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Ruee Hamster Huey replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 months ago
YES! Dramatic entrances are the best!
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Ruee Hamster Huey replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 months ago
And you’re more than welcome to get back in this rp…just beware A LOT has happened.
And it’s sometime in the afternoon of the day before the dance…last I checked.
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Ruee Hamster Huey replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 months ago
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 months ago
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MineralizedWritings replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 1 month ago
Np don’t worry about it! Just wanted to let you know : )
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MineralizedWritings replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 1 year, 1 month ago
I get that online communication is kinda hard! Generally I think what we do here is only offer negative feedback if the person asked for it, and it’s constructive. For instance, if I posted a drawing saying, ‘How could I improve this?’ then you would be totally encouraged to reply with something like, ‘I think the eyes are to small, and…[Read more]
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MineralizedWritings replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 1 year, 1 month ago
I hope yall don’t mind me busting in here, but I feel like some sort of miscommunication happened and I couldn’t just stand by lol…
*looks back at page 123*
YIKES THAT’S A VERY–
Wait, that’s supposed to be Hugo? To be frank, it looks like a girl. Disturbingly so. Sorry, honesty. Also looks just a little creepy. Just gut react…
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whaley replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 1 year, 1 month ago
@loopylin @highscribeofaetherium @mineralizedwritings Thank you!! I have really improved and am still improving, and it makes me happy 🙂
First of all, thank you. Second, Hugo looks like a girl for a couple reasons; one, he’s purposefully contrasting a group of people, two, I wasn’t really figuring him out, okay?!? I was trying a new…[Read more]
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whaley replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 1 year, 1 month ago
And I did this yesterday!! I feel so much more confident in my own skill 🔥@loopylin @godlyfantasy12 @rae @lydibug @mineralizedwritings @freedomwriter76 @calyhuge @highscribeofaetherium @anyone
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Ruee Hamster Huey posted an update 1 year, 1 month ago
@highscribeofaetherium @freedomwriter76 @esther-c @jonas @calyhuge @beth-torres @grcr @smiley @whalekeeper @loopylin @thearcaneaxiom @savannah_grace2009 @trailblazer @acancello @keilah-h @princesachronicle22 @idk
I just got a great idea, but I’m not sure if it is so great.
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Ruee Hamster Huey replied to the topic Howdy! in the forum Start HERE 1 year, 1 month ago
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Ruee Hamster Huey replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 1 month ago
Nahim
Nahim looked around him, looking for those who needed help the most. He pressed his fingers to his side, and red liquid flowed over them. He winced, and his vision blurred, but he wanted to keep going. He saw Fennin, and Nora, fighting some black cloak floating around with eyes and a couple soldiers ( @calyhuge you can rp that part…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 1 month ago
OH! And I have Hallie and Easton who I have not RPed for yet but will do so now…
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Easton
“So, are you glad you came? You seem very confident with that waltz now.”
“Yep!” Hallie flashed him her signature smile. “I’m glad you came along.”
Easton bobbed his head in a small laugh. “Anytime. But…” he peered over the heads of students. “Looks lik…[Read more]
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Dark Castle (RP) in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 2 months ago
Okay! I still haven’t continued us yet, so nothing is happening anyway.
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 2 months ago
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whaley replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 2 months ago
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Ruee Hamster Huey replied to the topic A Place to share/write whatever we’re working on: Worldbuilding, plot, etc in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 2 months ago
@scoutfinch180 @savannah_grace2009 @jonas @highscribeofaetherium @freedomwriter76 @smiley @whalekeeper @loopylin @esther-c @calyhuge (idk what I’m doing I’m just typing tags, if you can tell XD) you may ignore
So, this is a short story i just revised after a year of leaving it in it’s awfulness. A couple spots are giving me trouble, so I’m gonna…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 2 months ago
@calyhuge @beth-torres @savannah_grace2009 @trailblazer @acancello @rae @jonas @highscribeofaetherium
Snake
The stone-holding dragon was still on his tail, spitting that dangerous venom. Snake’s wing and shoulder started to ache where he’d been slashed…and he’d forgotten about that lizard thing’s bite wound. It had no lasting effects from w…[Read more]
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 2 months ago
Are you going to RP for Zahlin and/or Vethe? (I think one of @calyhuge’s characters is going to mistakenly free Vethe.)
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Trailblazer replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 2 months ago
@jonas @rae @highscribeofaetherium @calyhuge @savannah_grace2009 @beth-torres @I’m-sure-I-missed-someone
Kari
As chaos ensued, Kari drew her sword. She knew she’d probably have to use it at some point, but now, in the heat of the moment, she wondered if she would be good enough to stay alive. Minimal practice had given her the ability to defend…[Read more]
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I think that is awesome! I don’t have any theological problems with that. I tend to avoid doing robots and stuff, because I don’t believe that such a creation would have a soul, and I would usually rather avoid writing about those topics. I haven’t thought about how that would extend to a human created in a lab. There’s nothing biological about a…[Read more]
*either not dither
I don’t like to play with sentient and rational robots, honestly those creep me out. The idea of Alpha being originally a a robot made out of flesh came from me just thinking about him. It was really weird, I was talking as Alpha to his best friend Terry and it just spilled out. I was making it up as I went, but it sounded like it was a set piece…[Read more]
That makes sense to me. I think we’re pretty much on the same page.
I haven’t thought about it in depth, but from first glance, I don’t have a problem with it either. I guess it would depend also on how he was created. Did they take human DNA to create him? If that’s the case, then I think he would have a soul just like any other person, because the rest of us are created with human DNA, even though the process of…[Read more]
He was made from mixed DNA, to give him the traits Grathmere wanted. I believe most likely, he was made the weird 3D printer way at first, and developed from there.
He was actually interestingly enough, not made to have any moral compass. He was supposed to be a heartless assassin that did what Grathmere wished. He’d have limited free will, but…[Read more]
I think that’s a really good idea. I don’t find any theological issues with it. Er, I don’t really have any other comments ATM 😅
@rae
I like the idea! I think it makes sense that he would be without breath at first, and I think that God could definitely give him a soul if He chose
Ooh, ok. So I see where your doubts are coming from. Here’s my opinion…
I believe that as soon as a baby is conceived in the womb, he (referring to either gender in this case) is a human being with a soul that is loved by God. Obviously he cannot physically breathe yet because he’s only a few cells. But when he is born, God is ultimately the O…[Read more]
@rae
I really like this idea!!!
I think this is a fun idea. I don’t think there’s any theological problems. Is this your fantasy, or something else? If the first, then I wouldn’t think theological and scientific problems should be your primary concern, because what you say goes. Even if your more into hard worldbuilding, you can build up a distinct theological system that is…[Read more]
@thearcaneaxiom Yeah, this is in my sci-fi/fantasy Galaxy. Alpha is one of my main charries.
I don’t think this is too weird an idea for a sci-fi universe. It’s basically like God put literal, actual life in a body which was built, not born. Like a machine built out of flesh and bone, it was working, but it wasn’t alive quite yet. I think the way he explains it is a little strange, but that’s an explanation and can be modified a bit.
My only issue is that if his heart was going but not his breathing, he would die pretty quickly, so maybe he was effectively “dead” with neither organ working, and when they tried to “jump-start” him, his heart started but not his lungs, and then when they were confusedly trying to figure it out he started breathing.
That was a weird explanation, sorry….
It makes sense…in fact that was the way I pictured it in my mind, just Alpha sometimes says things weirdly, and leaves out parts.
I believe the term for during but still coming back to life by revival is called “clinically dead”. Not sure if Alpha falls under this or not, though…
Ok, good, it made sense…lol