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@liberty and @everyone

Is there anything specific you want us looking for?

I’m not sure….

I’m just wanting to know if the plot makes sense at all, or if it’s all over the place.

In other drafts, I used to just throw the characters at you, but now I’m trying to establish them more distinctly.

So basically…I just want to know if all the…[Read more]

@hybridlore

Aw thank you so much girl <3 that means a lot!!!!!!!!!!!

And don’t worry about it!!!!! If you can, yeah, just let me know!

@keilah-h

As for the confusing aspect? Welp, if we’re talking the debacle with the Administrator, blame the original writers for any confusion, not me (trust me, I had to read through it like twice to write it properly, so you’re not the only one). The only places I’d be to blame are:

Oh, okay. The parts you added were actually my favorite and p…[Read more]

I had to share this message I got from my grandma this evening.

…Their house is down the street from us. 🤣🤣 My grandmother lives for socializing.

@keilah-h

Okay!!!

Sounds good!!!!!!

@whalekeeper

I actually love that Liv is younger but thought to herself that Aubrielle needs the resources more. It’s only a little contrast (to the ‘save the resources for the youngest’ trope) but does a lot to show her personality.

Aww thanks!!! That means a lot <3

Yeah Liv’s pretty sweet!!!! I love her so muchhhh

@keilah-h

Yes I’d read it!!!!!!!

@keilah-h

Wow you do read fast!!!!!!!!!!

XDXD

What did you think???

@theducktator

Sounds good!

@hybridlore

😊 *Chucks the whole bag of glitter into your cup, spilling it everywhere*

@hybridlore

Glitter in our tea?! Bleh! 😝

It’s okay, it’s edible glitter!! ✨ (Such things exist)

@hybridlore @keilah-h @linus-smallprint

Thank you all for trying to help with my project! When I asked the question, I was still trying to verbalize what kind of ‘in-between genre’ this is, and I think I know what to aim for now. All the appreciation to you! *Throws confetti in your faces* *Throws glitter into your tea*

@savannah_grace2009

I actually love that Liv is younger but thought to herself that Aubrielle needs the resources more. It’s only a little contrast (to the ‘save the resources for the youngest’ trope) but does a lot to show her personality.

@rae

Yep, yw! And don’t be afraid to keep tagging me for stuff.

@rae

Yep, yw! And don’t be afraid to keep tagging me for stuff.

@esther-c

Don’t get your hopes up girl! Ellette kills approximately every character who ever existed 🤣🤣

@esther-c

😂😂🤣

@esther-c

Okay, end of February it is!!!! XDXD

@savannah_grace2009

Ok, sounds good!

@liberty @jonas @highscribeofatherium @linus-smallprint @ellette-giselle

Thanks everyone!!!

You guys can use the link on my profile to read it, and then post any comments here, if that works?

@esther-c

What’s a reasonable deadline? There’s 19 chapters as of now, with more to come lol

It depends on how fast you can read XDXD

@esther-c

Ahhh that’s so funny lol

Livia

“Thanks,” she exhaled hard. “Sorry, I didn’t mean to dump all this on you. But yeah, that’s why I’ve been acting weird.”

@keilah-h

He’s still a character of Wond, but otherwise he’s unrelated to my other stories.

@savannah_grace2009

Yes, I’d love to. I’m not great at suggestions/critique, but I’ll do what I can to help.