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RAE replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 months, 2 weeks ago
Gabriel
Gabriel nodded, though he would prefer she slept more. “I assume we should continue then.” Gabriel stooped down and picked up a loose piece of twine he had missed on the floor from his earlier escapade. “I think I collected all your little things when you fell…Are you sure you don’t want to rest more? We aren’t going to…[Read more]
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whaley replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 months, 2 weeks ago
Lucille
Lucy thought about it. She swung off the bed and began rearranging the quilts and coverlet. “I’m awake now.” -
RAE replied to the topic Help again. This time with Baron in the forum Questions and Support 4 months, 2 weeks ago
XD But actually, in my memory (until you just recapped it) he was going to turn himself in and then they were attacked and he was killed protecting Jenna (?) and her family. I like that ending because Baron gave his life for someone instead of taking life…. but then that is also cliche for a redemption story (and cliche is not a…
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RAE replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 months, 2 weeks ago
Gabriel Mai
“I…don’t hear a man’s voice. At least, I don’t think so. It’d have to be a strange one.” He shook his head. “It doesn’t matter. Try to sleep again if you can.”
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whaley replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 months, 2 weeks ago
Lucille
“I saw a man.” She spoke quieter than she intended, but struggled to turn up her voice’s volume. “He didn’t have a mouth, Gabriel, and now he’s gone. So how are you hearin’ him?”
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RAE replied to the topic Prayer Requests for Anyone in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 4 months, 2 weeks ago
A few things:
1. I have not collapsed or needed to go to the ER, and my doctor said that she’s happy to see I’m apparently improving faster than normal which she hoped. Still feels like forever, but recovery usually takes 2-4 years, so I guess I’m doing okay.
2. While that’s not a problem, my eating habits are. I don’t usually eat much, I don’t…[Read more]
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RAE replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 months, 2 weeks ago
Gabriel
“Him?” The voices in Gabriel’s head sounded like many, their voices shrill like a withered banshee spirits, groping at his mind. “Are you hearing voices as well?” He hoped she wasn’t. He hated the voices. Every moment he felt himself wanting more and more to shout at them, even though he knew it would be in vain. He wanted…[Read more]
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whaley posted an update 4 months, 2 weeks ago
I’ve accidentally gone to bed with my handsome blue trench coat on and I’m sorely tempted to fall asleep in it and make it a routine. You’re telling me I can be comfortable and stylish in bed? 💅
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whaley replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 months, 2 weeks ago
Gabriel: *Hears voices*
Lucy: *Wacky nightmares*
Mel: *Sleeps with ducks*
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whaley replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 months, 2 weeks ago
Keep drawing while you can!
Yes she does
Lucille
Lucy pointed at the empty place. Then, confused, she put her hand down. “I – I’ve got a… Are you hearing him?”
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RAE replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 months, 2 weeks ago
Jealous. I’m in an art slump. Not happy with anything I draw, which might mean I’m on the cusp of a breakthrough…? But not counting on it.
Oof, yeah. I get that. I had that for a literal year once, then I started drawing again, and now I’ve been off and on. I’ll draw fervently for like a week or two usually, then hit art block for a…[Read more]
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whaley replied to the topic Help again. This time with Baron in the forum Questions and Support 4 months, 2 weeks ago
It depends on what a “slap on the face” is. I think a slap on the face is a betrayal of the reader, or unfairly maximizing/minimizing something to manipulate reader emotion, or wasting the reader’s time.
This would be a betrayal if the arc was about survival or hinged on Baron’s survival. But his arc seems entirely spiritual. He’s concluded…[Read more]
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whaley replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 months, 2 weeks ago
Funnily enough, I fell asleep XD.
Good!
My work is done, I got my Negative argument all formulated, now it’s just doing it tomorrow without a panic attack.
Is this Lincoln-Douglas or policy?
Now that that’s done, I’m chilling and redrawing Baron artwork.
Jealous. I’m in an art slump. Not happy with anything I draw, which might mean I’m on…[Read more]
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whaley replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 months, 2 weeks ago
Lucille
The headless man lifted a hand. His fingers trembled feebly as he held them up to his neck, as if trying to see them. He jerked back as he realized his eyes were gone.
“Lucy, it’s okay.”
Lucy snapped free of paralysis. The figure’s ashy skin peeled away, like petals wrinkling into brown dust, and he vanished from the foot of her b…[Read more]
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RAE replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 months, 2 weeks ago
They’ve had good a mock trial and some awesome debate issues in the past (like arguing the death penalty, but you can’t bring in the Bible, only from a logos, ethos, and pathos standpoint)
Sounds good!
How is your work going? I think I had the same debate topic once, not sure. I’m sorry it’s not a pleasant task for you…
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RAE replied to the topic Help again. This time with Baron in the forum Questions and Support 4 months, 2 weeks ago
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RAE started the topic Help again. This time with Baron in the forum Questions and Support 4 months, 2 weeks ago
If you haven’t read the Baron Chronicles and don’t want a huge spoiler, please don’t read.
So, for those who have read the Baron Chronicles, quick recap. Baron is an assassin who turns away from being an assassin to, originally, find some kind of good in the world to do, feeling beyond forgiveness. Obviously, he does end up getting saved.
But…[Read more]
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whaley replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 months, 2 weeks ago
I really should have replied earlier, I’m sorry.
You’re fine! I was not up last night and I’m replying rather late now; it’s not a big deal for you to do the same.
How is your work going? I think I had the same debate topic once, not sure. I’m sorry it’s not a pleasant task for you. Also girl, late night roleplaying is fun but you need to…[Read more]
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RAE replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 months, 2 weeks ago
I really should have replied earlier, I’m sorry. I should be available now for a while if you’re having a night owl night, because I have a debate due this Wednesday and am not prepared really at all. Our resolution is “is Civil Disobedience in a democracy morally correct?” And um…I find it to be their attempt to make us learn…[Read more]
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whaley replied to the topic The Baron Chronicles in the forum Short Story Critiques 4 months, 2 weeks ago
That looks really good!! It looks like a real cover I might find, maybe in the graphic novel section of the library. The gold lettering contrasts nicely with the cool colors. I’ve mentioned before that the lighting in that piece is great.
This is unrelated to the art, but I just realized I didn’t help much with Baron Chronicles even though…[Read more]
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You have a trench coat? That’s awesome.
I got one for my birthday!