CanadaLily

I can still break the record with you guys! Just give me a specific date and I’ll come back for that time!

@linus-smallprint

Thanks!!!! (:

 I like being a sneaky time-traveller. (Huh, apparently we Canadians spell this word with two ‘l’s. Good to know.)

Ohhh that’s interesting!!!

Since I’ll be leaving KP for a bit, I won’t be asking for any more critiques but I’ll leave you the link in case you or anyone else wants to read it for funzies. XD

@whalekeeper

Funny you should mention it because I just had a complete mental breakdown…

A social situation didn’t go very well and I got some super bad thoughts about myself and was beating myself up BIG TIME cuz I feel like I blew one of my only chances to get into a friend group. UGH.

*wipes away the last of the tears and tries to stop…[Read more]

@whalekeeper @ellette-giselle

It might be that you are so used to picturing Aaron’s personality, that your sub-conscience assumes Aaron is known, and thus forgets to describe him.

YES THAT’S WHAT I WAS WONDERING TOO OH MY GOODNESS! I also relate to that XD

The fiercely loyal bit is what I find unnatural. He only met Aaron a week ago, and up till t…

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@ellette-giselle @whalekeeper

My goodness Whaley!!! You put into coherent thoughts what I’ve been trying to say this whole time XD XD I wish I could convey my thoughts as well as you lol!

I have written 63 full length novels and countless short stories… so that’s saying a lot

HOW. LITERALLY HOW. I haven’t even written ONE full novel. I’ve onl…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

I’m not attacking Aaron, I promise! That probably won’t convince you, I know how it is with your baby characters…but just know I’m only trying to help XD I love him! I just think he has so much more potential and can be even better!!!

It’s not just him crying…it’s really knowing him and having an intimate emotional c…[Read more]

@grcr

Aww that sounds rough, but I’ll be praying!!!!!!! <3

That’s sooo great and awesome!

Happy for you! <3

@keilah and GRCR

Awww really?!?! That makes me so happy! I don’t feel like they’re that good…but thanks!!!

h ttps://www.youtube.com/watch?v=B7X_-GIL5hU&t=780s

Watch this video. It really helped me develop characters!

@ellette-giselle

I wouldn’t say bland . Bland is too extreme for Aaron.

I just can’t see much of his character right now.

@ellette-giselle

I will find a way…😎😜

@grcr

heyyy girl! How are you doing?!?!

@ellette-giselle

YOU JUST ADMITTED TO A CRIME….

*pulls out handcuffs*

@theducktator

I’m down!!!

We just need more people lollll

You don’t have to do a “ship”

UM YES HE DOES

jk jk lol

@keilah-h

Aww tysm! As a new worldbuilder this means a lot 💕💕

You guys…I need to have “Does that make sense?” as my signature XD XD

@ellette-giselle

Sooo, I’ll have to see what you think, but I’ve been told by my beta readers that the first half of the book is about the situation Aaron is in, and the second half is about HIM personally. The first half sets the stage, the second half goes deep into the character. so, You’ll have to tell me what you think.

Personally, I don’t…[Read more]

I shall attempt to give advice in the best way possible. lol.

but it’s definitely out of my comfort zone!!!

Oh and about the names…

i’m soooo bad at names.

I literally just googled:

last names that mean water, plants, pain, etc.

So yeah. I know I’m a terrible worldbuilder and that should be a crime…but it works lol