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HighScribe replied to the topic Anyone interested in organizing a "writing group" over the summer? in the forum General Writing Discussions 11 months, 2 weeks ago
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whaley replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 11 months, 2 weeks ago
Barnes
Suddenly Cassius burst again. His weight shifted on the ground beside Barnes as he slumped over. His voice trembled.
How was Barnes supposed to react? The kid had made so many random declarations that this one could be just as short-lived.
“If you really are nineteen,” She said slowly, “I’m sorry for you. But you…[Read more]
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whaley replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 11 months, 2 weeks ago
Barnes
“You’re too young, and you seem against it anyway.” Barnes noted how Gabriel flinched when the cigarette burned. She put it down and crushed it on the stone. So much for a silent night watch. “How old are each of you?”
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whaley replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 11 months, 2 weeks ago
Have you ever given a charrie of yours a weird mannerism that you have yourself?
Generally speaking, I’m sure I have. I’m just not aware that they are weird mannerisms yet.
A few of my charries like to sleep in a fetal position, or curled up around a pushie or blanket. And Gabriel stretches similar to a cat. Mannerisms I sometimes hav…
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RAE replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 11 months, 2 weeks ago
Have you ever given a charrie of yours a weird mannerism that you have yourself?
A few of my charries like to sleep in a fetal position, or curled up around a pushie or blanket. And Gabriel stretches similar to a cat. Mannerisms I sometimes have.
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RAE replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 11 months, 2 weeks ago
@the_lost-journal @whalekeeper
The Protector—Gabriel
The scent of the smoke invaded Gabriel’s nostrils. It sickened him, but he remained silent, listening to Cassius’s talk about pleasure. Internally, he wondered if happiness and pleasure were different, and if they were, how were they different. A small plop sound woke him from his thoughts. H…[Read more]
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whaley replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 11 months, 2 weeks ago
Barnes
“…I’m not smoking,” Barnes said. She still held it at arm’s length. “I only lit it for the scent.”
She glanced back at Cassius, then turned back to stare at the labyrinth passageways she guarded. The exposition about pleasure irked her, but she held her tongue. He meant well.
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whaley replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 11 months, 2 weeks ago
Barnes
“I don’t care. Whatever you like to do.” Barnes pulled out a box of cigarettes and lit one of them. Instead of taking a draw on it, she held it at a distance from them and let the smell waft through the air. “ Ah. If this bothers you, at least speak then.”
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whaley replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 11 months, 2 weeks ago
Great! The tube down my nose felt a little like an alien trying to take over my mind, and they fed me a tone of questionable green food. Next month, they want me to drink radioactive fluid. I low-key love hospital visits though because the smell of hospitals is so nostalgic. I guess that’s not normal, but whatever. XD
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RAE replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 11 months, 2 weeks ago
How did the doctor visit go?
The Protector—Gabriel
Gabriel hesitated, before sitting on the stone, bringing his knees up to his chest. He tensed at the slightest noises, eyes darting to where Cassius and Leander slept. “Uh… so do you want me talk like the Protector, or like…my other persona? Or just not talk at all.”
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whaley replied to the topic Anyone interested in organizing a "writing group" over the summer? in the forum General Writing Discussions 11 months, 2 weeks ago
I am interested in theory. Thing is, I like to keep my outline secret (HUGE outliner here 😂), and I don’t like sharing large amounts of my work on forums. I’m not against getting critiques from people, it’s more a matter of controlling who has access to my writing.
If my dad helps me set up an account on a secure writing software, something I can…[Read more]
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whaley replied to the topic Prayer Requests for Anyone in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 11 months, 2 weeks ago
I survived ENT! 🙂 I suspected my vasovagal syncope would trigger, but it didn’t, and that was a good thing.
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whaley replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 11 months, 2 weeks ago
Selfish because she keeps everything to herself XD
Barnes
Cassius and Leander, one after the other, lay down on the moss. Night had not fully fallen yet, and the other adventures in the labyrinth surely still walked around – but both boys seemed tired from the walk. Their emotional outbursts had not helped their energy…[Read more]
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RAE replied to the topic Anyone interested in organizing a "writing group" over the summer? in the forum General Writing Discussions 11 months, 2 weeks ago
I’ll see if I have time. I have rowing to do, plus I’m looking into getting a job this summer as well as taking the first steps to getting my driver’s permit since I’m turning 16 end of July and would like to get my permit as soon as possible. If I have time, I’d be interested!
Not sure what I’d write yet though…
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HighScribe replied to the topic Anyone interested in organizing a "writing group" over the summer? in the forum General Writing Discussions 11 months, 2 weeks ago
I will join if other people are interested!
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Worth All the World in the forum Novel Critique Requests 11 months, 2 weeks ago
Hiiii Esther! I just saw this!!!
I have a critique for Easton’s character arc.You’ve been having him do all these things for Tyler, and having him trying to encourage Tyler.
Do you mean to have him come off as kind of distant and cold? like Shadow said, he feels really impersonal.
What I mean is, in your book are you trying to show…[Read more]
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whaley replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 11 months, 2 weeks ago
I never color the original, I like to keep a backup.
That’s the true advice.
YES!!! DO!!!
I’ll see to finishing it when I get home, then. XD
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whaley replied to the topic Character Interviews in the forum Characters 11 months, 2 weeks ago
(Going back to your character)
My father and I have had multiple pitched arguments about topics that I do not recall, but marriage is the only continuing one at the moment. I am however, a bit concerned about several of his affairs that are potentially traitorous and scandalous, but I fear what he would do if he learned that I knew…
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whaley replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 11 months, 3 weeks ago
I have a drawing of young Barnes and I might post it tomorrow or something.
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whaley replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 11 months, 3 weeks ago
Well, good luck!! And if it turns out badly, that doesn’t mean you’re a bad artist. <3
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