CanadaLily

@smiley

HIIIIIIIII
Mileyyyyy!!!! I’ve missed youuuu!

AHHHHHHHH yayyyyy!!!!

@grcr

YESSSSS!!!

Okay sounds good!!!!! Are you still writing your story? you should resend me the link, I’ve always loved your story! <3

OH! Ellette, you’re gonna be so happy… ( @theducktator and @grcr might also want to know this)

I have a recent development…

Cass is no longer going to be playing with Sef’s feelings.

He’s officially a nice guy again hahaha

Since Lilitu and Sef are separated for a good chunk of the book, there’s no opportunity for this to happen. Cass is…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle @anyone-else

Next chapter!!!

What am I doing?

Frustration built up in Lilitu’s chest until he wanted to scream.

But he couldn’t scream….or else Adar would find him.

Cass isn’t going to come bail you out this time, he pressed his lips together in a thin line. You have to figure it out yourself.

He tried to find a comfort…

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@ellette-giselle

I will!!!

@ellette-giselle

Okay great!!! hahaha!

Really??? That makes me really happy!!!! Thank you!!!! <3

Speaking of Eloy, I just wrote a funny Eloy scene (it’s kind of cheesy I think, but I’m going to edit it later.) I’ll post it in a little bit!!!

@ellette-giselle @jonas (let me know if I’m tagging you too much, I know you’re probably busy!!!!) this goes for anyone else too, please let me know if you’d like me to stop tagging you lol @highscribeofaetherium @grcr @anyone-else

Here’s a second half of the Lilitu chapter:

(Again, this is unedited so this won’t be the finished product, this is…[Read more]

@highscribeofaetherium

First of all, I don’t know if you had planned for Lilitu to have any more lasting injuries than some cuts and bruises, but from the level of beating he’s just received, he’s likely to have some cracked or broken ribs (which could damage internal organs), and/or a concussion. And if he was knocked out/unconscious for long…

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@keilah-h

I agree!!!

WHATTTTT

twenty seven!!!!

that’s crazy!

@keilah-h

The beginning has changed SO. MUCH.

The storyline/plot is pretty similar, but it’s definitely different…

@ellette-giselle

YAYYYYY

I love it when you give me critiques because you literally always help me, whether telling me things I need to change or what I’m doing well, no matter what it is it always builds me up in the end, I appreciate you so much girl <3

@ellette-giselle @highscribeofaetherium @grcr @theducktator @whalekeeper @rae @anyone-else

Here’s another unedited scene…

This is like the third chapter I think:

Lilitu, in fact, was not dead.

Though at the moment, he wished he were.

And if he couldn’t bring himself to get off the ground and keep running for his life, he would be.

His f…

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@theducktator

AHHHHHH I knowwww!!!!

Aw yeah :/ she just needs a hug 🥺🥺🥺🥺

@theshadow

It was so good!!!!!!!!!!!!!

@keilah-h

Sammmmeeee!!!!

And thank you so much!!!!

I agree with you so much on that hahaha! Like “I’m sorrry this is probably so cringe but I love it!!!”

@ESTHER-C
YAYYYYYY

@anyone-else-also-joining

I CAN’T WAIT I SIGNED UP!!!!!!!!!!!

@theducktator

I’ve looked into joining it before….Idk if you’ve seen this website or not but if not here you go:

https://theyoungwriter.com/crazy-writing-week

It explains a little bit more!!!!

I’m going to do it this year!!! Idk if its my impulsive adhd kicking in or what but yeahhhh hahahaha

anyone wanna try it for the first time with me??…[Read more]

@highscribeofaetherium

I agree…it did get a little info dumpy lol

Again it isn’t edited…and the details about Andromeda are mostly in the prologue and will be revealed little by little in later chapters (if everything stays according to plan hahaha!)

@keilah-h

I know…me too…I feel like when I started it when she was little, it felt…[Read more]

I don’t know how many snowballs I even have…but here’s 161 words:

She didn’t want to wake up.

Closing her eyes, turning her face into her pillow and pulling the blanket over her head, she desperately wanted this to be a dream, wanted to go back to sleep and pretend nothing was wrong.

But Aubrielle persisted, the worry and unease in her voice c…

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@ellette-giselle @grcr

Okay thank you guys!!! <33