calyhuge

Actually I haven’t seen any story use objectification as the protagonist’s flaw, that would be kind of cool. Lots of rough growth, but cool.

@ellette-giselle

Ohh *sneaks in* this is the marriage story right? If you post a section where the characters explain why marriage is banned versus discouraged, I’d like to read it. I liked the first scene you shared too.

Also I had to meme-ify this 😅

But no one’s perfect at the beginning of a book, it’s a good story idea to see someone grow…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

No, I didn’t do this one.

Y’all’s drawings look great, though.

Okay cool

I just realized several people owe Marcel or want to say sorry for something. I tried to even it out with the demon fight, but I don’t think this is ever going to stop unless he stops doing things for other people. 😂

@loopylin

Hehehehe, repressed romantic emotions.

@rae @theshadow

Okay Shadow, I’m not going to move after this until you’re good to go. 🙂

Barnes

“Good,” she replied to Tenz.

Hugo began to stir. He stretched, and sat up, casually tracing the hearth with the tip of his foot. He reminded Barnes of a stray cat who used to haunt her front porch – grateful for the warmth, but undeniably exploiting…[Read more]

@rae

Good choice.

@theshadow

Awesome, thank you! *Sees the cookie box is already empty* *Refills it with caramel popcorn*

It’s difficult to make this scene clear, because it is confusing from the character’s perspective. He is supposed to not know why this is happening. So… yeah. XD

@koshka @ellette-giselle and maybe? @raxforge

I’m confused, are we still in the basement or is something happening?

@theducktator

XD

I will not be doing this challenge

@whalekeeper

Barnes “disappeared” but she’s actually close by, getting something to cheer him up. Probably a bag of baseballs.

Okay, that makes sense

You either took snickerdoodle, or white chocolate macadamia nut.

White chocolate macadamia nut? Never had that. And I’ve only had snickerdoodles once before. Hmmm hard desicion…I’ll take the white…[Read more]

@loopylin @rae @freed_and_redeemed

Awesome, thank you all <3

Barnes “disappeared” but she’s actually close by, getting something to cheer him up. Probably a bag of baseballs.

For someone that hasn’t been through that, I will be honest in saying that it took me a moment or two to kinda figure out what was going on

Good to know. Since I was just w…[Read more]

@theshadow @whalekeeper

Tenz & Reid

“…Now we can turn to conversation.”

Tenz looked up at her. “You’re a good cook! Omi never could cook like you!” Tenz smiled at Barnes, his legs swinging under the table. His shoes scraped against the stone.

Reid glanced worriedly back at the sleeping form by the fire.

@loopylin

WAIT…did Fel just say what I think she did?! SHE DID! I seriously had to give it a second read!!!!

Woah…

That was freaky…

I’ve never had that happen to me exactly, but I think I felt what Sebster Gangster felt. The shock, the confusion, the panic. If that’s what you want, you did good Whaley 🙂

I understand you get your drive from not sharing too much and making us go wild when you do share stuff but you really should post more stuff.…[Read more]

oh right, tags.

@mineralizedwritings @loopylin @freed_and_redeemed @rae @honestlyidontknowwhowantstoseethis

…I have actually never had a smore so…I am learning with the charries XD

@theshadow @kielah-h @theducktator @princesachronicle22 @kyronthearcanin

Callyn

Evelyn slid a marshmallow on Callum’s stick for him, perfectly centering it. “It should cook evenly that way, right?”

Callum shrugged. “This…squishy white-thingy whatever it…[Read more]

@Andrew

can you tag people, I hate tagging.

Sure!

@jonas @highscribeofaetherium @ellette-giselle @theducktator @linus-smallprint @loopylin @whalekeeper @the_lost-journal POEM!!!!!! ↑↑↑

@theshadow

Looks like Percival has pride issues XD

@rae

Barnes

Reid used Rowan’s cloak to prop up the sleeping boy’s head. The group then ate in silence, the sizzle of meat singing to keep them company.

“…Now we can turn to conversation,” Barnes remarked.

Just don’t expect me to start it.

She took her own bowl of food and set it to the…[Read more]