cute (maybe partly because they are young). 😀

@rochellaine Perhaps… But I think I’ve only killed off those five characters as far as I can remember right now. I can assure you that their deaths are part of the plot. 😉
@seekjustice Maybe I should kill some other characters to even it out. ;P

@rochellaine
I see, but…
Gary died in a car crash. A gun would not help him.
Kay’s parents (as another example of my killed characters) nearly wrecked by a truck. Her dad went to check on them and they pulled a gun on him. And there was at least three of them. I’m working on the details…
Alex’s parents had swords, but they were distracted…[Read more]

@rochellaine CC permit?

@rochellaine I messed up your tag…

@seekjustice Indeed.
He found out to much and his conscience was weighing on him. Someone decided to eliminate him.

@rocellaine oh, well. Itchy fingers. *shrug*
Too bad.

@seekjustice Whoa… and I’m just here quietly torturing my characters and half hoping I can redeem all my villainous characters (except for the one who represents Satan. Duh.), while knowing I will probably have to let someone go and not be redeemed. *sobs* But somehow it will be good… I…[Read more]

@seekjustice Yep! (I have see or read neither)
@Rochellaine Cool, my mom is kind of interested in that stuff. I find hearing about it interesting. 😉
Praying you feel better too!
@valtmy Heyo!

@seekjustice @rochellaine ‘Ello! I am editing comments! Maybe only a few days until I shall get to start rewriting! Yay! Then it will be better and I can write the sequel!

@Rochellaine Thanks!
It was pretty nice, but yes over time you can get used to changes.

@Seekjustice Indeed they do. *beams*

@seekjustice Thanks! No, it isn’t. It is for the Catwing Guard that protects the Sapphire on the Invisible Island (Hence the big blue sapphire on the helmet). The Catwing Guard is going to be in my second book, Jack, Amelia, and Chase will have to figure out how to get it without having several dozen Catwings pounce on them. So I come in, being…[Read more]